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EDIT: Just moved and edited Hinata's face in the third frame there. It bugged me too much not to touch it XD BTW once again, I will not be updating this until ALL of my commissions are taken care of. It would simply be irresponsible of me to do so. If I do really well on keeping up with my commissions, then I will consider updating this comic at the same time.
Since I started updating regularly, I've been working on making the comics look as professional as possible.
Case in point, I'm using a REAL manga-style guideline template to mark the "active", "bleed", and "trim" areas on a page. Because I plan to make my comics into printed books someday, I figure I should save myself some grief later on and plan for the book layout as I go.
As many of you know, a comic's "active" area is the place where all the word bubbles and the intended drawings MUST be located, because when a page is sent in to be made into print, things in the "trim" area and even in the "bleed" area get cut off in order to format the page. So, obviously it would be bad if words or even a character's entire face was cut off in print, resulting in a choppy and inconsistent final product.
As for the page. Well, I'm sure you will all speculate enough on your own XD So no spoilers from me. Just enjoy!
Oh, I should probably mention that if you noticed, for those that saw the WIP version that I updated with this, I have been and always will post the "full screen" non-manga-cropped versions of the pages. Just consider it a bonus for following the comic on DA ^_^
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Naruto (c) Masashi Kishimoto
NH: Forgotten (c) Me
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Comments: 459
TrueDreamer07 [2015-05-24 23:18:54 +0000 UTC]
I like how this comic is shaping up. I also enjoy how the last four chronologic comments respond in the very same tone. JakeNova, I commend you for sticking close to the original manga's format. I'd take my hat off to you if I were wearing one.
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FoxxBrush In reply to TrueDreamer07 [2015-06-01 03:29:27 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I really tried to make it look like something Kishimoto himself made!
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BlueMoon4601 [2015-02-14 07:15:58 +0000 UTC]
nononononononononononono he didn't, please tell me he didn't.
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Phoenixthellama [2014-08-27 05:02:31 +0000 UTC]
On no he did not just do what i think he did
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storm008 [2013-01-27 14:46:14 +0000 UTC]
Am loving these chapters I hope Naruto don't hurt Hinata he will feel real bad.
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FoxxBrush In reply to DaGaoPump [2012-12-29 16:22:53 +0000 UTC]
you'll just have to wait and see XP
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azher00uzumzki [2012-11-24 18:12:28 +0000 UTC]
wow! its no dream!
the next page! yay
thanks for uploading!
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FoxxBrush In reply to Wbaez93 [2012-11-10 02:45:31 +0000 UTC]
of course I do! don't be silly XD
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narutoandhinata4life [2012-10-24 21:02:31 +0000 UTC]
Holy shit just read the whole thing this is freaking awesome!!! You drawing amazing like hehe !
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FoxxBrush In reply to narutoandhinata4life [2012-11-10 02:45:39 +0000 UTC]
aw thanks so much!
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tempdo [2012-10-12 18:22:11 +0000 UTC]
MORE! Or I'll rip Naruto out of the Pein Battle as the 8 tails and put you right in front of him!
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Autumn-m-Jolene [2012-09-26 23:38:22 +0000 UTC]
I need more! i hate how i find something like this and then i reach the end or temporary end and have to wait since im bored on the computer and the xbox gets on my nerves sometimes...
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BeastlyHades44 [2012-09-16 06:46:46 +0000 UTC]
It's kinda disappointing to see this unfinished. This has alot of potential, yet it's been a year. You need to hop back on this and finish. Then can you only give readers closure. Then SSJ5 Goku will approve!
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FoxxBrush In reply to BeastlyHades44 [2012-09-24 05:15:23 +0000 UTC]
I know I know DX I'm trying to get caught up on a lot of things right now. This is one of them. Part of the reason I haven't updated in a while is because when I do update I want it to be in a time and place where I feel like I could update it regularly. Otherwise I would update pages every month or so, and you guys would just get more irritated.
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azher00uzumzki In reply to FoxxBrush [2012-09-27 14:28:06 +0000 UTC]
wow looks like you really were busy
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azher00uzumzki [2012-09-14 16:22:20 +0000 UTC]
man....youre tearing us to sheets!
it has been a year TT_TT
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FoxxBrush In reply to azher00uzumzki [2012-09-24 05:15:51 +0000 UTC]
sorryyyy DX I do plan on finishing this! I just need to get some things in order so that when I update this comic I can do so regularly from that point on!
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azher00uzumzki In reply to FoxxBrush [2012-09-27 14:26:13 +0000 UTC]
:} just dont push yourself to hard , it looks like you were busy
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Dreamfollower [2012-08-23 13:24:16 +0000 UTC]
wat? Noooo!!! Me wanna read more! DX haha I was enjoying reading this alot! >.< ur art work is very good and story line nd all seems legite to! Cant wait to read more! Btw, wat program do u use? 0.o
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NaruHina2000 [2012-07-24 07:28:58 +0000 UTC]
AAAAAHHHH!!!PLEASE NEXT PAGE!!!!!!!!!!!!IT'S SO .....OMG!!!!!!!
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NaruHina2000 [2012-07-17 20:39:49 +0000 UTC]
Next please!I want soo much to see!!!I love it!
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Angelheart1700 [2012-07-10 02:47:07 +0000 UTC]
Well, that was a terrible cliff hanger. [link]
Next page, please!
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ReiLoly [2012-06-16 20:05:08 +0000 UTC]
by very soon i expect very very veeeery soon because I'm gettin' crazy over here -__-
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