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point for Azureus, please?
aaaand another cliffhangers *SHOT*
this is Kai's last exam in AoH QAQ/ she has to choose which one she has to save between people in school, clinic, or village. the three places are under enemy's attack and the students have to choose only 1 place
do you have an idea which area will Kai choose? XD
and can you guess what Earth said to her? *SHOT*
a little explanation about Kai's parents
Kai's mom is a shaman, mostly as a mediator, sometimes she only talks to the spirit, or let the spirit possesses her. however still, it is dangerous, this job may risk her life, or people might see her as an insane person.
and the past story about his father...there's a woman named Pandora, a woman who wanted to create her forces to seize a throne of a Kingdom and ruled the continent, to make the continent better (according to her version). To start up, she began to recruit her underlings, and she planned to recruit Kai's father as she knew that he has a powerful strength. Kai's father refused, but Pandora still tried to persuade him. Knowing this, he afraid that Pandora soon would know his family's whereabouts and make them as hostages, so he chose to leave his family (especially his daughter).
A few years later, Kai and her mother received a letter from a relative that he saw a figure of a man that looks exactly like Kai's father. They rushed there, to the relative's place, but unfortunately they didn't meet Kai's father. Kai then realized that the continent where they are were ruled by Pandora, and the guild members had to work under her, or their families will be killed, while Earth, one of the guild members, had an urge to go to search for his brothers and sisters from his race. Kai then was willing to help Earth, replacing his position and work under Pandora as a messenger, for the sake of her mother's safety too, while her father was still missing that time.
Ecchan knows a lot about Kai and her family...of course. he is one of Kai's best friend since she's a child, and he knows well with her parents too
I really want to finish this quickly OTL....part 3 will be the final one for sure
sorry for the grammatical errors
part 1: [link]
part 2: you are here
part 3: [link]
art, characters (except Pandora) (c) ~Fortranica
Jack Farron (c) =SapphireRhythm
Pandora (c) *yami-izumi
PLEASE DO NOT USE WITHOUT MY PERMISSION
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Comments: 50
SEVERITHBlackHearts [2011-06-11 12:33:51 +0000 UTC]
waah ibunya cantik yaa
aku jadi pengen nangis nih, kaya yang panel terakhir
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CatSummoner [2011-06-07 08:26:54 +0000 UTC]
uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah :hear:A
menyentuh sekaliiii~~~
--ah Jack yg tetep meluk2 sambil digigitin Elvire lucu XD
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Fortranica In reply to Bischeglie [2011-06-06 13:52:10 +0000 UTC]
ganteng kaaan? *digampar*
thank you
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Bischeglie In reply to Fortranica [2011-06-06 14:30:36 +0000 UTC]
Yue versi rambut panjang.
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Fortranica In reply to Bischeglie [2011-06-06 14:38:01 +0000 UTC]
tinggal dicat item dan dipotong pendek
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Fortranica In reply to retrozero [2011-06-06 09:06:09 +0000 UTC]
part 3 will be coming soon *SHOT*
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shiroisuisei [2011-06-05 14:57:54 +0000 UTC]
fdsfjsgdkfjskjfg wry so many cliffhangerrsssss?!??
//JUMPS OF CLIFF
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Fortranica In reply to shiroisuisei [2011-06-05 15:10:52 +0000 UTC]
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *jumps with you*
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shiroisuisei In reply to Fortranica [2011-06-05 15:15:16 +0000 UTC]
sadkjsgksjfgdjkf //tries to finish mine
I'm gonna submit them in one bundle
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SR-Soumeki [2011-06-05 11:08:23 +0000 UTC]
ELVIRE IMUT BANGEETTT~!! maauuuuu gendong Elvireee~!!!!!! digigit pun ga masalaaah~~! XDD *digampar*
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Fortranica In reply to SR-Soumeki [2011-06-05 11:35:44 +0000 UTC]
thank you
GUA JUGA MAUUU!!! *PLAKLPOK*
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SR-Soumeki In reply to Fortranica [2011-06-07 04:51:21 +0000 UTC]
HUUUU pasti fluffy bangeet~~~ <3333
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Fortranica In reply to SR-Soumeki [2011-09-08 03:57:56 +0000 UTC]
kalo jack udah boleh megang2, pasti dia kepingin bobok di badannya pas wujud elvy lg gede~
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SR-Soumeki In reply to Fortranica [2011-09-09 08:20:28 +0000 UTC]
Ga usah Jack~ Aku juga pingiiin~~~~
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takamorinki [2011-06-05 08:14:19 +0000 UTC]
you will never found my daughter or
you will never find my daughter?
