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Gray-Vizard In reply to Xenomaster [2013-06-13 00:07:07 +0000 UTC]

came up with this one myself i got pretty good at writing in what i started calling "Lantern Pentameter"

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Xenomaster In reply to Gray-Vizard [2013-06-13 07:35:37 +0000 UTC]

[link] take a look at MY corps

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Gray-Vizard In reply to Velikorossiya [2010-11-07 05:10:42 +0000 UTC]

no it wouldn't only 2 of the official oaths actually have that

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Velikorossiya In reply to Gray-Vizard [2010-11-08 23:55:10 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, but the last line you use is used by a lot of wannabe Oaths and it sounds bad. Overdramatic. Corny.

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Gray-Vizard In reply to Velikorossiya [2011-04-18 04:42:59 +0000 UTC]

I think that bit about "True White Light" is mentioned on the wiki page about the white lanterns

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Velikorossiya In reply to Gray-Vizard [2011-04-18 05:48:34 +0000 UTC]

Meh.

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Gray-Vizard In reply to Velikorossiya [2011-04-18 08:33:27 +0000 UTC]

well lets hear yours then

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Velikorossiya In reply to Gray-Vizard [2011-05-08 07:46:56 +0000 UTC]

I don't have one. It's not the type of thing I can write.

If you want a piece on murder or dead babies, though, I'm your man.

I'm only offering friendly criticism, don't take it the wrong way.

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Gray-Vizard In reply to thevampman24 [2010-11-07 05:13:33 +0000 UTC]

personally i like the 2nd one i did but ppl seem to like my original ones

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