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GrimzyRaider — Chapter One: Pages 1+2
Published: 2007-09-01 22:57:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 3321; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 36
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Well the pages are finally done, I really don't believe that I actually finished them today. I know, I know, they don't look all: ZOMFG GLORIOUS! I'm not Stan Lee and will never be him. I haven't done any strips in a while, so that's why you see that these pages aren't really that great. However, this is how they came out, and I will NOT change them, I already promised myself I would not restart iZod anymore. For those who don't know this is my Invader Zim webcomic/ doujinshi/ thing called Invader ZIM: Operation Doomsday (iZod for short). Just like I stated before this is just the prologue: [link]Chapter 2 will officially start iZod. This is basically events that shall happen in the future. AND before anyone says I added eye liner to ZIM, HE IS POSSESSED PEOPLE, yes, this is a huge spoiler, BUT it had to be said before people started saying that I made ZIM gay or something. More pages soon to come. Enjoy everyone, I think you waited long enough.
ALMOST FORGOT TO MENTION My editiors !redhotchilipepper28 and !doomofraven will be editing the iZod pages, though neither of them were on which resulted in lameness story. Go check them out!
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I don't think I saw you.... But thanks man! I was in the artist alley.
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I was also with 2 other people a girl and a boy around 20 I was also wearing a bunny hat o-o... wait you madae this comic right?
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Yes. Yes I did.
I remember a bunny hat, maybe I did see ya.
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i looked like this [link]
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Oooh, I love the eyes in the little closeup shot :3
Is that a clock or a loser stamp on Zim's forehead? X3
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Well, the way Dib is kicking Zim is kind of bothering me, his back should be twisted a bit more to bring his leg up all the way like that. Try checking this, it's got everything needed for fight scenes and motion and stuffs 
Also, most of the poses look sort of rigid, you may want to try watching kung fu or fight movies for refs for more fluid poses.
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This looks good so far! Only Zim's face and pose looks strange in the second panel. I think Zim should be bending so it looks like the kick has more force behind it, and...I'm not quite sure why the face doesn't look correct...maybe the mouth is open too wide? I don't know. 
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Ha ha! Yeah, that face was bugging me. It was quickly done, and at the end, I was too lazy to change it.
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I will! 
I understand...sometimes details in my drawing bug me but I just ignore them because I'm too lazy to change the mistakes. Usually if I'm going to change something I end up re-drawing the whole picture.
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I've finally had a chance to read these pages!
And....I love them!! I can't wait 'til the next update!
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Glad you liked them. ^^
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Cool! Dib's eyes looked kinda weird, but it's better than anything I could do.
I'll be waiting!
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Yeah, I'm used to the eyes being seen through the glasses. But you're the artist.
This story really caught my interest.
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Finally.
Can't wait for more "oomph" in the next parts!
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I hope the oomph parts will be worth your patients.
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WOWZ! I am impressed as heck! It's looking like it's going to be AMAZING!
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I've noticed that you beg to differ. :3
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oh wow, you finally started it again. nice new pages
looks to be an interesting story fo sho ^^
if you want some critique though, zim's body looks really awkward in the second page. i mean, the rest of that page looks good, like with dib running and jumping.
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Try concaving it so it looks like he took some force from the kick. Definitely will stick around for updates
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This is really cool. Zim looks as creepy as hell though, but it's cool.
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*Eyes glaze over with happiness* Whaddaya mean it isn't 'ZOMFG GLORIOUS!'? It's fantastic and lovely! Sorry I wasn't online >.< MSN's been being a bitch recently. I'll try and be on as much as possible, but I'm starting college in a few days so that may do away with what little free time I have
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It's ok, that's why I got another editor, to aid me when you ain't able to and to make it so you don't have a work load.
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That's pretty good so far. Can't wait to see more!
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Thanks for thinking so. Glad your gonna stick around to see more.
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OMG!!!!! *gives you a plate of cookies*
I love it!! I cant wait for more!!
Aw... Zim got kicked...
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Ooh, ooh! Is that something else a scary ass sister who can doom whomsoever she pleases? Cuz, you know, Gaz can totally pwn Zim. And Dib. At the same time.
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Ha ha, we'll just have to wait and see.
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Yeah, uber scary Gaz!
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it rocks, now go do more x]
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>>; I think it wasn't what people were expecting. I really should have put more time on it. sigh I hope the next pages turn out better.
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it's totally unexpected, and a nice change of pace from what other IZ fan comics have went
ZIM rules the world, what can be better than that?! xD
i know i can't wait to see what happens next! ^___^
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Oooh it's finally here 
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It was worth the wait, and I'll bet the next pages will be even better
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OHGODS. This is awesome so far. Not a lot of action, but I dun care. I still love it and it's so cool. 8DDDD 
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Ha ha thanks bechno, I'm glad you liked it. The next pages will have way more action, hope you stick around to see it. ^^
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I will definitely stick around for more, dude. They're too awesome to be ignored. 8D
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