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WingedOzelot [2013-11-07 20:07:04 +0000 UTC]

'kay, I don't know much about T-shirt designs (the only related subject I know about would be pictograms and street signs ) but I'll see what I can do... enjoy my opinion at your own risk ;D

There are roughly two reasons I'd buy a shirt for, a cool message and/or good looks (nice composition, nice colours).
#2 is fine, it's cute and clear. Although... I think it's a bit odd to write "women|men" under the pictograms because that defeats the purpose of pictograms XD
#5... If you think it's popular enough I don't much about that kind of Internet phenomenas though xD But the design looks good, it's nice and clear. You might want to think about a pattern to their movement. They remind me a bit of "The Dancing Men"
#4 is cute, too. I'd make this one as simple as possible though, avoiding unnecessary lines (I'd leave out black outlines completely).

I'm not sure about #1 and #3... well, I think they're the type you'd want to put details into...
#1: Especially this one. And I'm not sure what this design is aiming at. Is it only the "cuteness-factor"? I'm also not sure whether the wolf looks better in the back or in the front, dunno xD
#3: I'd probably try to stylise this one more. Probably. I'd also try to combine the shape of the moon (circle) and the rather straight-line-ish shape of the "broom+witch" because it looks a bit scattered at the moment. If you don't want to combine the moon and the witch into one "emblem", you should try to give the design a direction by regrouping the individual elements or pull the attention to the witch by painting the moon and clouds in faint colours; right now it feels a bit unclear to me whether my eyes should focus on the witch or on the moon.

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FrancisJeremyXavyer [2013-11-05 15:56:23 +0000 UTC]

Nice work, brah.

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Unit645 [2013-11-05 07:37:44 +0000 UTC]

Needs more dakka. It's a scientific fact that one can never have enough dakka. Other than that...

Billy Mays: AMAZING!

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