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I did a cover! Check it out here: www.youtube.com/watch?v=kciksq…please excuse the mediocre microphone and enjoy my work!
At first, when I saw this game it was a turn off, the way it was drawn like the girls had taken their school uniforms and shoved it under their bra, made me realise it was for guys, but it was supposed to be scary? That made zero sense to me, so I reluctantly watched some analysis videos, spoiled myself and fell in love with the game. Also, Monika did nothing wrong, and I will fight anyone who disagrees.
The game was developed by Team Salvatio, and the game is free on steam!
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The only time "This person did nothing wrong" meme actually makes sense.
Monika was a character made just like the other girls to love the player and given the circumstances went overboard probably thanks to being self-aware. It was already proven pretty much once Sayori got in her position and she did the same thing.
Anyway about the art, its very detailed! You put a lot of work into this and it shows!
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The Third Eye down on the bottom...
Have you been watching some DDLC theory videos? Hmmmmmmmmm?
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Multitasking is hard. This makes it look easy.
Excellent attention to detail here!
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Absolutely love this cover! The most impressive thing to me about this piece is your attention to detail. There's a lot happening in this piece that play off of each other—the desks and the background behind it; the section of code-like words; the wrinkles in her clothes. Fantastic job!
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it is a pretty neat piece I must say, then again it isn't without it's flaws:
. Although the shading for the skin is pretty nice 
. I really don't have any complains about the face except the shape of the nose ( the width of the nasal cavity and the nose bridge isn't quite resonating), also it might be for detail, but the random line beneath the lower lip really put me off.
. Although I might be pushing it ( sorry if you find it rude 
Rest assured, it is quite a scene to relinquish, but not perfect (duh) cause there's always room for improvement. Keep up the good work and you will excel in no time.
Above all, Enjoy and have a great day
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I actally also agree
I mean it was messed up what she did to the other characters, but she does know it's a game, so it must have been so lonely.
she also protects you at the end, in a way.
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- Hm ..... what should I say about the picture? I think my cmt will not be as long as the others, if you have a heart then read this cmt, it does not take much of your time! In terms of background is very unique and creative, if I'm not mistaken, I see you have incorporated the background to make the picture more vivid and special. I see a lot of new things and I am willing to learn you because I may not be like you but these comments are what I think is saying. The image is a girl right? Look at her, beautiful! I like the way you color her eyes. It highlights the color of her hair through her face, shape, ...I like the color you make it more beautiful. Her skin looks very natural. However, I have a faulty look on her face. Yes, I know what is perfect, right? You are describing a girl who is not perfect but she always has her beauty. Is her hand placed on the table or vice versa? I am very confused and confused when I do not understand! But overall I find your painting very beautiful and I need to learn a lot in life and in drawing. I do not know how your painting is compared to what others think. I personally find this painting very inspirational. It is very beautiful and unique. You can exploit some more errors to perfect the picture. If you like or not. However, I still find it a beautiful picture !
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I love how you used details like the realistic mouth and eye on the papers, like how in the game Yuri can have those features. I love the "Monika.CHR" does not exist because i feel like that created most of the detail from how this drawing takes place in the computer. I love the stickers and the poses 
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First about the drawing, I like the colour choices in this, all the colours are kind of in the same colour, nothing is standing out too much, so the scheme works really well. Also, love all the detail, they make this drawing interesting and I at least found it interesting, how I'd notice different things, when checking this drawing again (for example, I didn't notice the eyes and the mouth at the bottom at first, but they make a really nice detail, and kinda caught me off guard!). There is a lot more happening in this drawing than what you would notice at first glance, and that's a good thing!
Now on the cover, good work! There were just a few technical things that I noticed, that caught my attention (I have been studying mixing for a while and plan on being a sound engineer, so these are just some technical aspects I notice, and this is only my opinion) You have really nice clear vocals (even if the mic wasn't super your vocals are still nice and clear), but for my taste they stand out a bit too much. The piano could be a bit louder in my opinion, as your vocals sound a bit isolated at the moment. Another thing is that your vocals mask the piano a bit with certain notes, but if the piano was a bit louder that could fix it or some EQing. I would have also added a small reverb to your vocals as it gives it a bit more space, and it would have probably also tied your vocal to the rest of the music a bit.
You did do a good job though, and the cover is nice, but just a few things that came to my mind
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_____English warning______
Before commenting on the photo, I must clarify that I do not speak English well and I will be aware of the help of the translator.
