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grayDeviant In reply to WhispersxDreaming [2010-10-27 23:37:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the honest opinion. After looking it after a month, I do see what you're saying about it being hard to read.

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WhispersxDreaming In reply to grayDeviant [2010-10-28 22:54:21 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

Although, I think it's more of the way the quote is worded that makes it hard to read. The typography itself is pretty clear, but the grammar of the quote is slightly strange. Well, I think it is, at least...

Also, it probably doesn't matter, but I noticed a slight typo. Just thought I'd mention it so that you don't make the same mistake twice.

I think I'm starting to sound a bit negative now, though, so I'll just stop typing.

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grayDeviant In reply to WhispersxDreaming [2010-10-29 00:29:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sensitive about my works, these are just for fun, and I always appreciate honesty. Too many times we let each other back by not being direct so we can have the opportunity to improve ourselves. I missed a comma, was that the type you are referring to?

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WhispersxDreaming In reply to grayDeviant [2010-10-29 17:26:55 +0000 UTC]

I know what you mean. Honesty is like a path to moving forward.

And, actually, the typo is on the word 'knows'. I assume it should be 'know' because it makes more sense grammatically and because that's what you wrote in the description.

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grayDeviant In reply to WhispersxDreaming [2010-10-29 19:59:47 +0000 UTC]

Lol. I am always correcting grammar wherever I run across it and inadvertently did it here. I even looked it over when you made your first mention of it and I missed it every time I went back over it.

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WhispersxDreaming In reply to grayDeviant [2010-10-30 12:34:37 +0000 UTC]

Oh well, ^_^* even I do that sometimes. At least you noticed it now.

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