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HaikuKitty — Perpetual Trees
Published: 2007-11-02 06:27:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 137; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 2
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churchyard witnesses -enduring evergreens
testify in whispers.
Nov 1, 2007
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Wonderful piece, and excellent timing, posting it then!
I love the monochrome photograph. I'm not sure it would work the same with the green needles. I can't think of anything better, though. All I came up with was "contemplating conifers" which sounds kind of corny to me.
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the black-and-white is mysterious, though it kind of drowned the green color in the poem.
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Hmmm... I wonder how it would look with the green of the needles left and the rest in gray..... Now you have me thinking. I have written this poem a hundred times, and it is still not right. I even called the evergreens "perpetual trees"
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