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iamconfidence [2006-11-15 03:36:00 +0000 UTC]

yeah, i totally dig it. the hip and breast areas are a bit off. the hip is a bit too flat/long maybe and the breast is not firm/big enough. i think that may fill the shape out a little better and the curvy feel may add to her sensuality. other then that little bit. bravo my friend. i totally get the vision and it is good.

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Keeps [2006-11-15 00:41:30 +0000 UTC]

LOL I dont know what to say as a crit, its overall good. I think my only thing is the contrast of the background flesh and her arms flesh may be better if it was stronger, thats about all Id say.

Hmmm looks sweet none-the-less to me though.

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lemmonade42 [2006-11-15 00:37:05 +0000 UTC]

I think this is awesome! I'm no digital artist, but my roomie in college was and I critiqued her all the time...so here you go!

I love the colors, and I thinkt he best part is that she's being seductive and the silver thing looks like a fish hook..so she's reeling them in! Great job!

The only think I wiould say is something is funny with the body....I'm nto sure if it's too long to be proportioned or that her butt is too big for the rest of her! lol...but other than that it is freakin' cool!

Great job! I :blowiss: it!

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episkeuo [2006-11-14 22:32:11 +0000 UTC]

That's fucking neat, dude.

I think the full circle above her should be seperate rather than touching the back ground that surrounds her.
The shading on her breasts goes over on to her arm also.

The face is rad. Detailed and captivating. I like the wiring that surround her too. Reminds me of that scene from Silent Hill.

Kick ass stuff, bud

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