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Published: 2007-05-22 13:28:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 2297; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 114
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I love optimism. Optimism in life helps us to strive further and stay strong.Be optimistic!
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i love this piece it completely symbolizes optimism!
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I like this one 
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I like colorful! Very sweet, I love the concept too.
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I like how it's almost simplistic but it's not ^^ The hearts are a very nice touch too ^^
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this caught my eye as soon as I opened your page 
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This artwork is definitely the epitome of optimism! It's so bright and colorful!
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Heh, that's optimism for sure, can't exactly confuse the concept! I like the clouds in particular. IMO the foliage tree looks a bit messy compared to the vector-like style of the sky elements. I'm not sure about having so much cyan there. Perhaps the rainbow could be a tad brighter?
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Wow, thanks! I was actually thinking of removing the tree and the grass altogether. What do you think? About the cyan, well, I just had to complete all seven colors. Does it look so wrong?
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Hmm, I don't think I'd remove the tree, I believe the picture would look like it's missing something. But I do think it should look more vectorish. The cyan isn't so bad, but perhaps there could be less of it.
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this is great
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pretty! it would be prettier if u used darker green color on the tree...like the green on the rainbow..
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hehehe...i postd too of my deviations on ur forum
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Okay, will check it. Closed it na kasi e.
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Very cute!! I love the sparkle effects you made on the clouds and stars and rainbow.
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Heh heh, I like this. Bright and glittery definitely works for the concept you're going for. Nice work!
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I really like the bright colors of this, but I think the tree should have a bit darker leaves. Also, with the hearts, they're are a little too many and they're closer together so it's hard to make out what they are.
Overall, I like the piece. It's funky and colorful and dreamy. Really well done.
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Thanks for sharing your comment!
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I realy like the pink clouds. They look so pretty. I realy like the feel to this art work.
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love the concept and colors
but maybe try taking off the glow/shadow from the tree
thats just a suggestion
but great work overall
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Thank you! Will work on it.
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I'm not very good at critiques. ._.;;
But I do love it! @_@;
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Hihi. Thanks. And for the 
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Pretty colorful!
I like the flowers and the rainbow! The thing that you could work on is maybe the flash of light, it's a bit dominating the artwork. If you make it smaller or less bright it might be better
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Thanks, I'm glad you like it. Those are hearts, btw. Not flowers.
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OK, where do I start.
Overall, I feel that your picture lacks a focal point.When I look at it, all I see is shapes and that tends to be distracting.Actually, when I look at it, the first thing I see is the rainbow.Now ask yourself, is that what you want the viewer to see first? The reason for this is that is that warm colours come farward and if you look at your pic, the rainbow is undoubtly the warmest, Infact, I think your picture is a little light.
Now, your composition is fine, I like it, I like the textures aswell.What I don't like is the tree and hearts, I think you went abit to far & just didn't know what to add.If you took out the tree, hearts and that bit of land, then move the bird + lensflare thingy, it could possibly make the picture alot more calm and balanced.Well that's what I think.Sorry If my crit came out a little bit negative, I can't at all do what you do, and this is just my perception of it.Please don't take it the wrong way, im just trying to help.
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Yes, I agree with several of these points. Particularly on the tree, I was actually thinking of taking it out because I couldn't add the proper colors, or the proper effects. I guess that would solve the problem. Thanks for these points! I appreciate it.
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