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HOLY FUCK THIS TOOK ME DAYS TO FINISH!!! IT LOOKS SO FUCKING GOOD!! AUGH!!!!The first 8 hours of these 3 together. Holyfuck i had the sketch of this since januari. The past days i finished it up. God am i proud of this one.
Anyway!
The story to this
On Florana. Halo was originally created by Aiden. For years she was stuck in his facility. Undergoing horrible and painfull tests. She was a pet towards him. Even keeping her in a glass cage in his livingroom. The only reason he kept her was because she has extremley rare traits for a NexusDragon. Royal blood so to speak.
Often times Aiden would leave the TV on while he is busy in his lab. Halo out of boredom often watched TV when she was laying on a branch inside the cage. All kinds of things came by. The Science channel and the news was mainly on. As weeks turned into months and months into years. She got bored quite alot and just watched TV or eat. Or watch along with Aiden what experiments he had in his lab. Often times he disected annimals from the surface of Florana and she would watch how he preformed those. She also watched TV and learned how to break glass. She had to teach herself to breathe fire and she managed to do so.
Often times in the middle of the night she would start breathing fire at one corner of the glass cage to weaken it day by day. In the hope Aiden wouldnt notice eighter.
Occasionally when she watches the news she would see Ratchet and Clank on the news. At first she didnt think much of it. She couldnt understand anything they said on TV as shes not able to speak or understand any laungage. However she did notice they were heroes.
As her fire grew stronger and hotter. She manages to make a crack in the glass. Halo knew this was her chanse. She got her things and Halo immedeyatley took a chanse and she uses her head to bash into the glass. She got desperate as she was terrified Aiden would hear her while she attempts to escape. She manages to break the glass in a few head slams into the glass and it broke. She knew if she wanted to take her things with her she needed a bag of some kind. She grabbed her stuff and stole a bag Aiden had in his livingroom among other things and ran for it.
Alarms went off and Sentinels tried to look for her immedeyatley. Even Aiden looked for her right away. She ran as fast as she could on all fours. She went to the water refinment system. Huge waterfalls were around her and she needed to take a leap of faith. Wich she did. She jumped down to get away. Aiden saw her jump before his eyes. His own creation escaped. Fueled by anger he destroyed one of his own sentinels. He sended the others to look for her on the surface. He knew anything would die if it would jump down so far into the water refinment systems. As so he thought. Halo got flushed trough the right pipes up to the surface.
She took her first breath of fresh air in her life. She coughed out the water and got to the edge of the lake she was in and crawled out right away and ran with the things she could carry.
For a day she wandered into one direction to get away from Aiden as far as she could. She found a temple. However she saw lights everywere. The temple was inhabited by naitives. Loud drum music was heard as they had a succesfull hunt that afternoon and now enjoyed it. Halo went ahead and looked from a tree what they are doing. After hours of them feasting on meat and fruits they all went to their own huts and slept. some took guard too. As the lights went out. Halo found a opurtinity to get the last scraps. She searched for a spot to sleep and she found one in a abbandoned part of the temple. She looked what she got from the bag. She got her sleeping towels, a Magazine with Ratchet and Clank on the cover. A few medical tools and books. Among other things
She observed the tribe she lived close with for weeks. Trying to learn their body laungage and the way they comunicate. She even got her own attire and mask and she made it all herself. She first has a wooden mask like they do.
As they had another feast in the tribe. Halo this time tried to blend in with them. However the naitives quickly noticed she looked alot difrent than they do. Scales, Claws, Horns....Wingless.
Some laughed at her while the guards held up spears up her neck. Some of them started hooting and chanting and they lead her to a entrance. Inside was the Path of death.
She manages to get trough the gauntlet with ease. doging the fire and the hazards and got into the firey Arena. Their leader was there aswell. He challenged Halo to a fight. He got into the Arena and he tried to kill her right away. However Halo breathes fire over him once. Killing him with one blow. She was accepted as a leader right away.
