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Published: 2007-09-13 05:40:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 9398; Favourites: 252; Downloads: 159
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Description Cleaned up and detailed version of [link]

Update (Sept 23) Finished product. Must start on something newwwwwwwwwwwwww >:3
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Arkham-Knightmare [2009-01-24 02:51:01 +0000 UTC]

I love the anime and I love that couple

good artwork

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SophieHei [2008-06-22 14:46:45 +0000 UTC]

Aww, that's soo cuute (o^_^o)
I love Sousuke >.<

Amazing, I loove <333

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GeneralGM In reply to SophieHei [2008-06-24 00:22:29 +0000 UTC]

>:3

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koroPL [2008-05-25 21:29:38 +0000 UTC]

I preffer oryginal anime/manga style ;/ This is very good art, but it's look like toon
Background is wired, to hard line on rails and ground, and sky without black lines

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busik [2008-01-25 20:52:11 +0000 UTC]

OHMAIGAWD, looks so great!

Really, I love the way You colored them. You really have talent. :3

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McDouche [2007-11-22 22:48:20 +0000 UTC]

It looks nothing like Sousuke Sagara. Other than that, AWESOME!

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GeneralGM In reply to McDouche [2007-11-22 22:57:28 +0000 UTC]

different strokes fo' different folks >:3

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McDouche In reply to GeneralGM [2007-11-26 13:12:15 +0000 UTC]

As in..... 1)Some people just draw things differently? (on purpose)

or 2)That's just how you drew it and it happened to turned out not looking like him? (accident)

because if you made him look retarded on purpose then that is pretty stupid, but if it was on accident I understand, but you can still practice on fixing it.

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McDouche In reply to McDouche [2007-11-26 18:15:36 +0000 UTC]

At the time of writing it I did mean some offense, I think his face looks pretty dumb. Don't get me wrong though I like the _entire_ rest of the picture.

And what I meant when asking if "it" was on accident or on purpose, I meant did you mean to make him differently than the original character? (first go or not)

You said you just draw it and don't change it so that would mean accidentally, some artists _purposely_ change features of the characters they draw... I don't know why I guess they like drawing it differently?

By accidental I mean you _want_ the picture to look exactly or as close as possible tot he original character, but it doesn't turn out that way and you don't care enough or you just don't want to try and make it look closer to the original.

Based on what you sent and my definitions, I'd say you accidentally made his face different than the original Sousuke.

Accidental or not, I didn't really mean any offense, I was just curious if you liked and wanted him to be different.

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McDouche In reply to McDouche [2007-11-26 18:19:10 +0000 UTC]

to the*

and also, it's just some random person on the internet, why would you take offense if he says your drawing's face is stupid? I have many flaws in my artwork, feel free to bash me to your heart's content. (although I rarely, almost never, upload anything to dA, I don't really like the layout of things... but I'm going to try to upload more stuff in the future)

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GeneralGM In reply to McDouche [2007-11-26 16:35:59 +0000 UTC]

with the stuff I do, what you see is what you get. None the less if he looks retarded or not. I do better myself constantly, however upon this it would only make the picture look worse in quality (going back, erasing shading, redoing the shading, and it may not go with the rest of the picture). As for your 2 points, both of your points revolve around 2nd one you stated. So in response to this, I drew him like that, so it is on purpose. Stupid or not in your mind, thats the way it went and it will stay that way. I would take you ideals into mind if it was put in constructively criticized wording, but telling any artist, if he did it on purpose or not, in which it is ALWAYS purposely done, that is not constructive.

Srsly I'm not trying to be rude or anything but I did take offense to your statement, minor or not in offense, it was enough to get my attention to write this.
If you meant nothing by it or didn't want to put it that way, its all well and good.
You just came off that way by your text.

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RageVX [2007-11-17 22:25:39 +0000 UTC]

*shoots into the sky* I demand a french roll, hand over the french roll and no one will get hurt.

XD sorry just had to do that awesome art =3

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GeneralGM In reply to RageVX [2007-11-18 03:21:37 +0000 UTC]

I thought it was a plain roll XD

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RageVX In reply to GeneralGM [2007-11-18 12:23:22 +0000 UTC]

Nah it was a french one, I still remember that from the fansubs

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WillieManga In reply to RageVX [2012-02-26 07:09:48 +0000 UTC]

Hahahahaha!! So random!

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ut0pie [2007-11-06 18:10:05 +0000 UTC]

It's just amazing ! Thank you so much for sharing.

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matthew-chan [2007-10-18 17:54:09 +0000 UTC]

I like it very much!!! it's so romantic!!!!

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Mizuburi [2007-10-15 02:13:23 +0000 UTC]

Just beautiful, I love it! The coloring is great, especially the background, the shirts and Sousuke's pants. Great job!!

