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geek96boolean10 — 2017 Sketches - Ozelot Series - 'Bouncy'

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Published: 2017-01-30 22:29:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 1428; Favourites: 44; Downloads: 5
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Description Idea from WingedOzelot : "RWBY bouncing away on springs attached to their feet"


When critiquing, please include at least one negative aspect aside from detail or quality.

Have a sketch idea?  Sketches (Comment!)I've made up my mind about drawing stuff for this semester of school.
Being blunt, 4komas are mostly out of the question. Fully-complete drawings are also highly unlikely.
Having said that, I want to keep practicing, and the best way to do that is sketches. If you look at my more recent status updates, I've been doing some sketchies that were meant to practice a certain area. Smile was front-face, the second was shadowing and rightward-facing faces, the third was expression and downwards-facing faces. A while back, I also made some other sketchy-type drawings. (Even more stuff on Patreon, too.)
         
This gets boring, however. So! I ask that y'all comment some ideas for sketches. Make them interesting. I can do characters, in poses/scenarios, but they're not going to be detailed. They're not going to come out
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Comments: 9

ZahlenO [2017-01-31 03:03:09 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Springs: Check
Upskirt- Shot... of course *facepalm*
Nice expressions on their faces, and very simple.

Cons: maybe try sketching in a background? That's not a big deal though. Ruby's hand's aren't accurate, but if we're going into anatomy, there's a lot more we could talk about.
Ruby looks like a cat with the hair sticking out like that... though I don't know if that's really a problem.
Your sketch lines on Weiss seem rather zig-zaggy. I wonder if maybe doing retake strokes would help fill in the white spaces when you color things in? Meaning stroke in one direction, and then reset for the next stroke in the same position. (Penstroke, lift pen in air to reposition for next stroke, and then penstroke again). That's just something that came to mind, and I found that that way is easier to shade white space with.

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hedgehogslayer [2017-04-05 01:10:07 +0000 UTC]

If Yang had those on, the shoes wouldn't be the only thing bouncing

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geek96boolean10 In reply to hedgehogslayer [2017-04-05 06:19:12 +0000 UTC]

heh.

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WingedOzelot [2017-02-10 15:20:31 +0000 UTC]

XDD Perfect! Ahhh, skirts are probably not what you want to wear for this kind of activity XD

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Viper-X27 [2017-02-05 18:00:37 +0000 UTC]

Weiss: "How did I let you talk me into doing this?!"

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blued1500 [2017-02-01 09:21:51 +0000 UTC]

Spring shoes have made a come back!And it's Ruby's lucky day

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TheWriter32123 [2017-01-30 23:38:31 +0000 UTC]

nice picture. definitely adding it to my favorites

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jots1106 [2017-01-30 23:19:34 +0000 UTC]

Careful Ruby, you might get a nosebleed

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CrawlerEnder935 [2017-01-30 23:00:14 +0000 UTC]

Ruby sees something she likes.

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