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GemmaSuen — Dissonance- Monster Iterating

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Description More iterating! This time it's silhouette style. I think this method is used by a lot of character designers to get the form down first.

I chose the hooded, white face look a long time ago, but I was too busy to go off to make variations.
Below each monster there are secondary sketches illustrating how it moves around and how it looks when chasing.

My original design is the center monster (third one). Which monster do you like the most?
*Edit* changed the title of the picture.
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Comments: 25

Trigger131990 [2012-01-20 23:24:47 +0000 UTC]

creepy... is this "alice madness returns" inspired?

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GemmaSuen In reply to Trigger131990 [2012-01-21 01:03:05 +0000 UTC]

I do believe that's why I really wanted the white faces yeah ^^! Thanks, I'm glad you think it's creepy .

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Trigger131990 In reply to GemmaSuen [2012-01-21 11:24:53 +0000 UTC]

XD ^^

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Kachunjack [2012-01-17 04:09:41 +0000 UTC]

i like this a lot!! love the ceiling rolling guy!! is like I AM GOING TO EAT YOU ALIVE!!!!!

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GemmaSuen In reply to Kachunjack [2012-01-17 08:37:23 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I liked the ceiling rolling guy :< but I don't want to change how the monster runs... so pitiful~

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Gothic-Lycan [2012-01-15 16:04:37 +0000 UTC]

I find the one on the far right (knife-n'-fork guy) quite funny tbh.
But he also has a psychopathic quality to him. After all, he seems to want not only to eat you, but to eat you with cutlery, like a gentleman. XD

I also think that the fewer facial details a monster has, the scarier it gets. Maybe 'cause you can't really tell what it's thinking or what mood it's in. Something like that.
Either which way, the face on the blade-limbed thing is unnerving. O.o

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GemmaSuen In reply to Gothic-Lycan [2012-01-15 20:39:04 +0000 UTC]

"I also think tha tthe fewer facial detials a monster has, the scarier it gets." ~I completely agree, and the whole point of the silhouettes where to allow me to see this side. I really enjoy the monsters from Silent hill, they lack the detail needed to comfort our minds.

Glad you like the middle one? I do like the face but apparently a lot of people found it pretty unscary :s. So I went off to design more.

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TheAngelOfLucifer [2012-01-13 19:36:53 +0000 UTC]

awesome stuff ^^ love the first n last ones ^^

have you played persona? the enemies in that remind me of these ^^

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GemmaSuen In reply to TheAngelOfLucifer [2012-01-13 22:16:08 +0000 UTC]

Yes I have! I was starting to think I was ripping other games off to be honest. But I really liked the looks, and my lecturers seemed to like them too.
I've only really properly played Persona 4 though, none of the others. Thanks for your input!

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TheAngelOfLucifer In reply to GemmaSuen [2012-01-13 23:03:23 +0000 UTC]

I think you've taken the basic shadow design from persona n turned the 'creepy' up to 11 it's not close enough to be 'ripping off' it's just I'm a persona nut XD

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GemmaSuen In reply to TheAngelOfLucifer [2012-01-14 00:32:35 +0000 UTC]

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Strawberry-Shu-Cake [2012-01-13 18:42:15 +0000 UTC]

creepy much!!! >w<
i liek them all
but i really like the 1st 3rd and 4th ones
wouldnt want to run into any of them on a dark night mind you haha
<3 x

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GemmaSuen In reply to Strawberry-Shu-Cake [2012-01-13 22:33:03 +0000 UTC]

glad you think so Shu, thanks for your opinion! Tallying them up tonight... and The third and last one are tying!

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Strawberry-Shu-Cake In reply to GemmaSuen [2012-01-14 19:33:10 +0000 UTC]

haha for some reason i can just imaging jumping on the back of the second one
all like "CHAAAARGE" and have him chase down people i dislike >w<

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GemmaSuen In reply to Strawberry-Shu-Cake [2012-01-15 02:21:29 +0000 UTC]

XD yeah me too, it's not that scary (imo) but I guess when I look at it, in my mind it just didn't appear that creepy.

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Desolc [2012-01-13 01:14:26 +0000 UTC]

These remind me of 'Blame!', good work, your original creature is my favourite, the left bug-guy a close second.

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GemmaSuen In reply to Desolc [2012-01-13 01:30:53 +0000 UTC]

Ahh I have never actually watched 'Blame!' I briefly saw the comic but never read it. Thanks for your kind comment, glad you like the third! ^^

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gillianivyart [2012-01-13 01:13:54 +0000 UTC]

I like the second from the right the best. Looks like, well not sure what it looks like,maybe reminds me of trinity type designs with three symmetrical ends. Is the last guy coming over for dinner?

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GemmaSuen In reply to gillianivyart [2012-01-13 01:32:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the input!
The last guy was drawn while being slightly tipsy and I had originally called him 'The Gardener'! Yes I think he is more suitable as a knife and fork dude, watering plants has never really been considered terrifying

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gillianivyart In reply to GemmaSuen [2012-01-13 01:45:02 +0000 UTC]

"The Consumer" How's that one? ;D Bet he can rake a mean bed of flowers.

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GemmaSuen In reply to gillianivyart [2012-01-13 07:37:26 +0000 UTC]

haha I'm now half hoping I can pick him just so he has that name.

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RancidMagpie [2012-01-13 01:09:51 +0000 UTC]

I like the second out of the first 3 the most likely because it doesn't look as much like a spider as the other two and spiders make me go 3:

There is some cool work here, I love what you did with the perspectives. Nice job!

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GemmaSuen In reply to RancidMagpie [2012-01-13 01:13:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! A very good choice considering the reasoning. I actually like all of them, great to get feedback

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RancidMagpie In reply to GemmaSuen [2012-01-13 01:23:12 +0000 UTC]

Yes, they're all very enjoyable, just that one is probably my favorite <3

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GemmaSuen In reply to RancidMagpie [2012-01-13 01:33:22 +0000 UTC]

:3 Ah, yes it seems to be the most popular choice at the moment

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