To start criticizing the photo in a good way, I will need your constant patience because it is only an opinion and I do not want to offend (apart from that, I do not draw better than your drawing).
____Advertencia en español_____
Antes de comentar la foto, debo aclarar que no hablo bien el inglés y tendré conocimiento de la ayuda del traductor.
Para empezar a criticar la foto de una buena manera, necesitaré tu paciencia constante porque es solo una opinión y no quiero ofender (aparte de eso, no dibujo mejor que tu dibujo).
____English Commentary (Colours)_____
I will start with the colors: for me they are very muted and do not attract much attention. This is because the color bar has a dark color, to improve this detail, depending on the classification of the drawing (caricature, anime, realistic, others), there should be a series of colors to dramatize a drama in it. For example: If art represents an emotion more than sadness or loss, put a darker outline with little lighting but if it is cheerful, put something that highlights everything brilliantly (Red is an example that attracts people) and if is giving something neutral, put something that is in the middle (It can be used when the person is thoughtful).
I must warn that I'm not using so light colors (pastel) very dark colors (Garnet, teal).
___Comentario en español (Colores)______
Comenzaré con los colores: para mí están muy apagados y no atraen mucha atención. Esto se debe a que la barra de color tiene un color oscuro, para mejorar este detalle, dependiendo de la clasificación del dibujo (caricatura, anime, realista, otros), debe haber una serie de colores para dramatizar un drama en él. Por ejemplo: si el arte representa una emoción más que tristeza o pérdida, ponga un contorno más oscuro con poca luz, pero si es alegre, coloque algo que resalte todo brillantemente (el rojo es un ejemplo que atrae a las personas) y si está dando algo neutral, ponga algo que está en el medio (Se puede usar cuando la persona es reflexiva).
Debo advertir que no estoy usando colores tan claros (pastel) colores muy oscuros (granate, verde azulado).
_____English anatomy_____
Mainly I want to go to the head because it seems a little crooked, as if it had gone through the final destination or paranormal activity, this can be resolved (according to the tutorials I've seen) practicing on paper doing the same drawing and once again to see how little by little you are improving by seeing the mistakes you made. Of course, you can do this if you want to keep a formal drawing. If it is a quick drawing, leave it as it comes out.
Eye! I do not mean to imply that it is wrong, only that it seems to me that it is raro for me. Another can see it in another way and think that the wrong one here is me.
But for the benefit of the drawing I must point that the person has good legs, I will not be misunderstood, The way to mark the knee and the fat of the leg is very good.
______Anatomía en español____
Principalmente quiero ir a la cabeza porque parece un poco torcida, como si hubiera pasado por el destino final o la actividad paranormal, esto se puede resolver (de acuerdo con los tutoriales que he visto) practicando en papel haciendo el mismo dibujo y una vez más para ver cómo poco a poco estás mejorando al ver los errores que cometiste. Por supuesto, puede hacer esto si desea mantener un dibujo formal. Si se trata de un dibujo rápido, déjelo tal como sale.
¡O! No quiero decir que esté mal, solo que me parece que es raro para mí. Otro puede verlo de otra manera y pensar que el equivocado aquí soy yo.
Pero para el beneficio del dibujo, debo señalar que la persona tiene buenas piernas, no me malinterpreten, lo que quiero decir es que la forma de marcar la rodilla y la grasa de la pierna es muy buena.
________English Background______
As for the background, I have nothing against him because I like what has to do with the distortion of the image that gives him a point to favor the drawing. But I had put bright green and red stripes, if it was a system error (that's what I understand of what is behind the girl)
_______Fondo en español______
En cuanto al fondo, no tengo nada en contra de él porque me gusta lo que tiene que ver con la distorsión de la imagen que le da un punto para favorecer el dibujo. Pero había puesto franjas verdes y rojas brillantes, si era un error del sistema (eso es lo que entiendo de lo que hay detrás de la chica)
___English Clothes _____
Well, it can not be said that it lacks originality, since the student's clothes are widely used in drawings of this style. I do not know, in my opinion they would have put on broken clothes that have nothing to do with school or a new fashion that highlights the personality of the person, but it seems to be one more.
___Ropa en español_____
Bueno, no puede decirse que carezca de originalidad, ya que la ropa del estudiante se usa ampliamente en los dibujos de este estilo. No sé, en mi opinión, se habrían puesto ropas rotas que no tienen nada que ver con la escuela o una nueva moda que resalta la personalidad de la persona, pero parece ser una más.
