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GhostBear3067 β The Fifth Elementals
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Published: 2015-04-10 05:07:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 1108; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 18
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Got the idea for this short story from a discussion in a facebook group. I tried to stick to cannon as much as possible but I will be the first to admit I made a lot of this up on the fly with no real basis on real Battletech lore. I played particularly fast and lose with some terminologies, spellings and dates.Preview Image is not mine. It can be found hereΒ ppc.warhawkenterprises.com/intβ¦
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Isn't it kinda odd how all the survivors were the fifth of each Point?
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Sorry about this stupidly late reply but I was wondering if I could get your opinion on something...
You are the only one I know of who both read this and the test upload version using DA's Literature upload option ( www.deviantart.com/ghostbear30β¦ ) so I was wondering if you would consider it worth the effort for me to do a full upload in that manner for this and my other writings?
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Well I had to make the title work somehow, quiaff? π π
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Still slightly surprised that is what you locked in on about this short story.
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Was I supposed to lock onto something else?
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Not necessarily, just an unexpected development.
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At least it was lampshaded in the story.
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That lampshading was actually a happy accident during the writing process.
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A good short story.
I have a Battletech story in the works. But set from a Inner sphere point of view.
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Thank you, that is much appreciated. I would very much like to read your story when it is ready. Also, I am uploading a more novel style work chapter by chapter hereghostbear3067.deviantart.com/g⦠if you are interested. As of now only the prologue is up but chapter 1 should be getting posted later this week (week of 04/12-16/2015).
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