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Description CT-2519/8443(Sao): "What's the play, boss?
CT-7427/1892(Ram'ser): "Local law enforcement want to storm the place, show us that they can handle this. Show us that they don't need the help of the Republic or it's clone army"
CT-7765/3265(Beten): "Fair enough, as long as they don't mind if the hostages come out alive or not. I've seen those guys shoot. It's... well it's pitiful boss."
CT-7427/1892(Ram'ser): "Copy that. We've got all routes in and out of the building locked down, spycams show that they're unaware that you're up there. We've also got access to the buildings systems so we can track their every movement and we know where they've got the hostages, uploading it to your HUD now. Up to you boys how you do this"
CT-2519/8443(Sao): "Nice one, boss. Oookie dokie, what do we have here?"
CT-7765/3265(Beten): "Amateurs. Look, they've got the hostages in this central room here, I'm assuming that's a locked door because there's no guards, the place is a maze and they have no quick way to get to them."
CT-2519/8443(Sao): "They've had an hour and all they've done is barricade the bottom floor and round up the civvies. No mines, no explosives, no traps. Rookies."
CT-7427/1892(Ram'ser): "Well they are smugglers so this is all new to them. I trust you two have a plan because these fine ladies and gentleman are getting antsy."
CT-2519/1892(Sao): "Tell them to go for a caf, we'll have this wrapped up by the time they get back."
CT-7765/3265(Beten): "lines secured and safeties off. 3,2,1 let's jam!"
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Testing out a new sketchbook and I've had a pic on my phone that I've wanted to use for a while, so here you go. 

I don't like how the scanner made the colours look weird.
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Comments: 11

zang-zip [2018-10-04 05:09:55 +0000 UTC]

Another post I neglected for too long!  This one is so awesome.  Their helmet-comm dialog is so much fun.  The confidence in their own abilities these 184th blokes have might seem like hubris in a way, but you just know they can back it up.


The pose and details are also great.  This is one of the few of your drawings I actually thought of some (potentially) useful feedback.  Before I saw the real-life photo you included, I thought the troopers were simply repelling down the sheer face of a wall (60's Batman and Robin style).  That is, I thought the picture was oriented top to bottom and we were looking at them side-on, rather than looking up at them from below as they're coming down mid-swing.  Now that I know, it's easy to tell what's really going on, but I wonder if a few little details might illustrate the perspective more clearly.  Other than drawing more of the building, I'm not sure what that would be.  Maybe something flying above them (a bird, larty, droid cam or something).  I don't know.  I wish I had something more useful to offer, but that's what you get from a stick-figure artist!


Anyway, I love the piece.  Ready for more clone action whenever you've got it!

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halonut117 In reply to zang-zip [2018-10-05 01:53:04 +0000 UTC]

Feedback is always welcome A droid cam hovering above them would've been a cool feature and a nice way to make the perspective clearer, it's something I can use in the future

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Milvina [2018-08-14 19:26:54 +0000 UTC]

Very good!

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Thedreadedpixel [2018-08-14 17:04:19 +0000 UTC]

Anyone remember starwars commando?
Anyhow this makes me want a rainbow six siege styled starwars game

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DC-26 [2018-08-14 10:32:34 +0000 UTC]

You get a lot done with those lines of dialogue!  The minimalist background is absolutely perfect for this piece.  Sets the scene, but lets us focus on the troopers.

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Spottedchest [2018-08-14 06:06:00 +0000 UTC]

Yay, clones to the rescue!


You did well with the poses, and I love the little story excerpt. Like always, it makes me want to know more about the characters and the situation they're in

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DC-26 In reply to Spottedchest [2018-08-14 10:31:19 +0000 UTC]

Totally agreed!  Imagine if he did a full story!

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halonut117 [2018-08-14 04:03:34 +0000 UTC]

 
Here's the reference pic I used. No idea who took it

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tomthebomb2001 [2018-08-14 04:03:11 +0000 UTC]

Looks sick man keep up the good work

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halonut117 In reply to tomthebomb2001 [2018-08-14 04:05:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'll try

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tomthebomb2001 In reply to halonut117 [2018-08-14 23:33:10 +0000 UTC]

Np dude

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