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Published: 2011-05-31 05:48:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 9161; Favourites: 74; Downloads: 38
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HEY! LOOK! LISTEN! Please don't go turn away, stick around! I know the first few pages look bad, but don't worry! The comic gets better with every page... literally! This was first comic ever, so over time I picked things up and the quality of my comic get better and better with every page. ;-3_________________________________________
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Comments: 44
I made that page so long ago I was still in high school. ._.'
I wish I could fix all my grammar mistakes from like pages 1 through 30, but I cleaned my laptop sometime ago. So, I no longer have the original Comic page file to edit my awful spelling and punctuation, other wise I would have fixed it. ;-;
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its our
(pretty sure is tho)***
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i'm reading cour comic, and wow, have you improoved over time!
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Thanks! Practice and learning what Photoshop tools do really help.
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i've read a bit of thus comic and i couldn't stop laughing great work
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did you get my note???
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hahaha dusk is crying.I never knew darkari could cry.
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so who created dusk?
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HA HA HA HA HA HA! Lucario's reaction is PRICELESS!
NICE ONE!
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There we go Flower! You want something right, do it yourself. ^^ I like this girl. Great character concept and everything. x3 (And sorry to spam your notifications. I really don't mean to)
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Flower is my go to girl!
(No its fine, I love da comments! 
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WOW Nice comic it is one of the best i have ever read
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Thank you! im still learning!
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Yus I'm a spammer. A very, very nice comic! ;D Just faved 'em all!
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Thanks for all the faves! i really appreciate it!
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heh... some help Dusk is 
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im calling him a guy. but the tenciclly the he has no gender
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yeah Dusk like MAN when u see pokemon movie when he save that girl?
and u draw my zoroark(is so quite for trick to ur Dusk) vs ur Dusk when Zoroarkhas trick to Dusk's attack to(hit lucario is ur team when hard find Zoroark's trick like trap)
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dusk sound like girl thing but he's a guy
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no hes a guy...but hes a bit girly!
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yeah i write wrong , but i can´t believe that hornet and rain could hurt dusk
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Amazing but noticed quite a few errors with the spelling. Reason is spelled...well like I just spelled it, not resson. Panel 7 you missed the ' in the word were, so it should look like we're. Panel two on page 16 where Dusk speaks, it should be They're not There. Sorry if this seems harsh or rude. Just trying to help you
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No you’re not being rude at all! Two things about me one I have dyslexia (so I miss words like from and form) 2. I’m the worst at grammar, punctuations, all that fun stuff...it’s my worst subject!
I fixed the errors thanks to you! If you ever see any tell me!
There is a spelling error in all my old comic pages but I can’t fix them because I lost my files when my computer cashed!
So I ask my viewers if I missed something, and if they find some error I fix it! Then everyone’s Happy!!!!
So thank you for helping me fix the errors!
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You're welcome and I loled at the following: "I lost my files when my computer cashed!" I think you meant vrashed not cashed
Well if you would like I could review your comic pages before you post them and proofread them. That way when you post them they'll be grammar free and you won't have to go through the trouble of editting the deviation
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Sure! taht sounds great!
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Hmmmm if I note you my email you could send them to me that way
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Ok im generalgibby@yahoo.com
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Mine's supergreeley1990@live.com
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misspelled 'crashed'. and i tend to do typo's a lot...
oh well... everyone makes mistakes.
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