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hankinstein — Compozerz Story p. 8
Published: 2008-05-30 16:23:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 5675; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 30
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I really enjoyed this page. I like the dialog a lot, for one thing.There are some great one liners in here, I think.
I also like that Brahms is really taking on the father figure role...well, all the guys personalities are represented here, I think. We see how mean and sarcastic Lud is, Wolfgang's giggling at him in panel three, but in panel four when Lud gets thumped by Joe, Wolfgang straightens up...Felix, the kind hearted one, Freddie, the uber-sensitive one. Yep, they are all captured here. Another big reason I really liked this page.
Joe was originally just going to say "Stop making Freddie Cry" in the last panel, but the rest of it came to me as I was writing the words in the speech bubble. I thought that improved it a lot.
A lot more humor than the last page! And it's gonna get funnier (and more outrageous. Trust me on that one).
I am having a blast doing these, and I regret to say I am neglecting some things I really need to do around the house...and car maintenance...that kinda thing. No wonder so many artists are slobs.
Anyhow, hope you like it.
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Still love the "scary restroom" line!
And I'll bet Wolfie was glad he hadn't thrown his coat away!
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OMG... The last panel is simply a real card. 
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I'm probably annoying you with comments XD
Last panel is so awesome!!! 
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Yeah isn't that ironic (or something?)
And no, you can never annoy me with comments. Comment yer lil' heart out, kiddo.
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Beethoven made Freddie cry! D: xD
Your art is amazing by the way. I absolutely love your style.
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May I first apologize for taking forever to review. We have Finals in school this week, and studying is pure torture.
Lol, this was great. Poor Freddie. Beethoven was so mean. Yet I still love him anyway. That last panel is pure awesomeness. Locking him in the scary restroom would be great. And Felix is so sweet. 
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Hey no apologies neccesary! I understand finals, totally...I been through college, I can relate!!
It was fun making Freddie cry (I know, that sounds mean, but it was...sorry, Fred).
Yeah Felix is quite a guy, ain't he? You can always put in a vote for him on my 'Who is your fave Compozer' poll!
Thanks for reading and commenting!!
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Yeah that line and Beeth's 'cookya up and eatcha' line were my faves...
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Oh God, that last line was pure gold! Spur of the moment inspiration, eh?
Actually, I can see why this one is one of your faves. It's excellent! You're spot-on with the dialog for the characters, and I like the fact that we can see all of them at once.
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Thanks!
Man, seriously, I was giggling out loud while drawing this page. And yeah I like to try and get everyone on every page, at least right in the beginning.
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Yeah. Kinda makes you wanna thump Lud yourself, huh?
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*LMAO* "Brilliance...sheer brilliance!" XD Lud looks like he took a perverse pleasure saying that! *ROFL* I'm lovin' every minnit of this!
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Gracias, amiga.
Glad you're liking it. I am really really having so much fun doing this. Maybe *too* much fun...hehe
More is on the way!!
And yeah I loved Lud's line about eating freddie. Lud's such a dillhole. Haha
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I love how Joe whacks Lud in the back in the head.
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Yeah like he's afraid he's gonna be thumped in the head too...hehe
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Thanks for confirming that artists are slobs. Now I have an excuse!
Great work as usual, Amy. Love Beeth's snarkiness, but I fear for poor Freddie. He's like the wimpy kid everyone picked on in grade school. Poor guy needs to learn to stand up for himself.
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Yeah I always felt sorry for that kid.
See, I'd wanna protect Freddie. I'd kick anyone's ass who tried to mess with him. hehehe
Thanks for the comment!
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Yeah he kinda is. But he's so fun to write. Wimpy guys are fun.
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