_____My rating__________
____Calificación mía______
____Compared to your other drawings ____
7/10. No good, no bad. There are better.
____En comparación con otros dibujos tuyos____
7/10. No está bien, ni mal. Sin embargo hay mejores dibujos tuyos.
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I just wanted to say that this is a drawing of a character from a game, and is not an originally thought up character by this artist ^-^
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I know, but I mean it seems very ordinary.
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WOW this is an awesome critique!!
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WOW Thanks for saying that, it makes me happy to read it.
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I don't know why, but the first time I saw it, I instantly thought of Hogwarts haha. It just gives me pottery vibes (which is not a bad thing at all, by the way, i love the HP saga). It also reminds me of Alice in Wonderland, (as you probably realised, I have zero idea of the game that inspired this haha). Nevertheless, i love it. I'm always mesmerize by people who achieve this level of drawing and editions, it's truly amazing. It makes me want to find the game and play it, just to know what you're talking about in the description. Anyway, i love it.
(sorry for my rough english, I'm Argentinian)
xoxo.
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the game its inspired by is called "Doki Doki Literature Club"
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The piece is magnificent, the colors blend well as well as the background is very interesting, the shading of skin is very well done as well as any other shading. The skirt shading could be a little bit darker but it still gives beauty to the piece, I also love how the pen breaks a fraction of reality into 'Monika.chr does not exist' the colors for the cracks are really well drawn out and makes it seem as if the background (or the scene) suddenly opened up to a rip of coding. The hair was also drawn very well, there could've been a little bit of darker shading towards the eyes but it still looks beautiful, keep up the good work and most importantly keep learning and keep on practicing. ^^
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You did a great job on the drawing and the song too. I don't understand what Doki Doki literature club is, I keep hearing about it everywhere. But otherwise, it looks great. You also have a great singing voice, I can't sing that good. The only thing you could work on is the eyes, kinda looks weird. Or maybe its the nose, who knows? Other than that, music and art is beautiful.
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it's a horror game that disguises itself to look like a digital graphic novel about dating schoolgirls
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I think your art is amazing Giltch. You should be so proud of yourself. When I first downloaded DeviantArt, I was like; woah! I said ' One day I want to be as good as them! '. You are one of those people! I hope you appreciate how much lots of people are admired by your work! This is a perfect example of how awesome you are, your true colours shining through! 
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I really like this piece! The background really tells who Monika is, and that her pen is connected to the glitch or some sort. I think I'm just imagining that and it was just purely coincidental. The highlights, the shadings are very pleasing to look at, in my opinion. The folds are really well drawn! You could add a little bit more details on the hair like, put strands or some sort. For me, I think the shoulders are broad-- I don't know if it's just the pose that made it look broad, but it would be better to make the shoulders not very broad. The neck also looks long and in my opinion I think it needs to be shorter. Her torso is a little bit manly than any other girls based on what I observed while looking. I love Monika and also your piece! I hope you learn just a tiny bit!
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This piece is quite interesting. It's a strong mix of art styles and techniques, from surrealism to semi-realism, and chibis to manipulation. You've strongly combined all elements in here with the common theme (Monika) and your shading and creasing on the clothes is to be commended. I really love how you've done the background elements and the computer-style, with the repeated text and fading a good way to keep attention on her. The physics on the piece, and the clothing physics are really well done, and the skirt is very realistic. The piece, however, is slightly unbalanced, with a majority of the cream coloured things (folder, Monika's face and hand, papers) being on the right side, with only darkness (folders, legs) on the left. Depending on the feel you're going for, it could be an advantage to have a 'colour tilted' piece, but it feels sort of lopsided currently. The way the image flows is also commendable, with a good cycle - the eye starts at Monika's face, goes down to the pages, realism and details down there, and circles up over the background information and back to Monika. Monika's face has an intriguing expression on it, and I can't quite pick the emotion but it keeps me coming back to try and decipher it. The neck seems to be a little too long, and as was commented earlier, the face doesn't quite line up with the head position, which needs a little work. The chibis and eye and mouth is a really nice touch, adding to the discordant feel of the whole piece. Overall, it's a really nice representation of the game, with awesome blending of styles and composition, however, it could be improved by adding some lighter glitches to the left side or extending it so Monika is the centre (you would then lose the tight, trapped feel then) to balance the values, working on face and head positioning and anatomy. Overall, I love the piece!
