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Published: 2004-11-23 16:33:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 14201; Favourites: 193; Downloads: 5698
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Lost and confusedI wander alone
In no place I fit
No place to call home
I look on ahead of me
Into the future I see
My past is my nightmare
In the present I hate to be
I see the things I wish for
The things I wish to possess
The feeling of true happiness
The feel of loves caress
But those things are not there
I don't know if they ever will be
I sit alone with no one
I sit on my own, no one but me
Looking for somebody to hold me
For someone who cares
I look all around me
But nobody's there
I look in the darkness
Looking for that bright light
Looking for that reason
A reason to fight
But all I see is nothing
Nothing to look forward to
I can't keep going on
Thereβs nothing more to do
In hopeless desperation
I searched for reasons to live
But I found nothing to hope for
And I have no more to give
So I sit here alone in the darkness
My soul is battered and abused
My feelings continuing through the night
Sitting alone, lost and confused
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Comments: 74
frostfire101 In reply to ??? [2004-11-24 23:34:41 +0000 UTC]
it's ok
coulda been better
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frostfire101 In reply to KrewL-RaiN [2004-11-24 21:59:05 +0000 UTC]
thank you for the comment and the fav
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weien In reply to ??? [2004-11-24 17:08:49 +0000 UTC]
Oh... wow... *saves*
That's really awesome. The composition is definitely a work of art. And the last two verses in the poem are amazing, as well. *faves*
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frostfire101 In reply to weien [2004-11-24 19:42:00 +0000 UTC]
thanks for the comment and the fav.
the poems ok...
it could be better tho
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brownbai [2004-11-24 12:57:48 +0000 UTC]
looks NICE..i love it (colours too)+fav
what prog u use? looks like some good brushing in the bg
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frostfire101 In reply to brownbai [2004-11-24 14:49:45 +0000 UTC]
and thanks for the comment and the fav
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frostfire101 In reply to brownbai [2004-11-24 14:49:11 +0000 UTC]
it's 100% bryce 3D
i used some custom materials and custom light sources
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Pumpupthebase [2004-11-24 08:09:00 +0000 UTC]
Awsome ,i love it great colors bye the way fantastic!
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frostfire101 In reply to Pumpupthebase [2004-11-24 14:50:28 +0000 UTC]
thank you
for both the comment and the fav
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Tekkaman-Blade [2004-11-24 02:56:32 +0000 UTC]
awesome dude! just awesome....
...why is it that when i want to have some fun...all goes wrong?...
My new and family!!!
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frostfire101 In reply to Tekkaman-Blade [2004-11-24 03:48:40 +0000 UTC]
thanks,
for the comment and the fav
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Tekkaman-Blade In reply to frostfire101 [2004-11-25 00:03:43 +0000 UTC]
no prob. you are so welcome
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Disasterpiece666 [2004-11-23 22:25:36 +0000 UTC]
i love the new opaque look you've been using... it is symbolic (the names and the pieces) i really love it.
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frostfire101 In reply to Disasterpiece666 [2004-11-23 22:36:04 +0000 UTC]
thanks bro
by the way...
your girl misses you.
she told me so herself
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dmbblndnamstng In reply to ??? [2004-11-23 16:39:00 +0000 UTC]
yeah this looks better in blue than it did in pink... nice, as always, you have way too much talent
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frostfire101 In reply to dmbblndnamstng [2004-11-23 17:01:14 +0000 UTC]
that's because you inspire me to try to make you happy and make me want to hold you in my arms
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tuesdayish In reply to ??? [2004-11-23 16:36:48 +0000 UTC]
wow
great art...
awesome writing...
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coolbah94 In reply to frostfire101 [2004-11-23 19:23:28 +0000 UTC]
sure thing did I watch you yet
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XtaduZ [2004-11-23 16:36:08 +0000 UTC]
Woa thats great GFX work
wish i was that skilled
( btw that text would make a great song )
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frostfire101 In reply to XtaduZ [2004-11-23 17:03:11 +0000 UTC]
thank you on both
the poem kinda just popped out of my head while i was in a really depressed mood
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