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Published: 2015-03-07 10:08:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 2378; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 0
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Crystal Tales: Velala Vela
Total comic panels: 42
EXP: (2000 + 100) x 8 = 16800
extra reward: +750 exp, + 20 Guild Fame
Total EXP = 17550
Task: Draw how you calm the crystal of your choice. You need to touch your crystarium onto the crystal, and you are free to use any means necessary.
Wind Crystal Shards
1. Mjorna - Squire (Centurion, Berylle)
2. Riley Ivers - Squire (Centurion, Berylle)
3. Cecil Pecil - Squire (Centurion, Berylle)
4. Velala Vela - White Mage (Centurion, Berylle)
5. Runi - Black Mage (Eternal Flames, Almandunes)
6. Nettie - Black Mage (Glacial Vanguards, Chalcedonia)
7. Eiric Danaan - Archer (Eternal Flames, Almandunes)
8. Reich -Fighter (Eternal Flames, Almandunes)
9. Konokone Kenokone - Black Mage (Centurion, Berylle)
10. Saana - Fighter (Eternal Flames, Almandunes)
Wind Crystal Shards
A blizzard has formed around the shards as the result of its anomaly, and it swirls harder the closer you get to it. The wind is strong enough to blow you off your feet, so you will need something to hold you to the ground. The blizzard will be gone after the anomaly's absorbed.
characters in this comic:
cameos:
FINALLY FINISHEDDDDDD finally I finished my retarded comic, I'm so tired
started this more than one week ago because I need to work, so I only had a chance to do this after my work OTL. Anyway, Velly is in Wind crystal team and since the blizzard is so strong, the Lalafells go the last---otherwise they will be blown away by the wind Holding onto the chubby chocobo is a good idea since it is so huge and very warm to hold onto
anyway I'm sorry for taking so many liberties in the character's traits and their winter clothes. I didn't know what their winter clothes are like, and I didn't RP with the character personally so I'm sorry
I hope it's clear that Velly is talking to her sister in Meion....because I suck at backgrounds OTL
and I'm sorry for the bad grammar, and for leaving Saana out. I had realized that the team had one more person after I lined all the drawings
art, Velala Vela, Ulala Ula (c) Fortranica
all characters belong to their respective owners
Crystal Tales (c) yami-izumi ridekasama
Final Fantasy series (c) Square-Enix
PLEASE DO NOT USE WITHOUT MY PERMISSION
Thank you for looking!
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Comments: 48
This is cute story!
I like white mages very much, it's my favorite job class/one of my favorites from final fantasy series. White mages are very needed indeed. Three hip-hoorays for white mages! 
And I like lalafells.
Thank you for doing this, it's enjoyable comic.
Keep going, friend!
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ahhh such a cute comic! love the hints of character development that happens for velly here, and the fact that you managed to fit so many characters in too asjdh. they all look so attractive! //////
and thank you for putting eiric in there too! it was quite a surprise reading through and then seeing his face pop up halfway through haha ; v ; <3
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awww thank you! Yes, I love to make a comic as a chara development besides rp >u< though making it could be a pain in the ass!
yw!
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awww thank you!
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Hi! We have just re-evaluated the points system so your total EXP for this piece is:
EXP: 5 pages monochrome + 1 BG = 5(2000) + 100= 10100 EXP
extra reward: +750 exp, + 20 Guild Fame
Sorry for the inconvenience and thank you!
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Gosh this is so well done, I love that it's all traditional! Mister Rabbit, haha, I'm okay with this name. XD Jelly of your pencil skills and thanks for including Runi here!it should get like a million points, just saying. XD
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Thank you!
awww np, Runi is really fun to draw! He has an unique charm. I'm sure Velly won't call him as 'Mister rabbit' anymore if she knows about him personally better--maybe big bro Runi or Mister Chocobo
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I use to do okay with pencils a long time ago, but I've never learned to not smudge them so my pencil works are always so messy.
I like the name Mister Rabbit XD Maybe we will get to rp one day to see what else she decides to call him. X3
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ooh I have a small trick for that! you need a paper which you never use and put the paper on top of the drawing, but not entirely. Precisely, you put the paper on top of part of the drawing you don't want to get smudged. so for example if you're drawing your OC's right hand, the paper is on top of his body part drawing, and so when your hand is on the table to draw, the side of your hand was on top of the paper while drawing the hand.
