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Published: 2017-01-24 18:38:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 2132; Favourites: 82; Downloads: 10
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Idea by AnimatorGirl2003 : "ruby discovering a cookie"When critiquing, please include at least one negative aspect aside from detail or quality.
Have a sketch idea? Sketches (Comment!)I've made up my mind about drawing stuff for this semester of school.
Being blunt, 4komas are mostly out of the question. Fully-complete drawings are also highly unlikely.
Having said that, I want to keep practicing, and the best way to do that is sketches. If you look at my more recent status updates, I've been doing some sketchies that were meant to practice a certain area. Smile was front-face, the second was shadowing and rightward-facing faces, the third was expression and downwards-facing faces. A while back, I also made some other sketchy-type drawings. (Even more stuff on Patreon, too.)
This gets boring, however. So! I ask that y'all comment some ideas for sketches. Make them interesting. I can do characters, in poses/scenarios, but they're not going to be detailed. They're not going to come out
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Comments: 17
ZahlenO [2017-01-24 18:58:28 +0000 UTC]
Overall
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Impact
I mean. It's a simple piece I think it's cute. I don't think it's amazing, but I don't think it's terrible. I'd say that the scratch marks and the doodles and the leftover sketch marks distract a bit from the content. Granted, hard to tell that the cookie is a cookie mainly because of the inconsistent shading. I can't exactly tell what you were going for there.
Try varying your stroke marks more to get more depth? Also make sure to erase your early sketch lines.
There's a random line on her scarf's neck portion: don't exactly know what that's for.
Overall, cute picture. Somewhat lacking in the organized appearance, but hey: that's what a sketch is lol.
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geek96boolean10 In reply to ZahlenO [2017-01-24 19:04:07 +0000 UTC]
I guess I forgot to mention this in this particular upload:
When critiquing, please include at least one negative aspect aside from detail or quality.
But your critique is still valid.
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ZahlenO In reply to geek96boolean10 [2017-01-25 00:57:09 +0000 UTC]
The sketch lines are probably the biggest issue I found: it's distracting.
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geek96boolean10 In reply to ZahlenO [2017-01-25 01:37:19 +0000 UTC]
without a doubt, i agree. but this series was meant to be a more relaxed set of artwork, where cleanliness is totally disregarded and all that matters is the content.
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GrayLantern13 [2017-08-31 16:41:03 +0000 UTC]
ALL PRAISE THE COOKIE EMPRESS!!! THE ONE TRUE GODDESS OF MAN KIND!!! XD
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lu40953 [2017-01-26 16:05:16 +0000 UTC]
ahahaha! that's absolutely hilarious XD the eyes are the best part
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blued1500 [2017-01-24 19:39:15 +0000 UTC]
By the power of Beacon! I haz the COOKIE!!... Sorry, couldn't resist
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geek96boolean10 In reply to jots1106 [2017-01-24 19:07:22 +0000 UTC]
make a request then :3 but i'm not going to draw the same thing twice.
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jots1106 In reply to geek96boolean10 [2017-01-24 19:25:09 +0000 UTC]
I will if I ever get a good ideA
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