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FoxFireRed — Lust
Published: 2010-02-01 20:39:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 1018; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 5
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Description I can smell your desire,
I can feel the fever of your skin.
I will try to acquire
All the skills to burn you from within.

With a touch so gentle and mild,
I'll abuse your innocent trust.
With a gaze unruly and wild,
I will raise your impetuous lust.
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Comments: 11

autumn-spirit [2010-08-07 18:12:09 +0000 UTC]

very well composed. The rhyme isn't too pointed, just flows perfectly.

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FoxFireRed In reply to autumn-spirit [2010-11-21 16:43:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Eremitik [2010-02-25 20:04:03 +0000 UTC]

Unlike lust, this piece is short and sweet.
The first verse sums it nicely, getting to the heart of what lust should be.

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FoxFireRed In reply to Eremitik [2010-02-27 14:06:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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Eremitik In reply to FoxFireRed [2010-02-28 14:21:09 +0000 UTC]

You are quite welcome.

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Seigner [2010-02-07 01:32:26 +0000 UTC]

Very good writing.

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FoxFireRed In reply to Seigner [2010-02-07 15:08:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Seigner In reply to FoxFireRed [2010-02-08 22:12:19 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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StellaAqua [2010-02-01 23:31:33 +0000 UTC]

I love it!

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FoxFireRed In reply to StellaAqua [2010-02-02 00:57:21 +0000 UTC]

thank you thank you

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StellaAqua In reply to FoxFireRed [2010-02-02 20:59:06 +0000 UTC]

hehee... ^_^ ur welcom

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