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hankinstein — Compozerz Story p. 8

Published: 2008-05-30 16:23:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 5673; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 30
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Description I really enjoyed this page. I like the dialog a lot, for one thing.
There are some great one liners in here, I think.

I also like that Brahms is really taking on the father figure role...well, all the guys personalities are represented here, I think. We see how mean and sarcastic Lud is, Wolfgang's giggling at him in panel three, but in panel four when Lud gets thumped by Joe, Wolfgang straightens up...Felix, the kind hearted one, Freddie, the uber-sensitive one. Yep, they are all captured here. Another big reason I really liked this page.

Joe was originally just going to say "Stop making Freddie Cry" in the last panel, but the rest of it came to me as I was writing the words in the speech bubble. I thought that improved it a lot.

A lot more humor than the last page! And it's gonna get funnier (and more outrageous. Trust me on that one).

I am having a blast doing these, and I regret to say I am neglecting some things I really need to do around the house...and car maintenance...that kinda thing. No wonder so many artists are slobs.

Anyhow, hope you like it.

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Comments: 32

IrishBeckyCartoons [2017-01-25 19:08:39 +0000 UTC]

You're a BAD BOY, Ludwig

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yuetu-chan [2015-10-07 22:24:56 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha! Ludwig, you...

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3Fangs [2014-03-08 12:40:49 +0000 UTC]

Still love the "scary restroom" line!
And I'll bet Wolfie was glad he hadn't thrown his coat away!

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LadyBonnet [2013-03-03 22:30:30 +0000 UTC]

"LIGHT THAT SUCKER!" You said it Ludwig!

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acla13 [2011-05-16 20:10:52 +0000 UTC]

OMG... The last panel is simply a real card. Poor Freddie.

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Chopinetto [2011-02-21 19:59:36 +0000 UTC]

I'm probably annoying you with comments XD

Last panel is so awesome!!! Yeah, Brahms is the youngest of them all and he's like...the master of all the old people...it's amusing!

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hankinstein In reply to Chopinetto [2011-02-21 20:00:32 +0000 UTC]

Yeah isn't that ironic (or something?)

And no, you can never annoy me with comments. Comment yer lil' heart out, kiddo.

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Chopinetto In reply to hankinstein [2011-02-24 19:32:14 +0000 UTC]

Okay then!!!

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Taggerung12 [2011-01-31 21:25:51 +0000 UTC]

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ClassicRocker47 [2009-11-18 03:48:24 +0000 UTC]

Beethoven made Freddie cry! D: xD
Your art is amazing by the way. I absolutely love your style.

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disny07 [2008-06-12 23:04:26 +0000 UTC]

May I first apologize for taking forever to review. We have Finals in school this week, and studying is pure torture.

Lol, this was great. Poor Freddie. Beethoven was so mean. Yet I still love him anyway. That last panel is pure awesomeness. Locking him in the scary restroom would be great. And Felix is so sweet. I really am loving him more and more.

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hankinstein In reply to disny07 [2008-06-12 23:29:07 +0000 UTC]

Hey no apologies neccesary! I understand finals, totally...I been through college, I can relate!!
It was fun making Freddie cry (I know, that sounds mean, but it was...sorry, Fred).
Yeah Felix is quite a guy, ain't he? You can always put in a vote for him on my 'Who is your fave Compozer' poll!
Thanks for reading and commenting!!

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Stellica [2008-06-01 08:37:50 +0000 UTC]

lol "i'll lock you in the scary restroom"

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hankinstein In reply to Stellica [2008-06-01 16:29:11 +0000 UTC]

Yeah that line and Beeth's 'cookya up and eatcha' line were my faves...

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JNels [2008-05-31 13:12:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh God, that last line was pure gold! Spur of the moment inspiration, eh?

Actually, I can see why this one is one of your faves. It's excellent! You're spot-on with the dialog for the characters, and I like the fact that we can see all of them at once.

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hankinstein In reply to JNels [2008-05-31 15:07:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
Man, seriously, I was giggling out loud while drawing this page. And yeah I like to try and get everyone on every page, at least right in the beginning.

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lollicat [2008-05-30 22:22:56 +0000 UTC]

aww poor Freddie...

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hankinstein In reply to lollicat [2008-05-30 22:27:34 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. Kinda makes you wanna thump Lud yourself, huh?

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lollicat In reply to hankinstein [2008-05-30 22:35:44 +0000 UTC]

haha just a little...

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3Fangs [2008-05-30 21:30:08 +0000 UTC]

*LMAO* "Brilliance...sheer brilliance!" XD Lud looks like he took a perverse pleasure saying that! *ROFL* I'm lovin' every minnit of this!

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hankinstein In reply to 3Fangs [2008-05-30 21:32:35 +0000 UTC]

Gracias, amiga.
Glad you're liking it. I am really really having so much fun doing this. Maybe *too* much fun...hehe
More is on the way!!

And yeah I loved Lud's line about eating freddie. Lud's such a dillhole. Haha

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TheDauphine [2008-05-30 20:44:07 +0000 UTC]

I love how Joe whacks Lud in the back in the head.

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hankinstein In reply to TheDauphine [2008-05-30 20:56:12 +0000 UTC]

That was fun to draw.

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LilDash [2008-05-30 20:28:25 +0000 UTC]

Mozart's face on the last panel... LOL XD

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hankinstein In reply to LilDash [2008-05-30 20:42:02 +0000 UTC]

Yeah like he's afraid he's gonna be thumped in the head too...hehe

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LilDash In reply to hankinstein [2008-05-30 20:45:46 +0000 UTC]

cute ^^

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hankinstein In reply to LilDash [2008-05-30 20:55:56 +0000 UTC]

Gracias!

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sideshowjane [2008-05-30 18:39:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for confirming that artists are slobs. Now I have an excuse!

Great work as usual, Amy. Love Beeth's snarkiness, but I fear for poor Freddie. He's like the wimpy kid everyone picked on in grade school. Poor guy needs to learn to stand up for himself.

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hankinstein In reply to sideshowjane [2008-05-30 18:54:24 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I always felt sorry for that kid.

See, I'd wanna protect Freddie. I'd kick anyone's ass who tried to mess with him. hehehe

Thanks for the comment!

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fr33z3dry [2008-05-30 16:34:57 +0000 UTC]

this freddie character is so pathetic

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hankinstein In reply to fr33z3dry [2008-05-30 16:39:28 +0000 UTC]

Yeah he kinda is. But he's so fun to write. Wimpy guys are fun.

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fr33z3dry In reply to hankinstein [2008-05-30 17:04:22 +0000 UTC]

yea i bet

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