For weeks she hunted alongside them to get food on the table. Even killing a giant swamp monster. Halo taking the skull as a prize and making a mask out of it. Along with feathers. Painting it all red. Her reign lasted for a while
Untill Qwark came in
The naitives putted him trough the Path of Death. Qwark got burned, stabbed and hit trough the entire gauntlet. Tired and tore up. He had to fight Halo. She had her spear ready to go and ready to fight. Exhausted, Qwark finished the fight with Halo right away with one shot of his blaster. She survived the shot but she knew she couldnt fight him. So she ran off. Now an outcast. She has no choise to get her things and get back to her old hiding place in the abbandoned temple. She treated herself and did her best to have the shot wound heal over time.
The Tribe was deterioirating because of Qwark. Halo merley stealing food for her survival and killing her own prey to eat. Including cyclops monkeys. She gathered herbs and poisonous salamanders to make antidotes for herself. as she taught the tribe to use poison on intruders. Now their using it on her.
Weeks went by. Halo was surviving all on her own. Making little crafts in her hideout. She made a necklace out of a device she has from the bag too. Not knowing the device was a data disk with her information on it. and looking in the books she got. Even the magazine. She stole glass jars and pots and pans. And more supplies for herself in her own hideout. One day on the lookout however. A Starcruser came down from the sky. Landing near the temple. Halo saw it from the treetops and she got closer.
To her suprise the reconized the two who jumped out the ship. It was Ratchet and Clank. She stalked them for a while from afar to see where they were headed. They went right into the Naitive tribe and she got worried. However she was too scared to get close. In fear of him shooting her. She gets the concept of the gun now because of Qwark's blaster. And she was even more hesitant after seeing Ratchet's guns
Ratchet and Clank got closer to the main building. However they got ambushed. Many naitives came out all at once. And with the knowledge how to get rid of intruders quickly. It didnt take long for them to overpower Ratchet. He fought back. Shooting at them. When they got close they had their brains splattered accross the floor from a hit from Ratchet's wrench. However More showed up and one of them threw a poison tipped boomerang. While Ratchet wanted to jump it got him in the leg. Piercing trough it. He made a nasty fall ontop of Clank, Brusing Ratchet's back. As he grunts loudly with the fall. He wanted to grab his shockblaster. He managed to grab it but his body started to feel weaker and he started losing strength in his body to hold anything. He wanted to get up too but his leg hurted too much to get up. He used his plasma whip as a last effort to keep them away but he couldnt hold it anymore and started to go in and out of consisnous as his body was succumbing to the poison. Confused and in pain he saw one of the tribe members licking the boomerang infront of him. Realising what he just licked and saying "Uh oh"Before the naitive dropped dead on the floor. Ratchet realizing right away what was going on aswell.
Halo had no choise but to go in and help him out. Agaisnt his former tribe. She roared as loud as she could at all the of the tribe members from the tree she was in high up. Some of them started running as they knew she could fuck any of them up real quick. Some of them didnt back down however. Halo jumped down and covered Ratchet by using her whole body. She held her tail up with the spikes out and she growled loudly to sign to them to back off. Halo had no intent to fight them as she only wanted to get away with them with Ratchet.
One of them tries to attack with an axe but he got whipped hard in the head by Halo's tail and got hit with the spike. severley injuring the naitive. When they all want to Attack at once. Halo grabbed Ratchet and jumped into the water to avoid them. She swam as fast as she could as spears got thrown into the water. Ratchet's helmet still worked and activated his oxigen mask while he was underwater. He went in and out of consisnous as Clank occasionally is yelling his name when they surface once in a while.
After a little while. Halo got Ratchet in his hideout. She didnt understood the concept of a robot and peeled Clank off his back and threw him asside. Halo got Ratchet on his back on the floor and let him bleed out for a bit to get as much of the poison out. Clank started moving and Halo got spooked by him and jumps towards one of the walls of her hideout and hissing and snarling at him loudly. Clank got scared aswell but tries to look the least threadning he can towards her and talking to her in a calm tone. Halo didnt understood a word he said. She got back to work and she started to make her antidote right away and cooked some water while she got ready to cauturize Ratchet's leg shut. When the andidiote was done She got it to cool down using two bowls to pour it over in one and the other. And got Ratchet in a more sitting position to get him to swallow the antidote. She tilted his head up to trigger his swallow response too and she cleared out his wounds. using a anti bacterical gel and she cautirize his leg shut and left it open to dry up. She does her best to dry him off too with rags she has. All the while Clank was watching in agony as Ratchet was slowly dying. He knew Halo did her best to save his life. Halo dragged Ratchet into her nest and got him as in a comfortable position possible. his suit dried up rather quick because of the material its made of.
