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few, finally got this done, Ive been so worried to upload this bio incase of people thinking shes a mary sue or something D:


anywayway a little bit more infomation here:

TALON in game storyline timeline:
(before portal 1) LAB RAT official comic (if you havent already read this here is a link: [link] )

PORTAL 1: TALON is used to keep an eye on chell as she keeps destroying the cameras, however this proves inaffective as she loses sight of her)

LAB RAT :during the inbetween time of portal 1 and 2 after GLaDOS is deafeated TALON tried to orginize some of the remaining turrets in an attempt to stop him from escaping (and unwittingly) editing chells statis life surrport to keep her alive however during this time she forgets most turrets are programmed with her as a prime target and is also shot several times herself sending her offline.



PORTAL2: when GLaDOS is finally brought back online TALON is revived with the rest of the facility though she is one of the last things to come online. during this time she does stumble upon GLaDOS after she has become a potato and tries to save her from the crow but the bird manages to dislocate the wire that operates her right wing sending her tumbling down and failing to be of any use. after this she reaches wheatley's 'lair' and stupidly tries to attack him but is hit by one of his rockets then dumped in the emergency intelligence incinerator and finally killed.



XD gosh..I even started a comic of this but Im too scared to upload it XD

so finally what do you think?


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Comments: 36

stArchaeopteryx [2013-06-14 20:24:44 +0000 UTC]

don't wanna sound dumb but... what does NAS stand for? ^^'

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stArchaeopteryx In reply to stArchaeopteryx [2013-06-14 22:13:33 +0000 UTC]

never mind...

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BlazeFireWolf1 [2012-02-15 01:42:03 +0000 UTC]

What is a Mary-Sue?I got called that once after i blocked a rude and obnoxious medicine cat in a warriors rp and she made another account and she and her friend(who stole my character too!Talk about insult to injury) ganged up on me and she said "What are you,a Mary Sue?" -.- I left that rp >.< all of them were like that!

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xCinderDragonx In reply to BlazeFireWolf1 [2012-03-17 14:30:27 +0000 UTC]

Usually Mary sue means a character with to many traits or that seems to do to much in a story line, I don't know what they meant with you though. :/

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xXCrazyCatXx2 [2011-11-06 14:19:16 +0000 UTC]

I loved your character! Portal is a so wonderful game! Is a pity that Wheatley killed her :/ (well, thats what i understand. I'm not so good at English >(

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EmotionalFlux [2011-10-08 04:34:48 +0000 UTC]

Awesome

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Spotty-cat [2011-08-07 06:34:03 +0000 UTC]

Lol. I'm thinking about making a bird, but I can't draw one cause its to freakin hard. Its REALLY hard trying to find lineart.

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XwarriorpichuX [2011-07-27 13:48:13 +0000 UTC]

You should totaly do a comic! that would be FRIKIN AWESOME!!! XD

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CrazedSkittles [2011-07-26 02:15:17 +0000 UTC]

Please upload the comic. 8U I mean, you don't have to, but I'd love to see it and I think your Portal art is brilliant, along with all of your other work. ^w^

Because of you I really want an Xbox just to play this game. xD

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Nurikosguardian [2011-07-26 00:12:38 +0000 UTC]

Oh, this is your new account, just spotted you on the 8 hour front page!

I love the skeletal form!

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frigidbloodalchemist In reply to Nurikosguardian [2011-07-26 00:45:06 +0000 UTC]

ack! Ive been found D: *runs*

no but seriously howd you know it was me?

and thanks XD

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Nurikosguardian In reply to frigidbloodalchemist [2011-07-26 11:18:11 +0000 UTC]

Your character in your avatar, mainly.

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frigidbloodalchemist In reply to Nurikosguardian [2011-07-26 14:49:45 +0000 UTC]

curse that articuno, giving me away... >.>

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shamen01 [2011-07-25 20:35:03 +0000 UTC]

TALON is not a mary sue.

And I would love to see the comic of Talon and Portal.

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AmericanPatriot50 [2011-07-25 20:01:54 +0000 UTC]

I read everything and now my eyes hurt. @.@ I give you props for coming up with all this, seriously lol. I mean, I never would have thought of this stuff in my life. XD

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Shoe-Demon [2011-07-25 19:37:46 +0000 UTC]

I read the comic and i have to say its very good i really like the difference between past and present. And i can see how TALON fits in to all this after reading the description.

can't wait for page 28!

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Terastrial [2011-07-25 19:25:00 +0000 UTC]

completely and utterly incredible... and you made her up all by yourself?

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frigidbloodalchemist In reply to Terastrial [2011-07-25 20:17:13 +0000 UTC]

yup ^^ granted I spent alot of time on this character I wanted to fit her in so she didnt disrupt the storyline but still held some importance

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Abstract-Marcher [2011-07-25 19:13:55 +0000 UTC]

AWESOMENESS!!!!

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dogs-dont-byte [2011-07-25 18:22:39 +0000 UTC]

u should make the comic ^^

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SetBloodOnFire [2011-07-25 17:20:20 +0000 UTC]

Thats awesome o.o Makes me want to read the comic.

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Waterstep [2011-07-25 16:55:09 +0000 UTC]

Why wouldn't GLaDOS reassemble her after she took over again?
I mean like she does with P-body and Atlas?

Is it because she starts hatting birds half way though the game?

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frigidbloodalchemist In reply to Waterstep [2011-07-25 17:02:09 +0000 UTC]

yeah pretty much, that and TALON proved to be pretty useless when she needed her to be well, helpful. that and since she was blown to pieces her core intelligence was destroyed she can survivbe turret bullets but being blown apart or burned she cannot and since she was a prototype thier isnt a backup file for her

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Waterstep In reply to frigidbloodalchemist [2011-07-25 17:10:44 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I get it.

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Kestrill [2011-07-25 16:45:39 +0000 UTC]

must be a stzupid job to be shot all the time XDD
And doN't worry I don't think she's a mary sue ^^
I'd love to see the comic 8D

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frigidbloodalchemist In reply to Kestrill [2011-07-25 16:55:46 +0000 UTC]

yes XD wellm she can dodge to the best of her ablity..naw shes good at getting shot XD

thankyou ; hahah Im always paranoid about fan characters being mary sues XD
really? owo

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Kestrill In reply to frigidbloodalchemist [2011-07-25 17:22:27 +0000 UTC]

oh well then X'DD

yeah I know what you mean xD. but she's definatly not ^^
Yes really 8D

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MikkuMikku [2011-07-25 16:43:13 +0000 UTC]

Upload the comic please <3 I really wanna see it

Daww.. Wheatley killed her? Mely won't forgive him for that!

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GrayBanana [2011-07-25 16:34:12 +0000 UTC]

I like it! Im temped to make a TALON now just to mess with ST. But i probably wont

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wafflewarriorthe3rd [2011-07-25 16:30:30 +0000 UTC]

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Mishamutt [2011-07-25 16:25:36 +0000 UTC]

wow this is amazing 8D
I love the detail and thought you put into this!

And you gotta upload the comic!!!

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sonic-fan-girl769 [2011-07-25 16:15:47 +0000 UTC]

good job i say

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FeCaline [2011-07-25 16:11:07 +0000 UTC]

<33

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InvaderFay1 [2011-07-25 16:09:54 +0000 UTC]

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FireIchigo [2011-07-25 16:07:05 +0000 UTC]

epic!

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Pepparthewolf [2011-07-25 16:06:26 +0000 UTC]

I FORGIVE YOU WHEATLEY

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