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Don't push yourself, oh please don'tI'd hate to see your brow creased
Your smile faded for more than a moment
For my selfish, silly troubles
No, I'd never allow that
I'd rather die than see you discomforted
Not absorbed in your life
Not talking of your concerns to me
Me talking, not listening
How could either of us survive that way?
No, the world would be thrown off kilter
Come to a stop perhaps
Shoved off its axis
Not only would pigs fly, horses would too
What an insane, frightening place it'd be
You off of your important pedestal
You not thinking of just yourself
Me for once not creasing my heavy brow
Me not feeling what you feel because,
Well…
Don't concern yourself, oh please don't
There's nothing wrong, dear
I'm only speaking my heart
No it's not code, not code for a thing
It's as clear as day, don't you see?
I couldn't imagine a breath differently
How could you be yourself otherwise?
How could I learn to love you more than I do?
Especially if you changed to that monster I spoke of
One that doesn't tell me the monotony of its day
When there's everything in the world to talk about
How could either of us survive that way?
Never change that spotless heart of yours
That shinning compassion that torches me so often
Sears me to my very core
Holds me in one comprehensive piece
That eager ear that bends at a moments notice
Oh, how I never have to cry for help!
You're always there, pushing your own worries away
For me
For the moment
For once
Oh, I don't mean once
How ever could I say that!
I mean for the millionth time
Yes, it was just a slip of the tongue
I have no excuse to be making mistakes, though
My life is perfect
Flawless
Untroubled
No slack should be given to me
Not an inch ever
Perfect
It doesn't matter anyways does it?
Ah, my life, no it doesn't
What happens to me
No, of course it doesn't
I've never thought that, not for a second
I've never been so foolish to think that
No, I'm not being facetious
I'm being factual
That degree of difference between the two
Reminds me of the difference between
Well…
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Comments: 5
biochase [2010-07-06 05:16:50 +0000 UTC]
damn! i can't remember a time i read such a strong piece. i totally love this one and understand the feeling so very well.
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HanMaster In reply to biochase [2010-07-06 05:25:47 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the really really nice compliment! I'm glad you like it AND can relate. That is a compliment in itself. I was a bit worried it'd come off too strong, but I guess that's a risk you take.
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biochase In reply to HanMaster [2010-07-06 05:31:57 +0000 UTC]
i definately understand that too but sometimes you need he strength to come out. i have one on here like that this one but its no where near as good.
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HanMaster In reply to biochase [2010-07-06 05:41:11 +0000 UTC]
True that.
And you flatter me too much.
I'll go check yours out for sure.
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biochase In reply to HanMaster [2010-07-06 07:29:56 +0000 UTC]
lol kinda a lot to sort through if you want i'll tell you the title so it would be easier. its called "dear you" but one can never flatter too much, just enough maybe but never too much.
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