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Published: 2013-07-07 22:30:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 26242; Favourites: 131; Downloads: 265
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Description The beginning of the end.

Sombra sheds some light on what is to happen, but then again you should know what that is.

CMC 10k: The Shadow of Grief is next in this subchapter. Its up, just follow the link below. And all the other links.... Youse betta!
Hah! I just noticed that in order to post this I had to hit the submit, and then the submit now button. Wonder who runs DA......

Silence and submit to me..... Your work.



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The Light of Despair 2
The Lost Prequel 1
Friend or Foe Cover
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Comments: 158

Acacia-Rabbit-Desert In reply to ??? [2013-07-13 20:13:13 +0000 UTC]

For some reason, it reminds me of ganondorf. XD

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lyrathelidragon In reply to ??? [2013-07-12 16:16:08 +0000 UTC]

yellow?

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GatesMcCloud In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-12 16:18:39 +0000 UTC]

Yellow what, yellowing? You're just a ow away from yelling mister!

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lyrathelidragon In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-12 16:21:05 +0000 UTC]

it means hellow. and I`M A FEMALE!!!!

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GatesMcCloud In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-12 16:48:07 +0000 UTC]

You're looking for 'ello or yello, mistah.

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lyrathelidragon In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-12 21:28:26 +0000 UTC]

I`m a female.

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GatesMcCloud In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-12 23:30:20 +0000 UTC]

You didn't see what I did there? Miss-tah sistah?

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lyrathelidragon In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-13 00:03:52 +0000 UTC]

:cionquestionmarkplz:

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GatesMcCloud In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-13 00:12:00 +0000 UTC]

Its a play on words! Argh! Play with your words!

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lyrathelidragon In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-13 00:30:16 +0000 UTC]

your yelling again.

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GatesMcCloud In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-13 01:01:46 +0000 UTC]

Eyup.

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lyrathelidragon In reply to ??? [2013-07-11 02:50:54 +0000 UTC]

OH YEAH!! I WAS ALSO MEAN TO TELL THAT I`LL UNFAV YOUR COMICS!!

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GatesMcCloud In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-11 05:57:25 +0000 UTC]

NOT BEFORE ME!

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lyrathelidragon In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-12 02:40:50 +0000 UTC]

oh yes I can.

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GatesMcCloud In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-12 02:51:41 +0000 UTC]

No you can't, you aren't evening yelling...

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lyrathelidragon In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-12 02:54:57 +0000 UTC]

well yelling isn`t my thing.

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GatesMcCloud In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-12 02:59:09 +0000 UTC]

Come on, you can do it. Just a little one.

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lyrathelidragon In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-12 13:46:12 +0000 UTC]

nope. :iconmlpbigmacplz:

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GatesMcCloud In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-12 13:59:51 +0000 UTC]

Eyup.

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lyrathelidragon In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-12 15:33:56 +0000 UTC]

LOL!!

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lyrathelidragon [2013-07-10 07:59:03 +0000 UTC]

I don`t think that the version of your sombra fits right, maybe you should make his crown more fierce and have his eyes glow beatty red and have his fangs show out more, and stick to the origional, if that`s okay to you GatesMcCloud.

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GatesMcCloud In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-10 15:10:08 +0000 UTC]

OPINIONS?! HERE?! IN MY GALLERY!? ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH!

If I stuck to the original then all of your suggestions would of been axed. His crown, well the decor on the crown is very small and sits behind the horn thus not drawing attention. My crown is as big as I want it, and some of it is covered by Sombra's flowing eyebrows. His eyes actually glow green, both in my pic and in the show, its very subtle. His fangs didn't change from the original, I didn't change them. The only things that can be change to any real effect are his eye f/x and his hair.
And Sombra is all about that flowing mane. And beard. And eyebrows. And MORE!

