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Published: 2013-07-07 22:30:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 26241; Favourites: 131; Downloads: 265
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Description The beginning of the end.

Sombra sheds some light on what is to happen, but then again you should know what that is.

CMC 10k: The Shadow of Grief is next in this subchapter. Its up, just follow the link below. And all the other links.... Youse betta!
Hah! I just noticed that in order to post this I had to hit the submit, and then the submit now button. Wonder who runs DA......

Silence and submit to me..... Your work.



The Shadow of Grief cover
The Light of Despair 2
The Lost Prequel 1
Friend or Foe Cover
Chapter 1 cover
Lulamoon Cover
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Comments: 158

GatesMcCloud In reply to ??? [2013-07-13 01:02:45 +0000 UTC]

Foal! You know not enough of Trixie! Nothing can stop me!

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lyrathelidragon In reply to ??? [2013-07-12 16:43:58 +0000 UTC]

dang it! I MENT TO HAVE THE ICON OF TWILIGHT FROM MLP.

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Trueblue02 In reply to ??? [2013-07-08 22:38:41 +0000 UTC]

oh shit he's got a beard to go wit dem sideburns now!!! all hope is lost!!!!!

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allanah In reply to ??? [2013-07-08 08:19:46 +0000 UTC]

How did Cadance turn? I saw Shining turn evil, but last panel she seemed fine. Very awesome comic though

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GatesMcCloud In reply to allanah [2013-07-08 13:59:55 +0000 UTC]

Alot happens inbetween pages that I don't show due to it being a short comic.

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blacknight71 In reply to ??? [2013-07-08 03:20:26 +0000 UTC]

Holy smokes................I think i'll leave and make haste for the inbound Imperium.

But for the most part, ready for more.

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Scarheart76 In reply to ??? [2013-07-08 00:45:18 +0000 UTC]

*insert typical maniacal laughter*
Anytime the villains laugh like this, they get their butts handed to them later on.

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DarthWill3 In reply to ??? [2013-07-08 00:28:57 +0000 UTC]

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shardstar3 In reply to ??? [2013-07-07 23:16:21 +0000 UTC]

:we need more of these comics work on it SLAVE

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GatesMcCloud In reply to shardstar3 [2013-07-07 23:26:36 +0000 UTC]

Silence you crystal obessed wannabe, this slave is Trixie's.



Um, don't I have a say in this?

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shardstar3 In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-08 00:38:09 +0000 UTC]

: *traps trixe in chrystal* now make the comics my slave

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GatesMcCloud In reply to shardstar3 [2013-07-08 00:55:41 +0000 UTC]

Myuh hah ha hah hah! *Shatters crystal* Foal! You will be Sombra 154 on my list of Sombra's I've beaten.
No pony takes from The Great and Powerful Trixie!

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shardstar3 In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-08 04:14:27 +0000 UTC]

*sombra ge*ts exploded by a rocket launcher and so does trixie and Shard has the rpg

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GatesMcCloud In reply to shardstar3 [2013-07-08 13:56:03 +0000 UTC]

Foal! I do not share the same weakness for explosions as Sombra! *Trixie grabs the rocket and flings it into orbit* A marvelous day for Trixie, two new slaves. Typing slave, summon my Shining Guards!


Oh no, I only type, I don't do that other stuff.

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shardstar3 In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-08 14:50:36 +0000 UTC]

shard:. . .*shard starts tuanting trixie about how "great and powerful she really is"* shard:you couldnt even beat me in a magic duel!

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GatesMcCloud In reply to shardstar3 [2013-07-08 15:06:28 +0000 UTC]

Myuh hah ha hah! Trixie doesn't duel, that is beneath me! Lesser me, appear!

Yes master.

Show this foal what it means to oppose me.

I obey. None can oppose the Great and Powerful. You will be Trixied, you will be Trixied, you will be Trixied.

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shardstar3 In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-08 15:09:43 +0000 UTC]

shard:. . .really thats a stupid line the "you will be trixed" line. what you want to give me fruit loops or something. *wings vanish and horn appears*

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GatesMcCloud In reply to shardstar3 [2013-07-08 15:27:06 +0000 UTC]

Oh no, first we'll give you a new hat, and a new cutie mark, and a full frontal lobotomy. Just like that one.

Obey, obey, obey.

Do not disappoint Trixie, Lesser me. Take the foal.

By your command.

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shardstar3 In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-08 15:45:15 +0000 UTC]

*shard shoots a orb at the lesser trixie and the lesser trixie has been rule 34d and is filly size*

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GatesMcCloud In reply to shardstar3 [2013-07-08 22:29:44 +0000 UTC]

Foalish foal! You think mere tricks like those can stop my minions? Myah hah hah ah hah! *Trixie accidently's the spell* Excellent, my Shining Guard are here. Seize the foal.