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Man, Doki Doki Literature Club is amazing! I just started playing and I think you nailed Monika's body shape and overall appearance! I love the little details like the Monika.exe and the eye and mouth at the bottom, and the three girls on the chair! Monika looks really realistic and I love how you drew her! The hair is on fleek and the clothes look really well drawn! I can see you worked very hard on this piece, and I absolutely love it! I think you could improve on the neck not looking so long in this kind of pose. Anyways, keep it up! And Monika did nothin wrong! ;>
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I think your art is very beautiful Glitch... If i had money and stufff i would commission you any day, i really love the design you went for in this, Also love the little chibis on the folder in the pic. i also love the wall having like its a different universe, It look very amazing in my opinion and i will always like your art because your style is amazing!
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I think this is overall technically well done. I can certainly say that you demonstrate good form, value, and highlights on this piece. You understand where all the shading goes and how light radiates on an object. I especially like how you added highlights and value on the ribbon in her hair. Small details like that can make or break for a drawing. Some of the objects surrounding the anime lady give the piece a surrealistic feeling to it. This to me is surrealism and anime combined in one. There are some things in this drawing that I think could be a bit better. I'd like to see more contrast on the uniform and more implications of texture and detail on her clothing. I can also see some "sketch lines" on her uniform that I think shouldn't be visible and should be blended in with the shadows. I may be a bit biased when saying this because I'm into realistic drawings so this may not be necessary on a cartoon. Another thing I'd like to see is her face be more 3 dimensional. As stated previously, the jawline may be a bit off. It can be quite hard to draw a person's face at this angle and what happens is you tend to draw the jaw as if the person's facing straight ahead. I think to stop this from happening you should start out the head by first drawing 3 dimensional shapes to get a sense of orientation of the jaw and so on. Last thing I'd like to see is more detail on the hair. I was to see more confident strokes and lines to simulate more realistic hair. Here are some YouTube videos I believe will help you with your skills:
How to draw the head from extreme angles:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=PgK90T…
Digitally painting more realistic hair:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=JKTzdA…
How to paint folds:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=MHRSPN…
You have lots of potential and I'm looking forward to see more in the future.
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wHoa i needed these tutorials lol thanks for listing them there
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Doki Doki Literature Club nice and interesting how you decided to add to the breaking 4th wall.
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I found Doki Doki Literature Club because Jacksepticeye played it and he was like "I've heard this isn't what it seems to be just stick with me on this one" so i watched it and yes the endings yesyesyes. I also saw some other YouTubers play it, but jack's play through is my favorite. Sadly I haven't been able to play it for myself, but I would.
I like all the little references to the game in this, and it's really well put together overall
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Wow. Really good. Especially the details: All the tiny drawings on the sketch book.
I also like the shadows and highlights, great work!
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This is really good! I love all the little details you added to it! Although I have yet to know what this game is about; You really make it look interesting and now I think I may give it a try : P! The entire photo looks so amazing and well done! I love the details on the girl; not to mention the background makes me even more curious about what's happening! And the anatomy looks great~! Keep up the great work ♥!
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I love the level of detail in this. The background and the stickers both add that little extra dose of detail that really makes this picture unique. I also didn't notice the realistic eye and moth until later-- those are interesting additions. I love the colors and kind of chaotic pose! My only ideas for this piece are that the hair seems a little sharp and pointy-- though that's probably just part of your style-- so that's more of a nitpick than a criticism. I do think that there's something off with the face, particularly the jawline. The eyes seem a little big, that that's also a nitpick-- probably due to style. It's all good ^^ You did a GREAT job making the nose from this angle! I, myself, can't do that lol. The shoulders look a little off too, but overall this is a great piece, especially the coloring and folds in the clothing and level of detail!
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I really love the effort you put into planning the composition of this piece!! I think you challenged yourself alot with a difficult perspective and multiple objects in the background and it was pulled off really well! Some constructive feedback that I hope may help you improve even more for your next piece:
The angled face was really well drawn especially the nose from this angle!!! The only thing that looks off to me is the chin shape, basically where the head connects to the neck.
Shoulder placement can be slightly higher, especially the shoulder closer to the screen.
Your coloring is good but be more confident and add more depth into the colors!! It's abit hard to tell where the light source is at the moment so with bolder shading it'll be much more obvious!
Overall really good attempt at the hard perspective and pose, I really like the drawing ♡♡♡
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