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Published: 2017-01-16 20:28:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 774; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 1
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I'm not sure if there are special circumstances delaying these weekly updates or just general ineptitude, but here's the final page nontheless. It's not my strongest effort in terms of plotting or dialouge, really... Most of it is Bonkie monolouging about his thought process or describing what's happening to us as if the action didn't speak for itself. Perhaps there is a lesson to learn from here.Previous page:Β gato88.deviantart.com/art/Remoβ¦
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Bonkie's boss isn't gonna be too happy with a review like this.
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True! I feel like having Bonkie agonize over the review could be a story all unto itself. We'll see! Thanks for reading!Β
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Looks like the cop is indeed so traumatized he doesn't even want to live. Β Nice touch with the parody of Chitty-Chitty-Bang-Bang. Β And Bonkie ends up with one final negative experience from how the car works. Β At least he's determined to keep his journalistic integrity intact now.
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Indeed! Perhaps an interesting angle would be to focus on Bonkie wrestling with his ideals while turning in a favorable review. It's one of the reasons I feel this comic is a little undercooked - It seems like there could have been more. But I'm also excited to move on to more exciting comic projects. Thanks for reading!Β
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And that folks, is the "tail" end of our story.
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Another comic, another pun! Well, it's more like wordplay, I guess.
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Poor that cop. he will wake up screaming from now of. xD
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Let's hope years of rehabilitation will get him back on his feet.
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This was a traumatic experience for everyone involved! Except maybe the tow truck guy. He seems to have gotten out of it pretty OK.
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