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lyrathelidragon In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-11 01:39:23 +0000 UTC]

ok....I`m just saying..... and didn`t I mention (if you want to) in a calm way to explain it. and another THING!!! YOU DIDN`T SEE THAT OPINION CLEARLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I GET OTHER PEAPLE`S OPINIONS PERIODS OF TIMES TO SEE IF I CAN DO MY WORK IN A WAY THAT`S PROFESSIONAL OR EVEN TO UNCONDITIONALLY HELP ME!!!!!! SO DON`T EVEN DARE MESS WITH THE DRAGON!!!!!

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GatesMcCloud In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-11 02:09:33 +0000 UTC]

I DARE POKE THE DRAGON WITH A STICK! A STICK MADE OF OPINIONS! OPINIONS OF ARRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!

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lyrathelidragon In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-11 02:23:14 +0000 UTC]

no BUT YOU CLEARLY NEED TO CALM DOWN!!! IF YOU GO TO MY GALLERY, YOU`LL HOW MANY DRAWINGS I`VE BEEN CREATING, DESPERATELY TRYING SOOOOO HARD TO PERFECT IT!!!! OPINIONS DON`T HURT ME!!!!

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GatesMcCloud In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-11 02:34:08 +0000 UTC]

IF OPINIONS DON"T HURT YOU I'LL TRY YELLING! YEEELLLLLLLLLLIIIIINNNNNNNNGGGGGG!!!!!!!
AAAAARRRRRGGGGHHHH!!!!!!!!

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lyrathelidragon In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-11 02:44:31 +0000 UTC]

ya know what, I`m not talking to you anymore, cuase that is the may to be the mature one PEST!!!! (HISSSSS!!!)

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GatesMcCloud In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-11 05:57:02 +0000 UTC]

I liked it better when we were yelling because you cannot truly know someone until you scream in their face for hours on end.

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lyrathelidragon In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-12 02:42:06 +0000 UTC]

that is not true, unlesss you befriend him/her,and then you can yell at them.

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GatesMcCloud In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-12 02:51:42 +0000 UTC]

You dare question the ancient art of face screaming!?

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lyrathelidragon In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-12 02:55:08 +0000 UTC]

yep.

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GatesMcCloud In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-12 02:58:43 +0000 UTC]

Well wheres the fun in that?

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lyrathelidragon In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-11 02:04:03 +0000 UTC]

oh please your gonna use that affect on me!?!! HA!! (transforms in to black dragon with red markings of the shadows then screeches in demonic high pitch, to call the destroyer (evil of all golems) then creates a belt of fire in the battlefield and destroyes all of the trixie statues then uses red crystals to attack trixie and turned her into a black crystal that remains in the carnage of the battle.)

Like I said don`t mess with the dragon.

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GatesMcCloud In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-11 06:01:43 +0000 UTC]

What, another foal dares to enter in my domain? Paltry amateurish tricks.

*The Trixie statues come to life, unscathed. They glow red and begin to grin.

Myah hah ha hah hah hah! Tell me future slave, what is your hat size?

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lyrathelidragon In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-12 02:46:13 +0000 UTC]

"bah! you can never controll the dark master. MWA ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!! (eyes begin to glow red and shows small lightningbolts comming out of the corner of his eyes and begins to crack the statue and it blows up in to pieces) it seems that you are the slave PEST!"

(makes an evil grin then disappears in to the shadows)

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GatesMcCloud In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-12 02:58:06 +0000 UTC]

Oh, color Trixie not surprised. As if I've never heard, "oh you can never win Trixie", or, "I'll never serve you Trixie" or the like. And like always I have to reeducate foals that choose to defy me.

*The statue remains intact. It glows red. More statues appear from the ground, all glowing red.*

You face the conqueror of worlds with cheap tricks?

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lyrathelidragon In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-12 13:45:15 +0000 UTC]

:iconevilcynderplz: {LOOK I`M NOT WHAT YOU CALLED A PONY!!!!! I`M A DRAGON,A DRAGON!!!! and he`ll destroy you PEST!!!!! and didn`t he already used the destroyer to drain all you magic in the previous comment!?}

{yes, that you can never reduce, young pest.
maybe you don`t get what a dark master is!AND MY TRICKS ARE`NT CHEAP!!!} (the dark master reuses the golem to destroy the red staues as if they are like breakable plastic materias, then shoots a convexity fire ball to destroy trixie once and for all. she is now dead) {AH ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! and you are right about the conquere of worlds pest!!

