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2 of the planes from the Aeroshell Acrobatics team at the Peoria Air ShowRelated content
Comments: 9
TreborNehoc [2010-07-28 16:15:29 +0000 UTC]
you don't have to know or care anything about aviation to like this piece. the composition is nice and the colors are beautiful. hard to see how it could 've been done better. great job.
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DrawnAtRandom [2010-07-26 00:45:17 +0000 UTC]
Love the colors!
I wish all of the foreground plane was in view and had just a bit more feeling of being the "focus" of the shot, but it's a cool picture.
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freeskifreeride In reply to DrawnAtRandom [2010-07-26 05:32:08 +0000 UTC]
thanks for the critiques! what do you mean by "more in focus"?
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DrawnAtRandom In reply to freeskifreeride [2010-07-26 12:59:28 +0000 UTC]
Not more in focus, it's sharp.
I only meant that the background plane, the missing wingtip and the low placement make it feel, *to me*, as if the front plane is not quite the main focus of the image.
Of course, since the BG plane is parked there and all, there isn't much you could have done about that.
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freeskifreeride In reply to DrawnAtRandom [2010-07-26 15:10:04 +0000 UTC]
gotcha, thanks for the framing/composition tips.
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