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Published: 2014-11-30 02:18:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 3580; Favourites: 150; Downloads: 0
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Yes... the title does not lie. This drawing is finally complete! xDAlthough ive not been working on it consistantly it has still taken me around a week or two to completely finish this drawing and i cant even express how happy i am with it xD
I mean i am SO fricking happy with this xD It was Β real challenge but i think it went really well and id love to know what you all think of this
Ive always loved those drawings/images where the have 'random' colours in the characters hair/chlothes so i was so happy to be able to try that out in this drawing xD
Also ive now set up my Art Facebook page where i intend to upload my references so you can see/have the option to see what i will be drawing
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thanks for honesty and thanks for the critique aswell as the watch :L)
i hope that my future art will be more to your liking :3
I will take all these points into consideration and do my best to implement them in my next drawings to improve
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no problem!! ;w;
I look forward to seeing your improvement! If you need any help or have any questions feel free to ask! (even though i;m still improving a lot myself ;w
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thing i need help with most is how to draw digital art and how to improve on OC's/being able to draw without a reference (i suppose the best way to do this would be to familiarize myself with how to draw different styles of hair eyes clothes etc but im not sure exactly how id go about learning that
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I'm surprised the improvement that you had this months, I have to say your coloring it's good, very good. you have an excellent technique. The anatomy is the problem here, but obviously no one can make a excellent draw at the first time. You have to be careful with the body's proportion, and hands, foots, eyes, and more. I always said, in a anime girl, the most important parts are hair, eyes and hands, (boobs sometimes).. but, this three parts are the perfect combination for a good draw. You have to keep drawing and seeing another works and more illustrations by great artists. All the improves are in the practice. Keep the good work. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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The picture is overall good, with some flaw here and there, but nothing that can't be improved with daily practice. First of all, let me tell you that the shading is great... obviously is not exactly the same that the reference, but you achieved a nice effect. The problem is in the linearity... Don get me wrong, is good, but the lines are kinda shaky... also one of the hands is way too small and it looks weird. And finally there's the angle of the head that does not seem to natural.
ANYWAYS, this doesn't mean that the picture isn't good, and you can improve with some practice!
Some tips! I see that spiral in your sketchbook!! If that thing makes your wrist and or hand feel weird, you can always take a sheet off the sketchbook and save your drawing on a folder. This allows your wrist to freely move and make the most of that pivot point to make smooth lines. You can also mess with the position of your paper... some people find it easier to replicate an image upside down.
Practice with hand references! The hands size has direct correlation with age, body size and head!!! Also, sometimes you draw hands in weirder angles than in this picture, so if you need to, you can use your own hand as reference!!
Finally!!! Lots of practice and never give up!!! You have potential!! Plant that seed and make it grow!! With care, a beautiful flower will blossom!!
That all!! Keep up the good work
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Thanks
i appreciate the feedback and effort you put In to writing this critique
id like to think that my line art has improved a lot since this drawing (this drawing itself is about 3 months or so old and ive only been drawing for 5-6 months in total as it is 
if you say my more recent work some of the points made here may have already been addressed
I was still very much in the experimental stage whilst drawing this and actually attempted to colour one the hands using a media that was not colouring pencils hence the difference in skin tone (in all honesty until about 3 weeks ago I couldn't colour skin tone at all
the only real contender is my Takigawa Yoshino drawing or my 'Impossible Touka' WIPs which is my current project, the reference below should make it obviouse as to why I name it 'impossible Touka' xD
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Only 6 months?? Holy cat I already want to see your future artwork.
Yeah, skin tones are annoying to get at first xD specially when you have to mix some colors to get it right
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im currently working on Kirishima Touka from Tokyo Ghoul and im SO happy with it, i uploads WIPS daily at 2:00pm UK time if you wanna check it out some time :3
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I'll do my best to check
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Okay NOW I'll do a critique:
So I think that overall, it's a really good draw. However, in comparison to the ref photo, the head looks like the angle at which it's lowered is a little...I dunno, too sharp. Also, the bottoms of her legs look a little too dark, and just a bit...strange. I don't mean to be insulting, just...those are like leggings, right? They kind of look like her legs are actually that color. It's just a little strange, even though I realize that's probably the desirable affect. The creases in the jacket and the shorts are AMAZING though--it looks exactly like real cloth!! You captured the hair's movement and her thoughtful look perfectly. Just one more point: I think the left hand is a little bit...off. I know, hands and fingers are really hard to get right, but I think the fingers are slightly off. Overall, the shading, everything, is absolutely AMAZING!!! Really nice draw, I love it.
Sorry, I can get harsh sometimes, hope it wasn't too much.
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Honestly im so very grateful xD its my second ever critique that ive received and ill say what i said to the person who wrote my first one.
