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Free-Fall — Goodbye
Published: 2006-11-25 01:12:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 76; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Dying breath upon my lips,Soil touching fingertips,
Didn’t know that hero
meant I’d have to say goodbye.
A day ago I’m missing you ,
I’ll never be their kissing you, again,
I’m dead, not here today,
I’m gone today Goodbye.
Down here in these eternal trenches,
Meant to be for my defenses
Not my grave.
But here today,
You’ll lay me down to rest.
And when the battles over and done,
We will be the ones who won.
I took my pledge, to do my best,
To bring freedom for our flag.
So remember me from this day on,
And please continue to carry on.
So my life, my love, my loss for you,
doesn’t end today in vain.
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Comments: 15
Didnt know that hero
Meant Id have to say goodbye....
Gotta admit, favourite line!!! that and
Down here in these eternal trenches,
Meant to be for my defenses
although i enjoy the whole poem, i gotta admit, those are catchy!
FUCk its confusing....i was so lost when i added my two new ones!.....made me dizzy
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I love your poem, mine was crappy...if i can remember!
I think it will win, beacause others are stupid and you are not! this is my theory and I shall take it to my grave!
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i dont remember what mine said...hahah oh well
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Thankyou fair Krysta, I liked yours too though
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Yes. the new uploader makes me consider death. I dont know what harm considering death deos, but hey, thats what it makes me do. anyway, The imagery in this poem is splendid. The flow is also, in opinion, pleasing.
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The new uploader makes me want to harm small forest animals 
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oooo its goooooood me like it ur gonna win yet again
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Thanks, I probably wont though, all the girls this year are convinced that they have the award winning poem
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naaa they just saying that
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I dont care if one of them wins over me...as long as the poem is actually good
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ya no doubt lol hope ali dosn't win if she did it would be funny cuz i wrote hers in like 5 min hahahahaha it wasn't good at all tho so it probably won't
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If Ali didnt write it then she shouldnt send it in, its one thing to hand it in for marks, but sending in a poem you wrote into a contest is just a tad wrong.
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i don't mind but isn't it up to lingren? i thought she chose the poems that she liked then sends them in? i don't care it was crappy anyway lol and i was bored. but ya it is
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This year we only have to send them in if we want to.
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