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GrimzyRaider — Chapter One: Pages 3+4

Published: 2007-10-24 17:08:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 2158; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 14
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Description Haven't uploaded in a while....anyway, here are the new pages. I hope it was somewhat worth your wait. Keep in check, new pages will arrive next week. Enjoy!
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Speacial thanks to !doomofraven for editing these pages!!

Story/Art/iZod ©*Grim-Raider
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Comments: 27

sweetflake3 [2011-06-24 01:38:02 +0000 UTC]

The face on his glove changed too!

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Joni-Poni [2010-02-09 21:47:30 +0000 UTC]

head jokes

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redhotchilipepper28 [2007-11-03 15:46:40 +0000 UTC]

My brain, in its current nonexistent state, didn't notice this until now *hits self over the head with a frying pan*. Very very awesome, I like the way you did the action sequence thingy

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SDFilm [2007-11-01 21:59:08 +0000 UTC]

Very nice comis series. I'm glad to see you put the effort in to the colouring and effects.

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GrimzyRaider In reply to SDFilm [2007-11-02 01:14:08 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha, I intend on going until I finish. Thanks for the compliment.

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Feimi [2007-11-01 16:19:05 +0000 UTC]

I think this is excellent! Nice choice of fonts, also, they help to set the mood. I also love the action here.

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GrimzyRaider In reply to Feimi [2007-11-02 01:13:29 +0000 UTC]

So glad you liked them. I hope Doug liked them too. D=

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Feimi In reply to GrimzyRaider [2007-11-11 04:01:55 +0000 UTC]

I know he did. XD

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halfeatencandybars [2007-10-27 13:55:13 +0000 UTC]

HIS TEETH. Dey be creepy. But shtill, very cool pages.

Dib in that last panel. XD hahaha, he's such a wuss, can't even take an alien super punch.

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Nebeaula [2007-10-26 02:48:04 +0000 UTC]

omg! badassery!! >_<
Dib totally deserved that, too!!
hahahaha
GREAT JOB, RAIDER!!! x3

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GrimzyRaider In reply to Nebeaula [2007-10-26 05:36:44 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha, that he did, no kicking Zim.

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Nebeaula In reply to GrimzyRaider [2007-10-27 22:31:43 +0000 UTC]

ya!!
haha
i can't wait to see what happens next!!
i'm gettin butterflies and stuffs
lol

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PinoyWolf [2007-10-25 03:07:05 +0000 UTC]

Duuuuude! Awesome new pages! <8DDD
I've been looking forward to seeing the continuation! x3

I have to say, in my opinion at least, this page looks absolutely fantastic.

Someone mentioned before there was a typo? well I've read the pages I don't see anything wrong with the grammar!

anyways the pages have a lot of great positive things going for them that really add to the appeal of the pages x3

1. They just look so clean! x3 The lineart looks so crisp and solid, it's appealing for me in my opinion :3 and the coloring and shading were done nicely. Would you consider it cel-shading? It looks great!

2. Nice use of effects man! I like how you blurred and well, you really made the special effects stand out what more can I say! You really make the action pack a punch! x3

3. Using text for sound effects was also an invaluable asset for the special effects! Like said before it really makes actions standout!

4. Lastly, the use of different fonts really takes the cake. You used just the right fonts to fit the mood of each dialouge exchange like that bloody like text you got up there it really makes it seem like Dib is doomed! xD

All in all man, this page has got pizazz! Really! <8D you know just the right elements to give it that pizazz! Keep it up man these are the best pages so far! x3

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GrimzyRaider In reply to PinoyWolf [2007-10-26 05:33:31 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha....I'm glad you liked them. There was an grammar error, but I fixed it. Anyway, I'm flattered to hear you like my lines and cel shading. I'm sometimes way to hard on myself with these pages....and all the stuff I draw for that matter , I usually give it a day without looking at the finished piece, and afterwards I end up liking what I see. Takes time to get over my critic-y-ness with myself.

As for the effect and text, I've read 1 or 2 comics, I got ideas, and put them to use. I really like the motion blur, when used right it looks really nice. Text always helps to give a page more life, and helps spread more emotion, the only hard part is to try and find the text that fits the emotion going on. Luckly there's fontfreak.com

Thanks for the comment bro, holeh-shiztz haven't gotten that long of a comment in a while. The time it took you to type it out really brings me joy and shows you really enjoyed these pages. I'm so glad you liked it, and hope you keep reading on. ^^

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AKFchan [2007-10-25 01:20:21 +0000 UTC]

le gaspeth!
Yay! New page!
I love it! I could totally hear Zim's voice in my head saying all that stuff.
Awaiting next page with anticipation!

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GrimzyRaider In reply to AKFchan [2007-10-26 05:35:18 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha! Got you by surprise, huh? I'm glad I made Zim sound more Zimmy like, also thanks to my editor. Keep in touch, they will arrive.....SOON.

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atf12 [2007-10-24 21:59:43 +0000 UTC]

Sweetness! :3

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yoshi1231551 [2007-10-24 21:46:30 +0000 UTC]

LOL, you made a typo in the first speech bubble on pg. 4. It's "you're" as in "you are"...You put "your". ...Sorry if this was annoying, I just thought I'd point it out...

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GrimzyRaider In reply to yoshi1231551 [2007-10-24 22:16:38 +0000 UTC]

Gah! "You're" right. My editor didn't even catch that.

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doomofraven In reply to GrimzyRaider [2007-10-25 14:17:29 +0000 UTC]

GAH! I feel bad i didn't catch it! ><; forgive me!

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GrimzyRaider In reply to doomofraven [2007-10-26 05:36:02 +0000 UTC]

No problem, it's partly my fault for making the text kinda hard to read.... >>;

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doomofraven In reply to GrimzyRaider [2007-10-26 16:35:30 +0000 UTC]

Nah, 's not hard to read. i just fail at some forms of grammer

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yoshi1231551 In reply to GrimzyRaider [2007-10-24 23:49:54 +0000 UTC]

Most people on DA don't seem to notice the difference between the two.

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Emailaddict [2007-10-24 20:46:57 +0000 UTC]

OMG, ZIM YOU PUNCHED DIB!!!!

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GrimzyRaider In reply to Emailaddict [2007-10-24 22:15:59 +0000 UTC]

LMAO, well that's what Dib gets for kicking ZIM.

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Emailaddict In reply to GrimzyRaider [2007-10-24 22:17:43 +0000 UTC]

True.... Very true...

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Sekele [2007-10-24 17:21:53 +0000 UTC]

yahoo

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