After a long while. Halo grabs a pot and puts it near Ratchet. Clank was wondering why. Halo notices Ratchet's wrench and smells the blood on it. She takes it aswell. She starts licking off the blood and notices Clank is standing close to her. Halo stops licking when she notices. She holds her nose close to Clank and sniffs him. She huffs right in his face too. Clank wipes out his eyes after she huffs. Clank asks her who she is but she doesnt understand him. She drops the wrench and turns to Clank and picks him up. Sniffing him and holding him up.
Ratchet let out a groan when he woke up. He looks over at Clank and Halo. He sees her holding Clank and he screams rather high pitched when he sees Them. Halo looks at him and screams back in response and she drops Clank. She got startled by Ratchet too. She backs off too as shes scared he will pull a gun on her.
However Ratchet is too weak to grab anything and is feeling too sick to do so. Both of them talk a little bit. Halo wants to get closer to both of them but Ratchet starts to heave. Halo backs off and holds her claws and wingclaws on her head to cover her eyes and ears and hide. Sadly Ratchet couldnt keep the last dose of the antidote inside and vomits in the pot Halo put down earlier.
Halo takes care of Ratchet for hours. And does her best to nurse him back to health. Even hunted a monkey for him so he could eat. Tho he couldnt eat raw meat. Clank manged to get a nanotech shot from the starcruser to Ratchet with Halo's help.
When Halo got back with the nanotech. Ratchet was cooking the meat that Halo caught for him. And wanted to share it with her. And shes confused as to why hes up and what he has done to her monkey.
As depicted in this piece
HOLY FUCK WHAT A TEXT WALL!!
Theres alot more hapening in this story but i left some things out on purpose. As im gonna attempt to draw another cute cene from this. That hapens before this one.
Also have a dose of wholesomeness!
So yeah. Its 7 in the morning here. Im going to bed. Peace!
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Comments: 50
SonicStreak5344 [2020-10-29 22:35:43 +0000 UTC]
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HaloLune In reply to SonicStreak5344 [2020-10-30 00:31:43 +0000 UTC]
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SonicStreak5344 In reply to HaloLune [2020-10-30 20:05:09 +0000 UTC]
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HaloLune In reply to SonicStreak5344 [2020-11-05 02:34:25 +0000 UTC]
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SonicStreak5344 In reply to HaloLune [2020-11-05 17:44:06 +0000 UTC]
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Sofie-Spangenberg [2020-06-02 09:13:16 +0000 UTC]
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Aidenblue2 [2020-05-16 23:02:16 +0000 UTC]
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StephDragonness [2020-04-15 06:54:14 +0000 UTC]
awesome set up how they meet beautiful drawing on background setting
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seionara [2020-04-09 05:58:14 +0000 UTC]
How come she didn't learn the language from watching TV/interacting with Aiden?
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HaloLune In reply to seionara [2020-04-09 09:45:56 +0000 UTC]
She never learned to read or to understand laungage. If there is no translations for anything you wont learn it eighter.
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seionara In reply to HaloLune [2020-04-09 16:03:57 +0000 UTC]
Well, not quite.
Young children (which I'm assuming she was?) do learn like that and with some sort of starting point you can go on to further learn a language based on what you do understand and can guess form context.
Full immersion can apparently also lead to learning for adults, though it's harder.
So, that's kind of what I was wondering about, I'd expect that if there wasn't some other issue (her species not developing the capacity to understand speech until they're relatively old*) she was exposed to very little speech as a child (which does cause other issues, though I'm not sure about specifics as I've never written something like that, though one could easily say that nexus dragons have a neurology that is far more forgiving in that area) or struggled because of a lack of interaction (though I still would think she'd pick some things up over time, at least in passive understanding, but then I do have a somewhat unusual way to learn and I think Neurotypical children do need interaction to learn?)?
But maybe I'm overanalyzing.
*Not necessarily related to intelligence.
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HaloLune In reply to seionara [2020-04-09 16:19:59 +0000 UTC]
Well. Good point there
Kinda reminds me of the fact i NEVER had english in elementary school. I learned super basic stuff from videogames and movies.
