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Published: 2013-02-10 19:12:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 9076; Favourites: 166; Downloads: 0
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Updated March 2021. Curtains, uniform, floor...---------------------------------
Lately I'm fancying fanfics in which Jane Bennet doesn't end up with Charles Bingley. Bingley is a nice character, but a little weak. Several authors have managed to make Colonel Fitzwilliam a much better match for angelic Jane. So here, a scene somewhat inspired by those AUs.
The next Regency drawing I make will be of Lizzie and her Mr. Darcy.
Pencil sketch, colored in PS.
Updated. Thanks 0riginal-shiinto
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Jane Bennet, Colonel Fitzwilliam - Pride and Prejudice, Jane Austen.
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Comments: 17
anaios [2013-10-12 12:28:25 +0000 UTC]
Jane's expression is a little bit stiff, buuuuut Fitzwilliam looks genuinely in love!
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gppr In reply to DameOdessa [2013-02-12 18:25:36 +0000 UTC]
You are very kind, Dame. Thanks.
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0riginal-shiinto [2013-02-10 21:47:16 +0000 UTC]
I like the way you rendered the characters, G, but I think you could improve on the background. If the window is the principal lightsource, the red curtains obscuring them should be much darker, almost black, as should the walls around them. As it is, the take the focus away from the characters, and they don't "pop" as much as they should...
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gppr In reply to 0riginal-shiinto [2013-02-10 21:56:00 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the awesome feedback, OS. I will see what can be done about that.
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0riginal-shiinto In reply to gppr [2013-02-11 11:33:41 +0000 UTC]
This is much, much better! The change in value has really added a lot of depth to the image, and made the background fit better and the characters stand out more. Well done!
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gppr In reply to 0riginal-shiinto [2013-02-11 18:38:49 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, Original-shiinto. I'm glad you think so.
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