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Published: 2020-03-15 16:07:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 4196; Favourites: 146; Downloads: 0
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Strong girls galore! And if anyone's a badass too, it's Revy (Black Lagoon)! So many things with this one were tricky... if anything, it's a really calm day xD
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Easily one of the most notorious characters of the Black Lagoon series, and a job well done! the character design is pretty much immaculate and looks exactly like Revy, helping the viewer make out her silhouette out from the drawing and the anatomy is also smoothly and neatly executed so thats also a plus, I have no clue how artists can make their drawings so damn smooth with little to no flaws but it seems that youve also achieved this as well, so congrats! You seem to have gotten her character style perfect as well, over all a really damn good piece, now for improvements, the only thing I can suggest for this is shadows, and background shading, try experimenting with a multiply layer with cold and warm colours, this will make your backgrounds significantly more appealing to look at, also remember to shade your background depending on which direction your light source is coming from, so a more saturated and darker value across the background to our right, depending on the material (I assume this is the torpedo boat they have) you will also want highlights, also try using references for your backgrund, simplicity is good but you want it to look natural, so waves, shading relative to the light source, and glints would look cool on the sea, and also a shading gradient across the sky, also remember that if you want, try shading with more saturated values instead of less luminous values with your shading to look more natural, over all a really damn good job and an angry tough girl to go with it! congrats
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Very good points about the bg with example, highly appreciated!
By the way, I think you're from ProjectComment , remember to add their tag when giving reviews!
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Thanks! Apparently, should do (the bg)!
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What I would GIVE UP for more Black Lagoon anime!
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Wonderful piece of art!
Body building is actually quite well done for the pose and perspective used in the illustration.
I also quite like the facial expression you gave her.
Regarding the outfit, you did a great job with her outfit, especially when it came to giving her something that a girl soldier (or mercenary?) Could actually wear.
You also did a pretty satisfying job with the shadows on her body and clothing, which I sometimes feel may be the most important thing in this class of art pieces.
Overall fabulous / wonderful illustration!
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Thank you for encouragement!
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It was a pleasure...!.
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A bit basic for the gun design, but that tattoo and the lighting are very well done.
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Thanks, gotta work on them weapons!
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Personal comment
god its been along time sins i have seen Revy makes me want to go back and watch black lagoon all over again lol though the show was that good you dont really need a reason to go back and watch it again lol,
Constructive comment
your body work is quite nice, though it would be nice to see a little soft shading in the skin,
i would like to see her hair a little thinner also, the original had Revys hair tightly bound in the pony tail showing the shape of her head, as original style fan art i would not say anything about that, as over all its not bad, just if your trying to go for a original look, then yeah, thinner oilier hair is the way to go,
as for the nipple, given there a little off sided, if your going to add them i would recommend getting them to look like there at the same level and same shape, right now they kind of look like implants, not attacking im just saying they look a little off,
background is a little solid, some more shading would be nice, and a little detail in the ground, or brick work, the clouds could be different shapes over lapping and all, also with a bit of heavy rain darker parts,
the only thing i have to say about her boots is, there perfect, other then 1 thing, you left out her shoe laces, given it takes a while to draw them in straight i can understand leaving them out, though given her boots are pretty much center point i the picture, and pretty big, i would have aimed for getting them in,
detail is over all lacking though it is a very nice picture, with a little more work i could see this going viral, if i was going to recommend something to work on, i would go with more detail, little things big things, like the detail in her belt or guns, even giving her her side holsters,
over all though this is a very nice picture, i would love to see some more of Revy someday, keep it up doing a grate job,
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One of the best construtive comments I've received this far! It seems I should really put more efforts to the backgrounds, especially the details (but... dem waifus!) Anyway, good points on the authenticity. Guess I just had to add a bit personal preference there 
Thank you for your time!
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^^ no problem, i used to teach drawing to a small class and i tend to enjoy helping people and seeing how they improve, (was not a real class just a charity thing i did for a group of people in jail)
at your current skill level, i can clearly see that you have a good hand and eye for the work, but in saying that, a issue that comes up with most people is time, for example i can spend about 6 hours on 1 peace of work, but to save time i brake that up over several days, but the 6 is where i cut my self off and say that's enough, given that i stop at 6 hours if i want to add more detail in after i have finished, i keep that in mind for the next time and try to add a little bit more detail and try to work that little bit faster to get it in, but that's just personal preference, given that i work with traditional mediums its a bit different from digital work timing,
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No problem feel free to check out my art
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Hi, the lady is nice, but the Beretta could use some love as well.
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I noticed the gun before the lady.
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