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FudgeX02 — Practice (Feedback please?)
Published: 2016-09-18 07:06:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 3094; Favourites: 100; Downloads: 81
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Some of my lineart practice for this month. I keep not finishing or posting things because I think they're no good. Shoddy linework, poor/inorganic posing, bad anatomy/proportions is what I keep thinking as I work, and then I just trash the whole thing, so...Feedback? I could use some...^_^; I don't even have a name for this. It's literally saved as "nameless.kra" on my pc.
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This looks really stunning. Especially with the blushing.
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very nice. abs could be a bit more defined though.
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The breast on the viewer's right is a little bit too small.
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Would you be interested in doing a commission for me? I'm looking for someone to bring a new oc of mine to life
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I think overall your proportions are improving in leaps and bounds, I like that you are branching out with different facial expressions and angles. As far as anatomy goes, I'm not an artist so I don't know what to look for, but it all looks good to me.
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You're mostly looking for thoughts on the lines then, yes? I have a hard time judging one style against another there, but they look fine.
Do you want overall/anatomy feedback?
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All I can say is that, this looks pretty good to me.
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I really like the way you made her upper body. It's proportional and looks realistic. But the legs are a bit in odd i feel, her right leg is in an odd position i think. Her foot should in space be a bit more to the right. But that's just my opinion ^^. It's well made my friend q:
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legs are great, abs through shirt are fantastic, just the elbow on the left needed to be a bit more north west
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She does look cute and I do love muscular cute girls so good job.
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she looks really good the proportions are so balanced ^w^ and for the name.....i am not to creative but i think would be a bit original put her a name as a variation of kinniku(muscle in japanese) i dont know.......Kumiko?
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What the actual fuc-
I'm just going to leave
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Please do, you're not welcome here anyway.
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Seconded... Get out👺
Nice work, I look forward to seeing more.
If I were you, I'd put in some shading. That's what really brings it off the page for me.
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Well, it is a major improvement, keep practicing, you already had nailed this before, it looks great
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