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Fortranica In reply to takamorinki [2011-06-05 09:59:25 +0000 UTC]
aaah I'm confused about that one....=A=; *my grammar sucks OTL*
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takamorinki In reply to Fortranica [2011-06-05 12:02:42 +0000 UTC]
happens to everyone <3 no one is perfect
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Fortranica In reply to salamanderFLAME [2011-06-05 06:16:35 +0000 UTC]
thank you
which Kai? XD there are three little Kais XD
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salamanderFLAME In reply to Fortranica [2011-06-09 02:06:10 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome.
All of them.
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Rosecrow13 [2011-06-05 01:39:06 +0000 UTC]
Amazingly fantastic, the gramar is a little off in places, but other than that, amazing as per usual
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Fortranica In reply to Rosecrow13 [2011-06-05 06:08:29 +0000 UTC]
thank you!
can you tell me which are off? I want to fix it >u
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Rosecrow13 In reply to Fortranica [2011-06-05 20:35:37 +0000 UTC]
Okay!
#2 would sound better like this
βElvire, who belongs to your mother, has always been by your side since you were a child.β
#12 reads like Elvire might attack the mom instead of protecting her, would sound better like this
βAlthough shamans like her also need Elvireβs protection, since her job may risk her life.β
#13
Even so, she remains putting your safety above that of her own and everything else.
#14 would sound better if it was
βAs well as your father, who suddenly disappeared, so that those who seek his help by force wouldnβt find and take you hostage.β
#15 should be
βForget it. Iβm not interested in joining your forces, and youβll never find my daughter.β
#18 would sound better like this
βYou know that they love you so much, no matter how helpless you are, just as other parents are with their children. Do you know why?β
Hope that helps!
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Fortranica In reply to Cloverdeer [2011-06-05 06:08:50 +0000 UTC]
children are....
*continued to part 3*
*SHOT*
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Lunare-chan [2011-06-04 19:52:09 +0000 UTC]
You and your cliff hangersd lasjhfgadghakgj;;;;;;
Each panel is so beautifulllll~! Especially the ones of the parents. ; u ;
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Fortranica In reply to Lunare-chan [2011-06-05 06:15:39 +0000 UTC]
yes me and my cliffhangers *slapped*
thank you
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Reedpiper [2011-06-04 19:48:22 +0000 UTC]
I-its... so epic... i think im crying too...
;w;
Fortra has awesomesauce art skills ;w;
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annikath [2011-06-04 19:32:49 +0000 UTC]
I wanna know what he said!!!!!!! >.< ..... Β°____Β°
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Fortranica In reply to annikath [2011-06-04 19:44:38 +0000 UTC]
you will know what he said on part 3 later XD
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annikath In reply to Fortranica [2011-06-04 20:29:27 +0000 UTC]
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Fortranica In reply to Kera-KeraNgalam [2011-06-05 06:09:13 +0000 UTC]
betuuuul XD tp bukan cm itu ko, ada yg lain lg
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Kuro-D [2011-06-04 18:03:24 +0000 UTC]
gyaaaa tersentuh bacanya QAQ iya, emang, anak-anak itu adalah-------//cliffhangers /PLAK
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Fortranica In reply to Kuro-D [2011-06-05 06:09:45 +0000 UTC]
thank you
anak2 adalah...
*to be continued*
*PLAK*
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Kuro-D In reply to Fortranica [2011-06-05 06:41:48 +0000 UTC]
sama-samaa XDD
la-lanjutkan senpai jangan buat kami menunggu dengan penasaran /plak
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Darkrai-chu [2011-06-04 17:55:46 +0000 UTC]
LOVING it but oh man the cliffhanger is really making me wonder D:
Wonderful work on this!! I really love the expressions and artwork. Especially the expressions of Elvire!
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Fortranica In reply to Darkrai-chu [2011-06-05 06:10:20 +0000 UTC]
thank you
lol that's what the cliffhangers is, so that people will start wondering *SHOT*
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