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GenesisGoBoom — Naruto: Small gestures Pg:01
Published: 2007-08-12 00:14:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 16975; Favourites: 134; Downloads: 143
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EDIT: I am now going to add these in color. if you already hav it faved thanks!!first page of what i hope to be alot... if I dont get lazeh... this is just for fun. no critique nessasary Thanking you ^-^
Thoug if there is anything screamingly wrong and you know how to fix it, pionters are welcome
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oooh very interesting ^^ lol wonder why sakura wants Naruto
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XD i am NOT posting on both the color and black and white pages. i would die. or shoot you. whichever came first XD
but in all seriousness - this is just my personal preference - i like it in black and white more. the reason behind it is because its more manga-styled. And though color can add to the picture it can also take away from it. If you know what i mean?
XD ok no you don't your not in my head. basically i just mean i feel like color brings out the sight but black and white brings out the details. Maybe it;s just me but everything seems sharper without color, but thinks take more notice with it especally the eye catching colors like yellow or red.
ok, done with that rant. XD you're like 'red this way' sign cracks me up. it woulda been great it like pakkun was holding a sign that said it or something *giggles like a weirdo*
I like how it starts - Sai looking for little Naruto-chwan while he;ls fighting. too cute.
The first panel i'm loving the detail honey! Nice house. You dsid a nice job making it look circular and the wood is nicely lined. i love how you draw houses have i ever told you that?
second panel - ummm... XD Sakura;s hands look too big for her face. thats all i'm gonna say. *runs*
third - Ooooh i wonder what's in the package! Oh yeah so far i'm liking the dialogue. it already has a naruto-esque theme to it. I can jsut imagine an episode opening like this.
fourth- The only problem with this panel is the dialogue gets little confusing. I'm not sure if Sakura's line was necessary so much cause it mnakes the next sentence - the one answering her previous question - get a little tied up with the pictures and um what not and um - okay this is my english side speaking 
fifth- *loud squeal* NARU-CHWAN! *attacks computer* *gets eletrocuted* Hehe man those Naruto's musta been a pain to draw. Oh yes i'm LOVING this scenary.
sixth - i just love this angle. And the movements the two Naruto's are making it looks very... well not realistic cause haha no one can make rasengans 'round my neightborhood - but more um... well let me just put it this way - i can see the movements in my head as if i were personally looking down from this angle.
God do i ever make sense? haha.
Now... to find out who;s spying on him!
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I also like the black and white ones more, but people have asked for them in color, and who am I to deny them, thats why I kept the black and white ones though. That way we have best of both worlds
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XD oh okay so i'm not crazy
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nope, your just as Sane as I am
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Ooo I'm going to have to read all of this! Looks interesting! 
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yush it was indeed!! And thank you ver much!! I do hope youlike the rest, though it is not fully colored yet >.> sorry
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Well, I don't mind it in black and white. That's not going to me from loveing it!
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*giggles* the rest will get don eventually
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Ahh, I'm impressed. Your art looks way better in color.
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nah I am just on a time out
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Oh. I get like that too when I do my own oc comic.
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^-^ Posted the next page there anyways ^-^
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yay a commic ^^
ahh you can draw really good *is jeaulous*
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Thank you sooo much!! XDDDD But I am not all that good, and I still have alot to learn, soooo I will keep practicing!
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MORE!! DO MORE NOW!!!
was what I was going to say....but I dont particularly like being a hypocrite and that comment is almost more annoying than flames....
"More now!" = I glanced over it, didn't pay enough attention to leave a decent comment and want to see the next page...and I'm lazy on top of all that.
I really like this tho, you panelling is getting very good, yay for someone who has the motivation to draw it as one page and not.....20 million separate ones....>___>
Sai has such a cute lil profile!
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Sai Does have a cute profile^-^ Thank you for the thoughtfull well constructed comment! it is apreciated!
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heh glad you like it!
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ARGH That face looks so stupid! -kicks it- -gasp- I want to see more! XD
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Lol I read this first before I saw what you were talking about and I was like.... Does it?... Which one... The sakura face?.... Oh no.... TT__TT But then I got confused by the second part of the comment, And then I realised what you were talking about XDDD
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XDD Sorries for the confusion! ><
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