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So after almost two months of waiting, I present you with… a transition page. Of course.
So basically what happens here is Iris is possessed by Zekrom, Reshiram gets a human body by possessing some random dude, and the team arrive in castelia city, where I make a tasteful puberty joke. whoopee.
Seriously, though, i think each page of HBN is better than the last. I found a new way to shade/color that looks so much nicer than the old way. I hope you like it
As always, critiques/ suggestions /comments are appreciated.
OH CRAP FORGOT CAMEOS!!!
In order of appearance:
's Fleska
's Emily
's Sen
's Kila
's Sam
's Nezume
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Has been the entire time.
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Excuse me, I'm going to have a mental breakdown over the fact that Holly is a guy over in the corner over there. Don't mind me.
Also, redundancy department much?
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Ok, and how so?
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My own statement of which I am stating.
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Aw, thanks! I really wasn't a fan of her in game character, so I changed it XD
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PFFFTTT
bwa haha
I love that XD
Random dude hittin on Fleska
then gets possessed
XD
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I'm glad you do XD
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LOOK AT THAT SAM
Doing Sam things
like walking
haha thanks for putting Sam in there, I appreciate it! The page looks great.
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The Sam is doing the Sam things such as the Sam walking
You're welcome, and thanks
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Aw, thanks
I'd say he loves you too, but he has a heart of metal. literally and figuratively.
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Lol that slap! XD
Man, Holly is so excited to see new things. Sometimes I wish I was like him. So jolly. :3
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Yup
And yeah, Holly is super excitable XD
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heh, this legendary addition to the plot is quite interesting and love how you deal with the transitions to and from them with well that was weird XD. yeah, like you noted in a journal, the end of the page did get a bit wall of text ish, but it's just something you'll have to get used to or figure out with that character. you say it's usually when your servine shows back up onscreen, so just start being more conscious of the word count of his bubbles when you write him and you'll be fine
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Heh, thanks
And yeah, I usually use Mono whenever I have something to explain (what else are cyborgs good for?) and so he ends up talking quite a lot… You're right, in the future I'll have to approach his dialogue more carefully. Thanks
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no problem, and heh, there ya go, utilizing the characters for what YOU want, not having their existence dictate how you tell the story
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Heh, I don't know if that's a good or bad thing… O.O
I guess it depends on the situation XD
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I consider it a good thing
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"Humans call it 'puberty'." Oh boy XD
You got some pretty interesting concepts going on! I liked the character designs - they're intriguing
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Well, Reshiram is definitely a douche (I guess it's just his personality XD), but I would say Zekrom's just stuck up. As you said, all will be answered in the future
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Aww yes! Can't wait to see!
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I hate Iris too, but you managed to make her interesting! This page looks great visually and I like where you're going with the story.
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Aw, thanks! Iris was a big concern of mine because I'm playing black, so Drayden is the Opelucid gym leader. This makes iris is a completely useless character, and I really hate useless characters. So I did this XD
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