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fragile-burn — Unsave Me
Published: 2006-09-24 20:55:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 7416; Favourites: 174; Downloads: 67
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U n s a v e m eSteal away the softness from my eyes.
I want your fingerprints on my thighs,
The rainbows you leave there
When I taste your blood on my lips.
Cruel savior-
Make me beg.
Starve me-
Feed me the emptiness I crave,
Please- kiss me with your teeth.
Fill my head with your throat-sounds,
Primal
To chase away the void.
I cannot stand your gentle hands.
Unstained,
They stroke so tenderly,
And though I ache for you
To score with pointed fingertips
The smooth skin of my hips,
You do not.
Bruise away my bitter deeds
Like I long of you.
Tarnish me
Sweet prince,
Rid me of damned innocence,
Flay me with my longing
So hollow-
My raspy yes is barbed within my throat.
Red welts on ivory skin,
Black oceans of bliss
Your name, carved deep enough to scar.
These things I want-
For you to make me nothing,
Free me from myself,
Blind me so that I may see you,
Choke me so that I may breathe.
U n s a v e m e.
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Comments: 148
lol thank you. 
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this reminds me of john donne's "holy sonnet xiv". smooth rhythm and rhyme scheme.
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The passion that rings throughout this poem is so primal.
"Feed me the emptiness I crave."
I love this line the most.
In a world so full, we usually immerse ourselves in everything. But sometimes, we just want to be alone and empty.
I really like it...a lot.
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Thank you! 
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You are very welcome.
If it is not too much trouble, may I invite you to have a look at my gallery?
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no problem, I'd be glad to. ^_^
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wow wow whoa!!!! thats amazing!!!! I love the imergry.
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"...the rainbow you leave there." ---wonderful line!
I love the way you wrote this, and what you wrote about!
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Thanks, that makes me so happeee!!
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Amazing, it's a wild poem.
It's so animalistic and free and passionate. I like it.
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Wow! This is truly an incredible piece. A definite
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I actually love this, its like, agh, lol. Erm yeah is hot, and is amazingly written. I wish I could write like that. Amazing
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This is amazing. I really like this poem. Truly exquisite. Don't change a line.
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sounds vampish hehe. i love it! very nice.
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this beautiful! simply wonderful. it's a fav for sure
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lol well thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Congrats on making it to the popular section, by the way. You deserve it for this.
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Thank you! I can't believe it! I'm so happy!! he he
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Wow, this is seriously amazing. The words flow beautifully and keep their rhythm, and the concept is wonderfully executed. Fabulous job.
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I absoluetely love this, it perfectly depicts that carnal lust you feel, the wanting to be abused..as sick as it sounds..that primal, rough instinct... wonderful work [link]
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I'm glad it didn't seem too twisted.
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wow this is beautiful, so sincere & visceral, i love this, this is a fave!!!
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Woo, This is amazingly well done. I love it, Its hard to explain why but I really like it.
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This is some seriously striking imagery combined with hushed desires being voiced. Incredible.
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Wow, thank you so much!! I'm shocked, I was actually pretty unhappy with the flow of this piece, but I'm thrilled that you like it!!
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Really? I thought the flow was flawless. Awesome, awesome! 
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