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GatesMcCloud In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-12 14:15:49 +0000 UTC]

Ooh! Aah! Oh no! I'm dead, oh wait, I'm Trixie.

*A giant stone hand erupts from the ground, grabbing the dark master. The hand rises higher and higher revealing itself to be a giant stone Trixie. Its eyes glow the same red as Trixie's. It begins to speak.*

Silly little lizard. I have conquered countless worlds across hundreds of realms, all feeding me power. You are just a tiny insect to me. *The eyes glow more intense, producing a hum.* Unless the next words to come out of your mouth are "Hail Trixie", I'll be preforming some light field lobotomy.

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lyrathelidragon In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-12 15:33:48 +0000 UTC]

(he channels most of his energy and creates a convexity shield that defies all kinds of magic.{hah! you obviously think you can conquere me! hah! I am the legendary purple dragon with unlimited power that`s beyond and creatures mind and I shall awaken by undead army!!! (he bellows out a demonic roar and the carnage starts to surrounding the shadow hand and it glows purple then the hand crushes the evil statue then makes the pony look normal again. {any last words pest.(he he sneered in trixie`s face crushing her neck in his grasp enjoying the dying pony`s torture.

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lyrathelidragon In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-12 16:19:10 +0000 UTC]

{hmmm. it looks like that I`ve won, since you are`nt able to respond back GatesMcCloud. (malefor breaks the hand that holds him hostage and leaves the battle field to return home to avalar in his well of souls.

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GatesMcCloud In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-12 16:17:28 +0000 UTC]

*Trixie looks back and lets out a sigh*

You could of been the first to take the easy way out.

*The body crumbles into dirt. A loud boom cracks through the air.*

Now you will learn that it means to face the Conqueror of Worlds!

*Her voice echos through the air. Trixie towers over the landscape, looking down. Her massive hoof arcs through the sky and comes crashing down on top of the dragon splitting the land in two.*

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lyrathelidragon In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-12 16:26:30 +0000 UTC]

{i had just left you, you idiot!!!!!!! besides your only destroying the battle field for nothing now!!!! (as he communicates through a dark purple crystal that can drain some of trixie`s magic. oh and that`s a decoy your killing. (the makes a face that reads "SMART @SS") DRAGONS RULE AND PONIES DROOLE. (in a singsong voice.) oh and hears a gift for your stupidity. (sends a purple box through a portal.)

{ TRIXIE!!!!!!!! (then blows up all over the world and leaves trixie in ashes and blood.)

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GatesMcCloud In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-12 16:53:46 +0000 UTC]

*Trixie puts her hoof through the portal*

You're an idiot. You give me a way to track you to where you are? Me? The Conqueror of Worlds?

*Trixie expands the portal turning it a bright red. The gift whiffs out as Trixie passes through it.*

Foal, your world has come to an end. It will soon belong to The Great and Powerful Trixie!

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lyrathelidragon In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-12 21:29:17 +0000 UTC]

{uhhhh no you can`t.

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GatesMcCloud In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-12 23:30:10 +0000 UTC]

Trixie totally can.

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lyrathelidragon In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-13 00:04:08 +0000 UTC]

?

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GatesMcCloud In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-13 00:11:14 +0000 UTC]

Trixie questions if she truly wishes to conquer this place.

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lyrathelidragon In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-13 00:30:03 +0000 UTC]

nope. only a dragon can.

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GatesMcCloud In reply to lyrathelidragon [2013-07-13 00:59:55 +0000 UTC]

Hah! As if something like that could stop me. No I question something else...

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lyrathelidragon In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-13 01:01:28 +0000 UTC]

{geeze, you really don`t know so much of dragon-ology.

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