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Published: 2014-12-06 02:01:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 740; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 1
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o.0 How was it this didn't make it from Stash into DA? I've had this thing done for more then two months now.So, yeah....a commission done for my friend mandy-kun of her character Neve and her friend's character Neoma in thier human forms.
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Vision: You seem to have a very starry background, followed by a crescent that also serves as a bed for two people. In my eyes, that's very intriguing, so there's definitely a lot of texture and color to be seen here. Four stars.
Originality: Considering the only time you see someone on a crescent is when you see the intro to the DreamWorks logo, I consider this to be quite innovative; however, it's even more so because the crescent, as mentioned earlier, serves as a bed for two people, and you don't see that very often. Four stars.
Technique: Your shades of purple, yellow, and black seem to blend in beautifully, which can only explain why it took you as long as it did to make this. I personally am intrigued by your style. Four and-a-half stars.
Impact: To be truthful about it, I've seen a bunch of magnificent art on this site, but this one is pretty much better than average considering everything I've seen. I don't really know how you can make this better, but I can almost say for sure that you did an excellent job with this, especially since you've been a deviant for ten years. What will the next ten years bring for you in terms of your art? One can only find out as times goes by. Four stars.
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Thank you for the critique. It is nice to know what strong points stood out, but credit for the moon bed goes to Mandy-kun.
Now I will have to see if I can find a more experienced artist then myself and at least if they would have handled anything differently. ^.^
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You're welcome. You know, I'm not an art expert, but I know good art when I see it.
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And it is good to get the option as well of non-artists, as you and your fellows are the people who will see it the most. Other artists are important to for technical feedback.
I understand though...I appreciate computer programs or good website design, but I know only a little of what makes them tick.
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That's why I always try to get on people's good side.
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omg why is this one of the most adorable things i have ever seen. The moon shines great and the stars and sky are freaking awesome! i love her hair (it's not common) and fluffy scarf!
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this is truly beautiful and cute, it makes me wonder more about them.
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Thank you very much! ^.^
If you want to know more, go check out mandy-kun 's gallery. These two are also part of teamharmony.deviantart.com and abscondiverse.deviantart.com
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