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emsy-ree [2007-10-01 03:02:02 +0000 UTC]

So much detail on it Looks very good, I like the backround, the clothes folds and how you did the hair. I must know how you do your clothes folds and BGs, though XD

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GeneralGM In reply to emsy-ree [2007-10-01 15:28:05 +0000 UTC]

lots and lots of layers and smoothing. lol

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Nee-ha-ha [2007-09-29 23:59:44 +0000 UTC]

omg finally some decent FMP work! this soothes me so much. this is absolutly so relaxing and romantic! i am very impressed wif the colouring skills too! u did such a great job here. the pose is so delicate and graceful. *sniffs* nicely done!

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GeneralGM In reply to Nee-ha-ha [2007-09-30 00:12:37 +0000 UTC]

you should check out my friend Kaze, she has some fantastic stuff. [link]

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Nee-ha-ha In reply to GeneralGM [2007-09-30 11:02:07 +0000 UTC]

yeh i know. im watching her actually. so i know all about it lol >_<

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GeneralGM In reply to Nee-ha-ha [2007-09-30 14:21:55 +0000 UTC]

then my job is done then XD LOL

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Mom0San [2007-09-27 14:03:46 +0000 UTC]

waa beautiful my friend very romanticc^__^

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GeneralGM In reply to Mom0San [2007-09-27 15:41:51 +0000 UTC]

>:3

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youngpaduan [2007-09-26 20:17:24 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is great!!! I looooooove the background!! X3

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GeneralGM In reply to youngpaduan [2007-09-26 20:18:47 +0000 UTC]

thank ya >:3

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bubblebabydragon1007 [2007-09-26 19:51:32 +0000 UTC]

wow this is well sweet i luv it eek!!!
ur colouring is well gud must of taken ages

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GeneralGM In reply to bubblebabydragon1007 [2007-09-26 20:25:08 +0000 UTC]

around 6 hours, give or take

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AARart [2007-09-25 23:59:52 +0000 UTC]

This is so awsome!! I really love it!! Wow, wow wow! This should get a daily deviation!!

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GeneralGM In reply to AARart [2007-09-26 04:41:50 +0000 UTC]

well maybe not a DD, I mean compared to other member's works, mine looks kinda plain

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wraith11 [2007-09-25 16:05:29 +0000 UTC]

Dizzam mate, that's fucking awesome.
I particularly like the sunset colours and lighting... great stuff.

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GeneralGM In reply to wraith11 [2007-09-25 19:44:27 +0000 UTC]

thank ya >:3

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numb1 [2007-09-25 05:23:02 +0000 UTC]

badass
glad you showed the steps
great art

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GeneralGM In reply to numb1 [2007-09-25 05:53:31 +0000 UTC]

thank ya >:3

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numb1 In reply to GeneralGM [2007-09-26 06:57:35 +0000 UTC]

you are quite welcome

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chibipunk7231 [2007-09-25 02:48:38 +0000 UTC]

XD dang, they stayed after school for a long time! lol. i really do like the them of this though, and the sun set is so goregous!~ love is in the ar, hee hee, great job!~

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CommanderKeks [2007-09-24 23:47:49 +0000 UTC]

Wheeeee
Nice Coloring, nice details

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GeneralGM In reply to CommanderKeks [2007-09-24 23:49:47 +0000 UTC]

Kaze! thank youuuu >:3

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ittybittysheip [2007-09-24 05:45:45 +0000 UTC]

amazing detail, shading, the sky, colors, everything. this is so a fav.

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GeneralGM In reply to ittybittysheip [2007-09-24 05:50:57 +0000 UTC]

>:3

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ittybittysheip In reply to GeneralGM [2007-09-25 00:01:31 +0000 UTC]

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animenadie [2007-09-24 05:07:23 +0000 UTC]

The finished product looks great. I love the realistic shading... the only thing that keeps coming to my attention is that it looks like their hands are a bit on the slender side, even considering perspective. Other than that, really awesome! The background is gorgeous...

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GeneralGM In reply to animenadie [2007-09-24 05:12:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the input. I have to work on the hands later in the future, I had to use my own hands for the perspective touch. I'm not gonna mess with this one though because I tend to screw up pieces when I do stuff like that. Best to keep it the way it is, trust me.

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animenadie In reply to GeneralGM [2007-09-24 12:08:27 +0000 UTC]

lol, I know what you mean. It's like, "Oh, I can fix this.... oh crap, what just happened??"

And it can be soooooo hard having to use your own hands, I just recently had to do that and I felt so silly in my mirror. ><

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GeneralGM In reply to animenadie [2007-09-24 13:54:09 +0000 UTC]

XD, well we can pull it off somewhat >:3

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Realm-Of-The-Shadows [2007-09-24 03:41:09 +0000 UTC]

beautiful!

you need some Madlax inspiration


go to [link] for the sale NOW XDDDDD

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DemonicSamurai [2007-09-24 02:45:50 +0000 UTC]

good to see it done its fucking awesome

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GeneralGM In reply to DemonicSamurai [2007-09-24 03:02:11 +0000 UTC]

hell yeaz

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