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Anne Marie, the beautiful,Was sought by every single lad
Whoever was her quiet desire?
"The sea", she said, "the sea."
Anne Marie, the fortunate,
You cannot imagine the riches she had
What was hidden in her attire?
"The sea", she said, "the sea."
Anne Marie, the brightest mind,
Stacks of books and walls of writing
What was captured in her elegant script?
"The sea", she said, "the sea."
Anne Marie, the sweetest voice,
With the sorrow of eternal fighting
With what melody was she equipped?
"The sea", she said, "the sea."
Anne Marie, the independent,
When gods where mentioned, she'd desist
What deity was beyond her question?
"The sea", she said, "the sea."
Anne Marie, the long-lost soul,
One day walked into the mist
What claimed her, why is she ne'er mentioned?
.."The sea", she said, "the sea."
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Comments: 18
ladylily101 [2011-09-17 13:20:14 +0000 UTC]
I am still forming a tune for this in my head, heh. ^-^
lovely poem <3
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Jungiebumper [2011-08-02 17:37:52 +0000 UTC]
I also think this has a nice dreamy feel. I like that you repeat the line "The sea", she said, "the sea" over and over. It adds to the mood.
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harmonicaaa In reply to Jungiebumper [2012-05-21 17:39:31 +0000 UTC]
Yes!! Affect achieved!
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Ceasarman [2011-07-18 00:53:18 +0000 UTC]
Am I imagining links between this and 'Annabell Lee' ~ Edgar Allan Poe? Similar names and both repeat aspects of the sea and the name
Different structures and I like this a lot
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harmonicaaa In reply to Ceasarman [2012-05-21 17:38:17 +0000 UTC]
Purely coincidental. But now I have to look it up.
I have long since meant to delve into the writings of Mr. Poe, but haven't gotten around to it, so, I guess this will be a good staring point.
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Ceasarman In reply to harmonicaaa [2012-05-22 13:30:22 +0000 UTC]
You really must, its a very good poem. Which says something about yours too I suppose
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harmonicaaa In reply to Ceasarman [2012-06-28 15:55:38 +0000 UTC]
I just found it, and you're right.. weird, eh?
But you know, now I can prance around the room with the thought of "great minds think alike" in my head.
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Ceasarman In reply to harmonicaaa [2012-09-24 12:48:55 +0000 UTC]
I'm sure Mr Poe would be equally chuffed
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Ceasarman In reply to harmonicaaa [2013-01-19 09:57:32 +0000 UTC]
Secretly he dreams of being you
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RequiemsandReveries [2011-07-16 20:06:30 +0000 UTC]
This is gorgeous and the repetition really works. lovely
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spiffy143 [2011-07-12 22:21:04 +0000 UTC]
Very well written. I feel a connection to this because my first and middle names are Annie Marie.
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harmonicaaa In reply to spiffy143 [2011-07-13 17:39:47 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. (: Funny, how much words mean to us, isn't it?
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africanpearl [2011-07-11 18:43:55 +0000 UTC]
This has a very dreamy mystical feel about it when read. And for some reason, the name fits with the poem! Glad you're back!
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harmonicaaa In reply to africanpearl [2011-07-13 17:37:07 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, I tried. And I am so glad to be back as well.
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