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frostfire101 β lost and confused
Published: 2004-11-23 16:33:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 14200; Favourites: 193; Downloads: 5698
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Lost and confusedI wander alone
In no place I fit
No place to call home
I look on ahead of me
Into the future I see
My past is my nightmare
In the present I hate to be
I see the things I wish for
The things I wish to possess
The feeling of true happiness
The feel of loves caress
But those things are not there
I don't know if they ever will be
I sit alone with no one
I sit on my own, no one but me
Looking for somebody to hold me
For someone who cares
I look all around me
But nobody's there
I look in the darkness
Looking for that bright light
Looking for that reason
A reason to fight
But all I see is nothing
Nothing to look forward to
I can't keep going on
Thereβs nothing more to do
In hopeless desperation
I searched for reasons to live
But I found nothing to hope for
And I have no more to give
So I sit here alone in the darkness
My soul is battered and abused
My feelings continuing through the night
Sitting alone, lost and confused
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Comments: 74
i have only one word to say to you.....WOW! that is just AH-mazing!
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great pic. also i love the poem. you should post it on [link] for everyone can read it.
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glad you like it 
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Love the poem and the picture!!!!!! They are both really good!
- AOA
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thanks!!
i'm glad you like it and thanks for the fav too!!
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shoot, dude. The art is incredible. Great depth, color, and design. And then theres the poem... WOW!!! song, poem, whatever, It's incredible. maybe a little depressing, but still superb. Definitely a +fav!!!
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thank you, glad you like it
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OMFG!!! I love this!!! I love the way it's all abstract like that!!! XD *spazzes over the awesomeness* I'm putting it in my favies!!!!
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thanks!!
glad you like it!!
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I do very much!!! I would very much want to put it for my desktop background! ^^
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if you want to put it as your desktop background, go for it
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Okay! Thank you!
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i just asked it cuz a boy.....who i love...erhm..he is lost in his past...and starting to push me away..
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if the girl i am wishing for right now lets me be her boyfriend, and wants to give me her luv like i wish to give her mine, i will open my arms and heart for her...
adn for you. the only thing you can really do is be there for him, hold him when he needs to be held, luv him always and be there for him, and never give up on him
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thanks....^^.....
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weee I'm am so gonna place this on my web site that is if I get permission from the author, PM me!
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i''ve written poetry and submitted it here,
but i got so few comments and responses that i kinda got depressed about it,
not only that...
but to me, a poem has a lot more meaning if it's written for somebody special and given to that person to read...
it has a lot more emotion to it
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this is awsome... i love it.. wow.. i put it up .. and .. well.. now im just wandering how you did it?
btw.. would you mind if i put up a screen shot w/ this on it?
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this is 100% bryce 3d
i used custom materials
and if you want to put up a screen shot go for it,
just link me to the description
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Wow, this is awesome. The poem captures the thoughts precisely... wandering down dark empty paths just to try to find something....something to hope for. like I do. sometimes.
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thank you
for both the comment and the fav
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thanks!!
i guess people found something i made that they actually like!!
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Great image and poem.
They fit together like the pieces of a finely crafted watch.
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thanks for the fav, watch, and the compliment
much appreciated
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You seemed to entrap the very meaing of the words you used to describe your work
You sir are VERY good at what you do
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nawww not really..
both my attempts at poetry and my bryce stuff could be a lot better
but thanks anyway
especially for the comment, the fav and the watch
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Reminds me cold and loneliness. But it's well done, as usually. 
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omg
thats good... u should have a look at my stuff lol.. my friends reckon im good at this..
and i say omg.. u shuld see some of the stuff on this site... "some of this stuff" refers to thigns like this...
tats sick
also
i was wondering u would mind if i used that poem and showed it to my band?
if u dont want me to .. thats fine... ill keep looking hjere for ur reply..
thx
Kennedy
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nice poem, it has much feeling, amazing render too
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thank you for the comment
it's much appreciated
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thanks for the both the comment and the fav!!
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