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Gwennafran — Mind if I Smoke - Revised
Published: 2011-04-05 20:37:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 1837; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 7
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Updated version of this: [link]Femme fatale character for a comic project I'm currently working on, where I'm drawing the comic to a story made by Peder Riis. The idea is to play with the film noir detective genre.
She's been updated so she is better suited for promo art.
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nice
Uhm, may I say that I think it's a shame that the cast shadow is so strong when the light on her seems a bit weak, would've been nice if you'd worked more with stronger and (mere markante xP) shadows to follow op on the noir thingie.
(WTF - do DA want me to PAY for being able to give critique OAo? tsk tsk)
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Yeah, it's a premium feature. Which really is a shame. I understand having to pay to get CC, but pay to give it?!?
And yeah, I guess you could say that I'm working my way to strong shadows, while still lacking the courage to really use them. This version at the least has more than the first one. :/
This actually is something I am aware of myself. But like said... I'm a bit of a chicken on this one. And decided to focus on getting page one done as well for features, rather than go all the way with this one. (I obviously agree with your observation. Maybe now I'll actually do something about it)
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Damn, silly
Haha, yeah, I'v having respect for everyone who can get themself to make comics
But about being chicken - as they say at our school: Fail good - fail often XD Or something like that :3
But sounds cool, looking forward to see what you "might" do
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Yeah... Didn't even get to finish the comic-page, but what's to expect when you start late in the evening.
Oh well, maybe I will have time to do something Sunday once I get back from my short vacation in Denmark.
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