I am more than happy to see harsh yet truthful facts in regards to my drawing because then i know exactly where to improve, id learn nothing it i got full marks and was simply told it was just perfect or simply amazing and nothing else xD
to be honest i want you to be as harsh as you need to be.
im self taught and have no-one IRL to teach, guide and help me with my work so its crucially important for me to listen and learn from the comments of the users, be they my watchers or people who hate my work, you are all my Sensei's i need your harsh comments more than you know xD
But yeah i agree with you, i messed up the hands and got the colouring wrong on one of them because i tried out a new form of media which smudged/counteracted with my fine liner/line art therefore i had to stop that
Im very grateful for everything positive you had to say, there was quite alot of it xD, and i hope that my future works will impress and please you just as much
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Of course!!! Always glad to help out a bit
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Glad to know your so willing! ;-;
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After having watched Steins;Gate recently, I think it's safe to say you did a great job
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Glad you think so man xD
howd you find it? :3
It sits as my 2nd favourite anime atm 
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I really really liked it! it's probably one of my favourites too. though I found the ending a bit too perfect given the situation.
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watch the Steins;Gate movie
it ties the WHOLE series together
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Eeeey that was my 2000th comment right there
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And what a worthy comment it was 
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Ooh, I didn't know there was a movie! Time to go and watch that
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Took me a week or so before I realised there was a movie xD
they also have some rather funny 3 minutes ONA available which are really just little side bits
Aswell as a likely upcoming new season
'Steins;Gate Γ' has been confirmed to be a new game releasing soon and has been said that it will receive an anime adaptation Aswell!
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Ah nice! More Steins;Gate! That's always good
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I think this is an awesome drawing, I like the pose you chose to draw, as well as the movement she's performing.
There are some flaws, but practice makes perfect. The colouring was done nicely!
Well done
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thanks alot
i always like to here peoples thoughts on this drawing asit was my fuirst ever 'successful' drawing, i had some decent ones before this but this was my first one that was to a good standard.
the feedback i usually get from this is about the hands/face (anatomical errors ect xD) but id only been drawing 2-3 months when i finished this drawing so im still very proud of it and will always be on eof my favourites
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It is a pretty good drawing for the time you've been practising, hope you continue drawing
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i intend to, its all a matter of keeping the quallity of my drawings at this stage xD
and if i cant keept the quality the same id atleast like to improve XD
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you coul try drawing her again in another pose, or a different person from that anime to see if you got better at it
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thats true
Ive uploaded a few references of the drawings i intend to drawin the future, all of which are rather detailed and tricky but if i dont test myself then i shall never improve! ;D
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Wow this is really nice I m ean the coloring is just stunning overall I like how you shaded it her hair and leggings are very nicely colored you've almost got everything down but those hands look a little to small but overall this is a very nice drawing!!!!!!!
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Thanks!
it was one of my fairly early artworks so I'm very proud of it :3
however I fully expected there to be many problems like the hands etcΒ
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This looks great! I really like the shading, and the pose is great as well! The only thing i would point out would be the top hand, but other than that the proportions and anatomy are well done!
Β I'd say you did a great job overall!
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thanks :3
im glad you like it
i think its my best and its certainly popular/my most viewed and faved but alot of people think ive improved since then and prefer my more recent drawings.
im just happy my drawings are liked
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I've looked at some of your more recent stuff and there are some improvements for sure! i especially love the -Β Impossible-Touka-WIP you're working on. The colours are amazing!Β
I can see that, i feel the same way! Having people like your art makes it all worth it
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thanks man
im glad you like it
its certainly taking its oll
caused me alot of stress and confusion when trying to colour and get the right shade and urghh just a complete nightmare but its looking good and very happy with the way its turning put so far
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very much appreciated :3
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this is nicely done, just the left arm and hand looks...off. Excellent job over all
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Now this is some improvement! You've shaded this one very nicely. Just watch out for anatomy (like the hands for example). However, as I said, you're impoving very nicely. Keep going and draw alot and you should be able to get better and better at this rate!Β
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thats means more than you know coming from you man xD ;-;
I just need to get my drawing perfect and then i can focus more on improving my colouring, maybe i should draw some already completed line arts or manga pages etc?
Either way thanks for taking the time to give the feedback, i look forward to your work as always and was actually rather upset to see youve not got prints enabled ;-;
I was thinking with the 25% off theres not really any other drawings id like to buy other than yours good sir xD
(course others interest me but yours are on another level man xD)
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That sounds good! I should be coming with a tutorial sometime too, so hopefully that will help you on your practice. Nailing the lineart/drawing part will be possible after you've drawn alot. A thing I did a while back was measuring for example how long/wide the hand, head etc of a refrence was, just to help myself get it right. After I'd drawn alot of them, I just got used to it. And thanks for thinking about bying a print. However, I'm not serious about my drawings. I'm still trying out different stuff and practising, so I would never sell any of the drawings I've done so far. I mean, I don't add backgrounds much and I do tend to rush my drawings quite often :-p However, I believe I can reveal to you that the next one is going to be a bit different. I must thank you for the constant support as well. Enjoy the rest of your day!
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i look forward to it!
i certainly hope so, i mean i can only get better with practice so all i can do is keep working on and try out new techniques to help me learn (like measuring the body parts :3)
Not a problem man! i mean believe what you will but you are a HUGE inspiration to me dude, you are the sole reason i decided to implement colour to my drawings! :')
So really i owe my latest success to you as i would still be shading if not for your work
So you say but one day i hope to be able to change your mind about that
Besides id love to own one of your original pieces when you make it big!
How exciting! 
i shall provide feedback and support for as long as you draw and upload good sir! ;DΒ
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Arigato!
im glad you like it, I'm so glad it turned out so well xD
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