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Published: 2013-09-04 21:35:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 1476; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 0
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More Dirty stuff. Posted this a while ago on my Tumblr because I didn't like it. Randomly decided to post it to DA today.Not going in to too much detail on this group but they're "searching for something" and that search kicks off a series of events that has them at odds with Diana.
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This is great. Especially that campfire light. It also tells a certain story
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Thank you! I felt like I should have done more with the colors like I initially intended. But it's a learning process.
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Thanks! You have an amazing gallery yourself!
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very interesting ocs!
I'm really curious as of why they have horns, really!
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Well, if you look, a lot of the characters have horns in my story, Dirty. This is because in this world there are two different races of sentient beings as opposed to one. The Humans and the Slavan. Slavan characteristics are horns (one or two, and on very rare occasion three or four), dark eyes, and dark hair. Since their first encounter with humans centuries ago the two races have been known to reproduce together on occasion and the ones with more Slavan blood than Human blood in them typically have these features. But now you have some interracial ones that look almost exactly like humans like my characters Cillian and Shem. These guys in particular are mostly Slavan.
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Oh I see!
I guess I hacen't really noticed before, sorry about that
but thank you for taking the time to explain
(also I didn't know you had set up so much in your story! Are you getting there?)
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It's fine. I can see how it would still appear like I didn't have a plot set up yet but I've actually got most of the main plot thought out and now I'm working on the details as well as the subplots and writing the script for the first chapter. It's a slow process right now but it's moving.
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Oh, I'm sorry!
Well then, can't wait before reading it!
I'm always very happy you take the time answering my comments!
Hope i'm not too annoying >u<
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Haha. Not annoying at all. I appreciate the fact that you take the time to comment.
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Whoah, love the composition and feel of this piece, that lighting is looking great. Β And horns! Β <3
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I think this piece looks great man, very moody and atmospheric. Β Great stuff as always dude
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Yeah, that was the vibe I was going for. But it's more-so the colors (particularly the sky) and some of the lines (some that I should have erased) that bother me. I've been pretty on and off lazy with some things and this was definitely a moment where the lazy was turned way up half way through. 
But I'm glad that you like it. I don't necessarily hate it. I just see many areas where the results don't come close to my initial intentions. Thanks for the comment.
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Dude honestly, I see sooo many faults in my own work that other people probably don't! We're our own worst critics I guess. I've got the same issue that if my heart isn't in a piece anymore I drift away, become disinterested and get lazy sometimes. I've been trying to work on that. It's reassuring to know I'm not the only one hehehe
Keep up the good work mate, Dirty's starting to look like an awesome project!
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Yeah, but if you didn't see any flaws in your work then you'd have a much bigger problem on your hands.
And I could always tell you more about the story if you were interested. It's a bit complicated because of the lack of visual but I have an almost solid plot cooked up.
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Very true, I'm still at a point in my development where there are a lot of things that need improving. It can be a little overwhelming at times when you analyse the gap between where you are and where you wanna be, but I'm a determined sonofab*tch and I will get there.
And yeah I'd love to hear some more details on your plot, the concept sounds great so far. And the setting is starting to materialise through the various character designs and scenes you've been showing...it really appeals to me and you've created a unique but thoroughly believable style that looks sweet. I know how hard it must be nurture an idea you've invested so much in. You want everyone to know but only when you're good and ready! Definitely feel free to gimme a note or something though dude, I really wanna see you realise the potential and make a success of it! Right, I'm gonna stop spamming up your comments now hehe
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yeah. I feel you on the overwhelming bit. Colors are my enemy at the moment though. And I'm probably going to note you the plot stuff I have so far. Hope you don't mind spoilers.
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In this case not at all man, I feel privileged that you're willing to share more details with me! Coolio dude I look forward to your note
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