Hail Trixie! By your command.
Hail Trixie! By your command.
Hail Trixie! By your command.
Hail Trixie! By your command.

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shardstar3 In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-08 23:56:29 +0000 UTC]

shard:. . .*shard shoots shining's with sleep darts* boop

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GatesMcCloud In reply to shardstar3 [2013-07-09 00:30:33 +0000 UTC]

*The Shining Armors angle their armor deflecting the darts back*

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shardstar3 In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-09 00:33:21 +0000 UTC]

*shard just thwacks the darts at trixe and uses his magic to break trixie's shield as well

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GatesMcCloud In reply to shardstar3 [2013-07-09 00:46:09 +0000 UTC]

*Trixie's shield fails to break*

Foal, I've faced countless alicorns, you'll need better magic than.

*The lesser Trixie casts a bubble around Shard. The Shining Guard begin to charge*

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shardstar3 In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-09 00:50:42 +0000 UTC]

*shards eyes glow and there is a gigantic blast breaking the bubble and making Trixie lose focus and shard does 3 flame booms upward (anything within shards radius is burnt to a crisp)* shard:YOU WANT TO SEE POWER ILL SHOW YOU POWER

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GatesMcCloud In reply to shardstar3 [2013-07-09 01:18:11 +0000 UTC]

*The flame washes over Trixie and her minions yet they remain unscathed. Trixie's eyes glow more red, she smiles.*

Go ahead, show me. When the last of your free will is drained from you I want you to know that every ounce of your power was not enough to stop The Great and Powerful Trixie, conqueror of worlds!

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shardstar3 In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-09 01:23:33 +0000 UTC]

shard:. . .you know what *sshard looks at a object on his hoof* ohhh wrong universe. . .trixe this is an alternate universe meaning you never won in the real universe so you are just a fail in almost every universe

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GatesMcCloud In reply to shardstar3 [2013-07-09 01:49:57 +0000 UTC]

*Portals begin to open, soldiers begin pouring out, all dressed the same. Countless Celestia's, Luna's and Cadance's fill the sky, all wearing hats.*
I beg to differ. I think you've taken a wrong turn, now you, and your world belongs to Trixe, myuh huu huu ah hah ha hah! You'll see that this Trixie never failed. MYAH HAH HA HAH HAH HAH HAH!

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shardstar3 In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-09 01:57:18 +0000 UTC]

*face palms*shard:you do know *shard snaps his fingers and 5 black holes open sucking all of the ponies Trixie summoned into them and all of the luna's cadences Tia's with haves are now gone* suprize im a time lord the time master in fact i can control time and space *47 portals open and different versions of Trixie some from fallout equestria some who use the alicorn amulet for good and etc one thing in common they all know what friendship is and have friends*

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GatesMcCloud In reply to shardstar3 [2013-07-09 03:21:06 +0000 UTC]

*Trixie reverses the black holes, more portals open with more troops pouring out*

What is this fascination with these time lords? Sigh. Troops, present arms.

*Trixie's troops drops their firearms and pull out sonic screwdrivers*

Those were not made by me, future slave. Those were taken. By me. Hah, you summon lesser verisons of myself? Trixie has mines full of lesser Trixies. I have fought countless beings like you, all of which shared one common element. You all underestimated my power. Myah hah hah ha hah!

*The sky begins to turn red. Lightning arcs across the sky. Trixie begins to radiate with more power.*

Tell me, master of time, what color hat will you be wearing? Myah hah hah ha hah!

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shardstar3 In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-09 03:35:46 +0000 UTC]

*shard vanishes and so do the trixes and trixie's castle is exploding and falls down and it also happens with her cart and house*

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GatesMcCloud In reply to shardstar3 [2013-07-09 05:37:55 +0000 UTC]

You can not hide from me! Trixie will find you and your world!

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shardstar3 In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-09 06:18:06 +0000 UTC]

*shard appears with the union of the elements of insanity (if you don't know then search them up on youtube) shards cutie mark is a shield with a flaming skull and swords behind the shield and a scythe stabbed into the skull and shards eyes are red and his mane and tail are Orange and blue, his skin is purple and he is a Pegasus*

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GatesMcCloud In reply to shardstar3 [2013-07-09 15:27:27 +0000 UTC]

Its too late future slave, the shift has already occurred! This world is now a part of my empire! And with it all of its power, added to my own! What little chance you had before is now gone, you face me in Trixie's domain, you face my Great and Powerful empire!

*Trixie begins to grow larger and larger, towering over all. Ships are visible in the sky, more and more troops pour through.*

Bring what ever help you want. *Trixie's voice booms through the air* In the end they will all become my slaves. Myah hah ha hah hah!

