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geek-next-door — My FMA OC

Published: 2010-10-17 18:15:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 347; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 9
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Description Her ass is too small here :U

Before I begin this~:

Yes it is a FMA OC.
No, I can't draw in the FMA/Hiromu Arakawa style. Shaddup.
Yes, I realize she is a bit Sue-ish D:
No, I will not change that she is an alchemist.


... Also, she somehow scored a like 6 on that FMA Sue test thingy. IDK HOW. I thought she get a somewhere around a 50. Also, what time period would FMA most likely fit into? It's not *here* per se. So yeah, I'm stumped. Cause I want her to play the modern classical guitar, invented in the 20th century, so I don't know if it would fit in...

I've divided her bio into two sections: the normal, written one and stats. (dont' expect complete sentences, I'm too lazy)

Her Bio:
Name: Maddison "Mad" Gray
Age: 17
Gender: female
Appearance: See above.
Height: 5'6"
Military Affiliation: Family members are/were in the military.
Alchemy: Mainly metals, but dabbles in some other mediums too.
Does it come naturally for her?: Hell no.
Relation to/relationship with the Elric brothers: Forcibly (on their part) traveling together. In the beginning, she was stalking them. They (Ed and Mad) were mutual assailants. They (all three) become... friends to an extent.
Love interests?: Hell no... If it was up to her Edward Elric, eventually/not for a whiiiiile.
Family: (all minor characters) Father, brother, and aunt.
Style clothing: Baggy, simple and darker colors (it's explained later!). She usually has a black jacket, not shown here. And boots if not, loafers of some sort.
Likes: Being alone, pleasing others (mindfckwut), making people (Ed) mad, alchemy, fixing things, kids, laziness, music/singing, food
Dislikes: Ed, people, putting effort in, being made fun of, ketchup, orange juice, white chocolate, a lot of other things
Theme song: Pray for You by Jaron and the Long Road to Love

Personality: Sort of a bitch. She's anti-social. She loves her family. Never met her mother. She's inappropriate half the time. She is very stubborn and always wants things her way. She thinks she's the best. However, she's really insecure. Hence how she dresses. Also, she is a fatass in some ways (she IS a bit overweight and is out of shape)

History: Her dad left the military for two reasons: to have a family and he lost his leg in combat. When he was in the military, he was searching for the Stone. His motivations were unknown but most likely it was simply to find it. Her mother died after giving birth to Mad (it is rumored that her dad actually killed her or that he tried to bring her back, due to odd things surrounding the time of her death). Her brother joined the military as soon as he turned 18 (He is 28). That left Mad with her father in Stollser, their town. She helped him run the repair shop while he taught her alchemy. Two months prior to the story, he gave up on finding the Stone, plunging into a deep depression.

Extra: She wears three, thick metal bracelets on each wrist. They have transmutation circles on them, she utilizes them as a dagger for her weapon in a pinch.

Stats: (subject to increase over time, this is at the start of the story)
Friendliness: 3/10
Alchemy:5/10
Hand-to hand: 2/10
Intelligence:
Under pressure: 8/10
Normally: 4/10
Cunning: 6/10
Witty: 6/10
Looks: 6/10


I'll update this more, if/when I edit her. I'll also add more later.


Spoiler-ish (about Mad, not FMA): She lightens up eventually and starts to like Ed... eventually.

About the image:
Tools: oC and tablet
Time: about 1.5 hours
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Comments: 10

HolyCowWorshipper [2010-10-18 19:00:56 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'm not an expert but I really don't think she sound sue-ish! Just don't let her loose any limbs! XD Or DO and then don't give her automail!! :U ....*steals idea*

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geek-next-door In reply to HolyCowWorshipper [2010-10-18 23:39:35 +0000 UTC]

Lmao, thanks for the advice. And yay for inspiration? xD
The most I was thinking about doing automail with her was doing something with her hand or something, having her lose it repairing equipment or something. But decided against it cause I'm just a sucker for weird limbs and such especially when they can transform

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HolyCowWorshipper In reply to geek-next-door [2010-10-19 16:39:04 +0000 UTC]

Haha! Okey!

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Bas-Rave [2010-10-17 22:51:13 +0000 UTC]

Nice OC! I don't think she's suish, she has a good balance of positive and negative traits... I do think you should make a reason for her dad wanting to get the philosophers stone. But I'm not an expert, so you don't have to listen to me:3

She's cute too, I really like her hair^ ^

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geek-next-door In reply to Bas-Rave [2010-10-18 00:44:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you
I was trying to think of reasons, I know one will be reviving his dead wife, but I need to think of one for before that xD

Thank you so much

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Bas-Rave In reply to geek-next-door [2010-10-18 00:52:19 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome~

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Vexic929 [2010-10-17 20:26:04 +0000 UTC]

Edward Elric was born in 1899 if that helps ^^ cool OC btw!

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geek-next-door In reply to Vexic929 [2010-10-17 21:04:48 +0000 UTC]

That does help~ Thank you
And thanks for the fav and comment and all that wonderful stuff

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Vexic929 In reply to geek-next-door [2010-10-17 21:19:15 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome!! thank you for the llama!! ^^

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geek-next-door In reply to Vexic929 [2010-10-17 21:20:28 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, no problem

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