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Guenhwyvar-Drizzt — Sarum Tir'ein
Published: 2008-06-26 19:56:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 103; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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ahh this is a charecter i designed a long long time ago, but have never been able to draw. this is the closest ive got so far to how ive pictured this charecter, but still...needs improvement... ah wel hehe his name is Sarum Tir'ein, and hes an elf vampire, with a demon trapped inside him. and i think i drew his shoulders too big...poop...oh yh, those things on his face and neck are scars, from various torture.ah well hehe if you have any comments please feel free! and also, I NEED CRITISM FOR THIS PIC!!! PLEASE!! give me any critism!
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Great picture, I love the expression - you're always coming up with such cool characters
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Ok ^^ I like his eyes and expression.
As for criticism... I can criticize if you want me to so... ok here it goes:
Seems like you started to shade his back hair but none of the clothes or the hair in the front, and skin. The light seems to be coming from his right side of the face, so make the hair, skin, and clothing look like the light is hitting him on that side of the body.
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thankyou! and yh...i forgot to finish shading...i think ill re-colour this pic and change the file, and yh good tip, i always forget to think about light sources as well...
thankies!
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You're welcome 
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Awesome!.....I don't want to criticise it... I'll feel mean... both the shoulders are fine.. I think the top of his head just needs to be a bit bigger... and on the left side of his face his cheek needs to be a bit lower down... sorry
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hehe thats ok! i know...everytime i draw this guy, i get his cheeks and forehead wrong...curse him!!! and thanks!
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He still looks awesome though!
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but i dont like criticising hehe,, but i do think his right cheekbone looks a lil odd, cos it's angle n the thinness of the hair there it just doesnt look too right to me.. but thats just me there,, umm more hair? i think i want him to look a lil more .. umm not sure,, kinda have a bit more evil of a smirk n eyes, but still looking noble and handsome,, love the scars,, n maybe all red shirt with some black thread crisscrossing across the buttons like similar to a shirt i think i remember you having (or my mates trenchcoat - which isnt as cool as mine, but is close 
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yh i always get his cheeks n hair wrong...>_< n yh he should probs look aa but more evil...what with the demon and vampire lol he's supposed to be good overall, but they occasionally take control and make him evil...(how original
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'Various torture' Hehe
Umm yeah... i already said i thought his head needed more hair...
And i dont think his shoulders are too bad! The one on the right might be abit big... but its hard to tell since its cut of the picture
Also, you might want to do more shading on his skin and clothes... but his eyes look really good!
I hope that isnt too harsh crit.... >___>;;
Overall i think its really good!
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hehe and thanks! and also...damnit! i had two versions of this pic, and on the other one i had done shading...but then i forgot to add it onto this version...POO!!!
hehe its not harsh ^_^ and thankyou!
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Oops 
Fhewie! Im glad
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yh...what i had done is paste the hair onto the new pic, to save colouring it again, and then i forgot the rest...>_<
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Oopsies! I nearly did that with the picture with too gaaras!
It still looks good though
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hehe
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