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shardstar3 In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-09 15:52:05 +0000 UTC]

*shard pulls out a sword and so do the other elements* shard:times a wastin *every enemy shard kills he eats that enemy's soul and grows larger every soul he eats*

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GatesMcCloud In reply to shardstar3 [2013-07-09 16:16:35 +0000 UTC]

*Trixie smashes her hoof into the ground, flattening any caught underneath. She points to the crater she just made.*

Fire at that location.

*Pillars of light fall from the sky covering the crater and anything near Trixie as her ships in orbit let loose with their cannons.*

Myah hah ha hah hah hah!

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shardstar3 In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-09 16:26:20 +0000 UTC]

*shard is 2 x the size of trixie* shard:. . .8shard reflects the light pillars at trixie with a mirror*

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GatesMcCloud In reply to shardstar3 [2013-07-09 17:28:19 +0000 UTC]

*Trixie's laugh is still heard as her ships continue to fire. She steps out of the light unscathed.*

Foals, you think that would harm me? *She motions to her ships* Continue firing at my location! *Trixie lunges forward* This is merely the opening moves! *She sweeps her hoof across the battlefield as she charges, the ground rips open under Shard's allies, gouts of flame erupt from below as destruction rains down from the ships above.*

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shardstar3 In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-09 21:04:04 +0000 UTC]

*shard jumps and puts the ships in a cerial bowl and eats them all and has saved the elements of chaos(or whatever i said)

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GatesMcCloud In reply to shardstar3 [2013-07-09 21:20:58 +0000 UTC]

*Trixie grabs Shard as he flies up and slams him to the ground.*

Where do you think you're going? Your size means nothing to me!

*The ground begins to shake as a giant hand made of rock and earth grabs Shard from below*

This world is mine, every part of it.

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shardstar3 In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-09 21:33:35 +0000 UTC]

*shard glows* shard:thats where youre wrong *shard's wings turn into demon pony wings and his hooves grow into claws and the rocks break adn shard gets up and stands on his back hooves andone of his legs turn into a lions back paw* im more powerful *shard punches trixie and shoots her with a gun when he throws her in the air*

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GatesMcCloud In reply to shardstar3 [2013-07-10 00:34:53 +0000 UTC]

*Trixie catches the punch. She stares into Shard's eyes. Trixie starts to glow more red, her eyes fade, black and red lightning arc over her body.*

Heh heh ha hah hah ha hah!

*Trixie horns glows intensely. She fires at point blank range hitting Shard in the chest and setting off a giant explosion.*

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shardstar3 In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-10 00:41:03 +0000 UTC]

*shard's protecive magic barriar blocks the hit* shard:heh heh *shard also seems to be wearing a green gem thats in the shape of a hero and has ironm braces to hold it on his neck* you do know the amulet im wearing is a lot more powerful than yours

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GatesMcCloud In reply to shardstar3 [2013-07-10 00:51:07 +0000 UTC]

I grew past trinkets and baubles a long time ago.

*Trixie rips off the alicorn amulet she was wearing*

I have a chest full of those.

*Trixie stares intensely at the gem around Shard's neck. It begins to glow, brighter and brighter until it begins to crack.*

And you would bring toys that I once used? You face solely my power. You understand what you face now? No trinkets, no baubles, no tricks, only Trixie.

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shardstar3 In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-10 00:53:17 +0000 UTC]

*shard rips the supposed "amulet" off his chest*
shard:also the amulet i was wearing was fake. and for a good fight no magic

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GatesMcCloud In reply to shardstar3 [2013-07-11 00:29:47 +0000 UTC]

Hah! I am nothing but magic. Now watch in awe!

*The ground shakes more and a giant hoof of stone erupts from the ground. More comes out until a giant stone Trixie stands towering over the battlefield. Soon more stone Trixie's burst up through the ground.

I don't need lesser me's when I can have an army of myself.

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shardstar3 In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-11 19:41:11 +0000 UTC]

Shard:. . .*shard has a tiny machine that sucks every bit of magic out of that lifeform or gem and fires it at trixie taking her power and reverting her back to her normal size*

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GatesMcCloud In reply to shardstar3 [2013-07-11 20:27:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh, does your little toy absorb my magic? Here, have more!

*Trixie fills her construct with more and more magic, turning it a bright red. The machine overlords and explodes.*

Unlike your little toy, Trixie has no limits.

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shardstar3 In reply to GatesMcCloud [2013-07-11 23:32:02 +0000 UTC]

Shard:. . .*shard says unknown words and diffrent words in the unknown language*

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GatesMcCloud In reply to shardstar3 [2013-07-16 18:41:31 +0000 UTC]

You think that'll end this? Hah hah ha hah hah!

*Trixie begins to float, slowing ascending into the sky. She glows more and more red. Her ships start to slowly move out of view.*

This is my world, and I'll show you what happens to worlds that have served their purpose!

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