I hope I can explain it good enough because it's hard without showing you directly orz. But it really helps, I've been using this trick for years!
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I will try this next time I go to sit down and draw traditionally, thanks! I still don't know how I would prevent smudging after I was done. XD
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fort sorry for the late reply, here is the calculation for your EXP
5 pages monochrome + 1 BG + Mission Bonus = 5(1000) + 50 + 750 = 5800 EXP
+ 20 GF
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OMG 5k EXP EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE thank you so much
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hhhhhhhh thank you so much Cath!
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This comic, it's just so marvelous, that I have no words, vely being so cute, like a little star in the middle of the storm, I really can't describe how I felt by reading this comic and can't even start to describe how amazed I was when I saw it was tottaly hand made, seriously Forty you are someone too much good for me to even say that what I do are drawings and not just some mess with the pencil.
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aww thank you so much Dark!
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Thanks Dorty, I sure hope it won't take much years for me to be as good as you, because I really still am miles away from your level.
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VELLY
So hardworking <3 Mama Eir will prepare all the drinks for you
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awwwww thank you Papi! Velly will be so happy, dw she won't get drunk from all the drinks
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INIH BAGUS PISAN FORTRAAAAAAAAA KAMUHHHHHH!!! #malestranslate #plok
Ufufufu-- I'm glad that u're using my son as cameo Thankyou~~
Velly is so cute--- she'll be a great white mage, I'm sure of it.
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makasih banyak raineeeeee yw, maaf ga bilang2
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RAGHHHHHH SO BEAUTIFUL VELLY DUN WORRY UR NOT USELESS KSLJFLKDSJLKF PRBLY THE USELESS ONE IS CECIL
Such beautiful comic qq i ran out of time so i just decided to upload an illustration ..N EXT TIME I SHALL DRAW VELLY N CECIL N OTHERS IN FULL GLORY
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KAJHKFHKSHFGADAJDJADG STOPPPP CECIL IS NOT USELESS, VELLY IS BECAUSE SHE NEEDS HIM TO WALK HER IT'S EMBARRASSING //SLAPPED
shhshhh your ilustration is great, thank youuuu
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Velly such a cutie lil sdlkfsldf
Dem comic, it looks awesome.
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fhsklhsklhflksh thank you konnnnn
sorry for borrowing mama magnilde without asking permission :icontmingtearsplz:
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shhh s'ok feel free to use mama magnilde for velly
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D'AAAAAAAAAAAAAWW omg this comic is really cuteeee
all my feels aaaah Velly you precious banana
great job in this!!! * A * (and we will discuss about your points XD)
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awww thank you so much yami!! I'm so glad about i
oh, and is is okay if I fix Popo's dialogue when he's going to harvest the crystal? (fourth panel from the bottom) . the placement of his words is outside the speech outline OTL
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Sure,go fix anything you need to! XD
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wow.such diligence. much long. teach me how to comic...
separate it by 5 panels...and get massive level up...
thanks for drawing my kid who's still embarrassing even in other person's work...
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well scenario planning zet-- it really helps when we're going to make one
ooooh right I see I was confused because the mods said that they will judge the exp given from a comic strip differently so I'm confused at first. and comic strip is not like comic per-pages so---
awww np, reich is great in his own way! Thank you <3
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super amazing foooort *A* jahsgefasodfhs I can't put into words , so amazed I'm gonna shed tears of joy
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thank you so much rideee
how much do you and yami give exp for this?
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according to the list of course, you can calculate it yourself as well XD
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ah.... each 5 panels get 1000 exp?
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Awwwwww QwQ This is really amazing!! QwQ
The last panel made me squeeee~ <3
Keep it up fortranica-chan!! >3<
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awww thank you! she is meant to be cute eheheh---but yeah I love the last panel too!
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OH MY GOD
BEAUTIFUL
FORT ALL YOUR EFFORT PAID OFF <33333
GOOD JOB HHHHHHHHHHHHH
///gross crying Velly is so cuteee eee eee
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it really does pay off! Velly advances to next job class---I'm so happy!
thank you bby!
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