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goldfishoevil — Master and Servant
Published: 2009-04-20 07:19:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 182; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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I guess I'll slap this into fantasy. They technically belong in a fantasy world.A while ago I had a really epic dream, so I decided to continue poking at it as a plot/setting. Since then I've had a couple more plot-filled dreams, and I've settled each into that same world. These two were from my latest.
The master (the blond) loved his mommy dearly, until his dad conspired with a few other fellows and killed her. The then 15-year-old master killed them all, then went underground; for the last couple years, he's been mingling with slum lords and the like. Very good at poker, despite claiming never to have played it before, and very attached to his servant.
The servant is around ten years older, and dedicated absolutely to his master. He's got some pretty severe guilt issues vis-a-vis his feelings, considering how much older he is - and of course he thinks he should have prevented his mistress's murder, or at least the young master's murderous rampage. Quiet, calm, and ruthless when he needs to be.
In the dream, there were also several members of the underground "nobility", including at least two women pretending to be men, and a detective that was after the lot of them. Maybe I'll draw them sometime soon, too.
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You really should do more in the way of writing (or making availible to read) the stories you come up with. I always read these little blurbs of yours and get insanely curious.
Every time I start to forget how much personality your style or characters have, you put up another great little thing like this. I love the only barely restrained outright smugness of the blond. Definitely looks like the type who would pull that 'why no sir, I've never played in my life!' trick. Definitely.
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I'd write it if I could get some good ideas!
I don't know if you have a y!Gallery account, but if you do: the original dream I had, and the characters involved in it , character sketches from the second dream , and a small, poorly written drabble about the second dream . Obviously I do most of my work on y!. >.>
And yeah, he's pretty great. Much more insecure than he lets on, especially towards Mr. Impassive down there.
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I DO have a y!Gallery account, but I am never, ever, ever on it. >.> I will go there sometime soon and check out your other stuff there though. A lot of people do seem to be migrating away from DA.
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I get so much more feedback on my shit there, it's kinda ridiculous. XD
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