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The first thing I feel is the lining of my right sock gently caressing my tired toes. The cushion beneath it slowly compresses as my sneakers wrap tightly around my foot, the soft cloth bending and folding into an intricate origami. I begin to feel pebbles take their shape through the thick foam and plastic, slowly pressing against my sole as a masseuse might. Something creaks beneath these stones, the hard dead cells of wooden planks slowly being crushed beneath my weight. The ground’s support slowly reaches up my leg, my knee locking into place and my hip coming to a temporary rest.This happens all over again, but this time with my left leg. One wooden plank after another, slowly traversing this bridge on the cold hard dirt. The light angels dance among the treetops, making their passage across the sky at a pace only one truly at peace would be able to perceive. A faint sound rumbles through my skin, but I care not. Trifles such as this don’t matter in the world of chaos. The rumblings grow slightly stronger, and I can feel the vibrations in my toes as well. Something begins to appear in front of me, though by appearance it is not recognizable.
As the rumblings grow louder, I look ahead and I see the object grow into a forlorn figure, an absence of what glitters among the sleeping leaves. It grows taller, wispier, pulling itself out until it reaches far beyond sight. And by some form of movement, as if gliding upon the emptiness of space, it approaches near me. The wooden planks creak furiously, and something screeches loudly in my ear as the form begins to glow with an eerie light and the night is drowned out by angels of destruction, guided not by hate or love but with the path of greedy silver. And for an instant, I see something in that figure. I see it stop and stretch two jointless limbs out in awkward embrace of the trail, a trail that many follow but few ask to escape before arriving at their destination. I see the figure slowly disappear into the depths of darkness, screaming and howling as it slowly fades away.
Everything fades away, drawn by the luster of where the figure disappears towards. I am the last to go, wandering among fields of absolute nothing, drifting between wooden planks and silver roads, gradually becoming one with that figure, the figure that exists only in light and never in dark, yet where we’re going neither light nor dark exist.
And just before we complete this exodus, the figure looks at me. It is smiling.
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Comments: 7
IAmTehMatt [2014-03-29 00:52:37 +0000 UTC]
This strikes me as a soul crossing into the afterlife.
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WingedOzelot [2014-03-15 20:31:40 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm... I'm really bad at interpreting... all I see are the surreal images you toss at me
Hint please?
I really like the line "The light angels dance among the treetops, making their passage across the sky at a pace only one truly at peace would be able to perceive."
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WingedOzelot In reply to geek96boolean10 [2014-03-16 23:15:43 +0000 UTC]
Mhmmm, I'm pretty sure this one's not what you had in mind when creating the text, but here's what I think about it:
When I try to picture the scenes, I think the images a bit like how I would make... thoughts look like. Or rather... memories of a person; as in, how other people remember one person.
A person has to walk a long path to get recognized and remembered for a longer period of time, the bigger the impression is that you want to leave on the world, the more difficult it becomes (--> the weight of yourself that you have to carry and that is put on the wooden planks of the bridge).
About the environment, which you describe as a 'world of chaos', that could be all the thoughts of the other people, some are directed at you but most of them aren't; the forest hinders them from seeing and remembering you easily.
The mysterious figure could be the eventual forgetting about you; it doesn't matter how hard you try to leave a long-lasting impression on others (for the time after you're out of their sight), after a certain amount of time no one will remember you. So by going with the forgetting, thoughts about you become neither good or bad, they just don't exist anymore after a time.
The angels could be the passing time, taunting, dancing and making any memory disappear. It is only perceivable when you stop for a while to think about it because "time flies", unnoticeably in your everyday life.
Huh, not exactly an interpretation but never mind Could it be that I've become even worse at explaining things? Geez, I didn't think it was possible
I should read more, I think xD
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geek96boolean10 In reply to WingedOzelot [2014-03-17 02:39:27 +0000 UTC]
that was... beautiful to read. it definitely wasn't what I was going for, but amazing nonetheless. this is why I love reading interpretations - so many cool things can surface!
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WingedOzelot In reply to geek96boolean10 [2014-03-20 21:12:36 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you liked it Oh yes, that's why I love pooling ideas together
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