However. Halo didnt got to learn any laungage. She never had any schooling because she was held in a cage the most of her youth. Sometimes taken out to be experimented on. Then again. She might could have picked up a few things from TV but never really had a explaination of what it ment.
She learned from images in books the basics of medical skills. Tho she killed a few naitives on accident while trying to save them.
She is not stupid at all. When she got taken away from Florana. Clank began to teach her how to talk. And pernounce words the right way. I got a sketch of a mini comic showing this what Clank did with her. She was able to understand random words at this point. Even being able to say Ratchet's name
Interesting stuff tho. I dont mind people commenting like this. What do you think of this idea?
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HaloLune In reply to Sunstar-Of-The-North [2020-04-07 11:32:44 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!!
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Sunstar-Of-The-North In reply to HaloLune [2020-04-07 13:43:58 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome!
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jazzyamx [2020-04-06 23:53:26 +0000 UTC]
Very cute--Ratchet is being kind and gentlemanly, even whist injured and bleeding. A true hero, concerned about others first.
(It cannot be pleasant for him to be kneeling on his left leg like that, but he's maintaining his composure to help calm someone else.)
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HaloLune In reply to jazzyamx [2020-04-07 00:46:47 +0000 UTC]
Shes the one who saved him in the first place tho.
And your the first one saying this xD Yeah its painfull what he has.
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savrin330 [2020-04-06 20:20:31 +0000 UTC]
I really love the story and the wholesome moment between them!! :>
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Cambion-Hunter [2020-04-06 17:30:07 +0000 UTC]
A very endearing and humane scene with them too. ^^
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HaloLune In reply to Cambion-Hunter [2020-04-06 17:56:07 +0000 UTC]
Thank youu!! Yeah i think this is a very wholesome moment between them really
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Cambion-Hunter In reply to HaloLune [2020-04-06 21:01:51 +0000 UTC]
You are welcome, my friend.
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HaloLune In reply to Shelbi-Cat [2020-04-06 15:03:51 +0000 UTC]
thank you!! Took me a long time to finish this one
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Shelbi-Cat In reply to HaloLune [2020-04-06 15:48:46 +0000 UTC]
Ur Welcome! ^^
Does this story explain why Halo resents Qwark?
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HaloLune In reply to Shelbi-Cat [2020-04-06 16:36:29 +0000 UTC]
She hates Qwark troughout the whole time shes with Ratchet on the phoenix. Tho later on When Qwark comes back and saves their lives She has more respect for him.
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Tank-Dragon [2020-04-06 12:08:13 +0000 UTC]
Halo actually looks adorable when shes afraid xD
Looks like right out of a cutscene, beautiful work!
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HaloLune In reply to Tank-Dragon [2020-04-06 12:50:09 +0000 UTC]
Little scardey cat.
Usually she isnt easely scared. Espechally not when civilized.
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Tank-Dragon In reply to HaloLune [2020-04-06 13:25:00 +0000 UTC]
Cute fwightened kitty.
I mean she doesn't look civilized here xD
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HaloLune In reply to Tank-Dragon [2020-04-06 17:59:06 +0000 UTC]
No shes not. I want to draw shots of how she learns it to be.
Its wholesome shet
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Tank-Dragon In reply to HaloLune [2020-04-06 18:47:03 +0000 UTC]
I'm just picturing a movie montage of her learning xD
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HaloLune In reply to Tank-Dragon [2020-04-07 13:45:59 +0000 UTC]
*eye of the tiger starts playing*
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HaloLune In reply to Tank-Dragon [2020-04-07 13:56:54 +0000 UTC]
*bassboosting and earrape intensifies*
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DragonPhoenix790 [2020-04-06 06:53:16 +0000 UTC]
Okay now i could understand how they met each other! But what a very impressive story you made it here. And even saw this scene that will represent of the story, I am now feel interested into this and it was inspiring! Great job on it and keep it up the wonderful work!
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Xyeliss [2020-04-06 05:43:14 +0000 UTC]
I love how in the pic she’s like “What is this sorcery!?”
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HaloLune In reply to Xyeliss [2020-04-06 05:44:59 +0000 UTC]
To keep in mind she doesnt know how to behave normal. XD Let alone talk
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