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WARNING: BIG FILE!!the real title is [ven]triloquist.
For sequential final exam
The topic is about daily life, so I choose Ven as the main character. And don’t expect any surprise here, because it’s a daily life *bricked*
The story takes place at Linwood, a place where Ven lives on ’s World Project season 3
DNFJKGNOLFML OMG what the hell, the limit is 6-12 pages + cover ARRGHHH. Have no time to color this, by the time I have to go to college I even hadn’t finished adding the dialogues….and I managed to finish until the last page on college with my laptop OTL.
And I finish this without any sleep *shot*
All the characters belong to their respective owners. Sorry if they are OOC
Special thanks to and for Starr and Credo’s conversations
thank you for the creators' permissions for allowing me adding their characters on the story
hope you enjoy!
Story & art, Ven, Lot, Clo, Azriel, Arleiv (Alard), Vetra © *Fortranica
Anya © ~gensoukai12
Faerra © ~Chronolex
Nite © ~SenoritaGrey
Xaven © ~Quedrone
Glass © ~ManiaXfrEaxZz
Stu © ~CatSummoner
Credo © ~Platinumfate
Starr © ~karaiina
Gachi © ~Kera-KeraNgalam
Can © ~stoicaholic
Moshe © *yami-izumi *thanks for letting me drawing him drunk LOL*
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My sequential mid-exam:
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Comments: 146
AAAAAAH!!! I think i'm in love!
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awesome work ^^ it sure was nice to read. Although I thought it went a bit to quickly... I don't know, yes... I'll excuse myself in advance for perhaps being a bit rude: the first four pages for example I find too confusing. He wakes up and those dolls are there without even knowing where they came from. All of a sudden they are in place with a crowd and he's dowing a show and then some friends show up without warning
But really, I envy you for the skill you've shown ^^
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lol actually the dolls are there put on a shelf near ven's bed, so when he wakes up, he can see the dolls XD that's what I mean
thank you
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ahahahah gini toh ternyata percakapannya XD
yg starr vs credo lucu banget 
terus yg disurgery wakakkaka XD
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thank you
wakakakakakakaaa
kok mendadak ge kepikiran kl ven dpt kartu 'kuambil 3 barangmu yang paling berharga malam ini' -*insert ravenlegendary famous thief's name here-
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dijamin ven langsung panik kali yach, padahal itu cuman taktik buat mancing perhatian ven aja, pas hari H-nya yg diculik bukan bonekanya tapi si ven wakakakka
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eeeeh diculik mau diapain tuuuh?
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kan raven kiri kanan depan belakang atas bawah ok wakakakka
jadinya butuh 6 selingkuhan yach wakakakka *mata raven berbinar2
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ayo itung itung
moshe, ven, xaven, phantom, glass (whut?), ........
kurang satuuuuuu
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Really wonderful!!!
Nice story and by the way don't force yourself to finish things because you must relax sometime
Your art and story are so lovely
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Wow... just wow... this is amazing on so many levels I don't even know where to start!! First of all, I love love LOVE your style!!! ;u; I love how all the characters you drew look so different and they're never static, just like real people. A lot of comics tend to copy and paste or just have their characters standing the same way in each panel but these characters feel alive since they're always moving about or doing something.
Despite the topic being about Daily Life you still made it really interesting! You've really made me want to know more about the group, Ven and all of the other characters just from this.XD
I can't compliment it enough, great job!!!
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Baguuuuus *0* ... suka konsep cerita sama plotnya deh (dan gambarnya dan chara-chara cakepnyaaaa *0* ). Terus bagian yang Starr, Azriel sama Credo (eh bener kan?) lucu banget... rebutan boneka gitu
Mau bonekanya jugaaaaaa *0* tenang... ga bakal dibedah kok
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thank youuuu
itu smua gr2 credo imaginasinya terlalu tinggi jadinya ribut
eeeeh gileeee kl ketahuan mo dibedah situ masuk blacklist-nya ven lhooo
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Ohh this was so.....cute! XD
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Aww~ This was so adorable~ *u*
Some parts were very funny too~ <33
Good job~ Loved it~
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Woahhhh~~
Doing all that stuff must be really tiresome and must have took a lot of patience~!!
Congrats on finishing this one Fortra~!!!
The details are amazing!
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btw thx yaaa udah nggambarin anyaa, kawaii deeh
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hahaha, anya pertama muncul, huahahaha pas mbayangin si Lot tu looo
yg bikin ga tahan lagi si moshe tuuuu huahahahahahaha
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iyaaaa wakakakakakakakaa
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Sukses ngakak gw baca ini komik serius
Ceritanya bagus banget dan chara2nya cakep2 XD
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thank you
haha seneng deh isa bikin ngakak
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Wuiiii...nice desuu!!! Panelnya enak dibaca
Critanya menarik, gambarnya juga bagus. Two thumbs up!! XD
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huahahaha
keren boooo
aku suka jg ceritanya
mengalir dgn baik
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lol the name Ven meanes in danish Friend :3
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oh really? I'm glad to hear that! XD
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Hahaha I enjoy reading this..
It's funny..
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thank you
glad you enjoyed it XD
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OUEMJIANAKKUCEWEBANGETSIHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA FFFFFFFF
walo dah liat. TETEP AJA *gemes* IMUTTTTTTTT~~
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WAKAKAKAKAKAKAKAKAKAKAAAAA
lho, kan memang itulah kenyataannya
thank you
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