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Published: 2015-11-20 05:12:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 471; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Hmm, I feel like the 2 new additions don't fit as well into the composition. Also, why is the red battle toad stepping on the ground line? It makes him feel like he's on a different plane than everyone else. The gun turtle's stretched out foot is in front of the standing turtle, but his other foot is significantly behind, this would work if his entire body is tilted but the way you drew his upper body he's actually leaning into the viewer, so his other foot shouldn't be so far behind.
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Yeah, the red toad shouldn't be stepping on the line. I was moving them around, and forgot to move him back.
Mikey's pointing with his fingers, not a gun, though thanks for pointing out the issue with his feet. 
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