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i walk the path alone, impish leaf scampers behind.10-30-2007
HK
haikuwrimo day 30
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Excellent use of 1 line to convey this image. I think it gives a nice continuity to the action where multiple lines to lose that.
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Oh 'impish leaf'- I like that image very much
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It was very cute, I was walking - the leaf would follow me loudly, I would stop, the leaf would stop, I would walk, the leaf would follow me, I would stop, the leaf would stop. Very haiku moment!
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Thanks for sharing - it is funny. Nature telling us to lighten up, perhaps
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