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Published: 2004-01-04 03:23:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 286; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 96
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Just trying a simple drawing but what turned out wasn't what I expected
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I see two bad things: his legs and the smoke/cloud thing.
The only thing about the legs is that when they connect to the abdomen, it looks like half his crotch is missing. Try lowering the crotch and/or widening the top half of the thighs.
Now the smoke thing. Well, now that I take a second look at it, maybe if it tapered off and dissappeared towards the top of the pic, it might look a little better. Then again it might not be smoke so I'll just shut up now
Nevertheless, a good piece.
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Thank you
p.s the smoke are actually clouds.
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